Douluo: Landed 98K, Starting with Jungle Knife

If you want to write, write well. Why can't you walk when you see a woman? Growing up in the forest, I would instinctively be wary of the outside world. Just because Hu Liena is good-looking, do I indulge her like this? As mentioned earlier, Bibi Dong, Gui Mei, and Yue Guan saved you, so it's good if you don't reject them. After all, they saved you, awakened martial arts souls for you, hunted soul rings for you, and Bibi Dong wiped your body and dressed you. You don't reject these three, and it's normal to have a good impression of them, but are you still so familiar with others? Aren't you afraid of being suspected by others? When you first met Hu Liena, you didn't resist no matter how hard she bullied you? And give her something just to please her? You didn't even give Bibi Dong as a gift, but you gave it to Hu Liena? The beginning of the writing is quite good. When I return to the Wuhun Palace, I straighten my hips and write a book just for self-pleasure, without considering the actual situation at all. I don't know about others, but I can't accept it anyway, so I gave it a bad review and abandoned the book.

The heroine Bibi Dong is confirmed, so collect it. It's best to collect all three beauties of Wuhundian 😍😍😍 It would be better if LSP's dream is to have another kitten or something.

I made me vomit when I wrote about returning to Wuhun Palace. A person who has been living in the forest is actually kind to Hu Liena? Why should I give Hu Liena any good things when Bibi Dong doesn't have them like Hu Liena? The self-titled article really made people vomit

Do the heroines include Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue, Hu Liena, Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing and others?

The more I watch it, the more boring it becomes. Why do you always write such boring plots? Why do Douluo's female supporting characters seem to have lost their minds when meeting them? You are the protagonist, and there is no need for these female supporting characters to fall in love with you. Just when you meet Ning Rongrong in the Star Dou Forest, I want to ask you, what are you here for? , The first meeting is excusable, and the second coincidence is also justified, but why can you write about Ning Rongrong escaping the protection of Sword and Bone Douluo and meeting the protagonist again? You can't write more about the protagonist's training process. After meeting twice, you have to continue writing. The protagonist is not a stallion. What do you think?

I think the only poisonous point is the age of the soul ring. You said one ring lasted for a thousand years and you still said it was in the past (martial soul talent). What's the next thing? You want the third ring to be 300,000 years? Does the fourth soul ring take 40 million years? Still want to kill yourself? This is so ridiculously large that it might as well be one thousand years in the first ring, five thousand in the second ring, and ten thousand in the third ring. This seems to explain the martial soul talent. When I saw Chapter 67, I had no desire to continue reading.

This book is quite good. The author should not be too lazy, otherwise he will seem like... He understands everything. (The one with the auspicious beast)

There has been no update for so many days. Why don't you update a few more chapters?

Have you heard about stallion eunuch? Scatter flowers

The interaction with Hu Liena after returning to Wuhun Hall felt extremely poisonous. It is even more disgusting for a six-year-old child to do all kinds of messy things and travel through time. The results of this novel are really not unfair at all.

Hahaha, MD's introduction amused me.

Brother, have you done enough cheating? How afraid are you of death?

Whether you are happy or not, it is a good article if you can make yourself happy. It looks ok so far, the author will update 🙂

When I saw the setting of a soul ring that can absorb 100 times its own level, I just thought, are you here to be funny? In this case, level 10 is 1,000 times, level 20 is 100 times 2,000 years, and your level 100 level is only 10,000 years. You are so funny.

I want to say why the evil god hook externally applied soul bone is written in front. Isn't it better to have a tail instead? Can't you write well?

Why is it that I seem to have seen the plot introduction of your novel elsewhere, especially the distraction control method of the Qibao Glazed Sect and the interaction with the young master of the Qibao Glazed Sect? It is 80% similar to the plot of another novel.