The Heavens Began with Da Feng's Watchman

Judging from the results of Dafeng, he wrote Yang Shen's system, and he kept insisting on changing the world line, which is useless. The plot is not exciting at all, but is illogical and unpleasant all the time.

The protagonist's IQ is 0... He has a golden finger but doesn't use it. How can he practice like others? I'm really speechless.

The pressure was quite severe. . . . What level is Yangshen? . . What level is Da Feng? . . . Are you trying to pull it to a flat line? ? ? ? The writing quality is there, but the level is not correct 😒😒😒😒

You can write Chen Dong's book without being invincible, without qualifications, without humanity, but you can't without integrity.

I feel like the protagonist Xu Qi'an is a dog-licker, and the nanny is the protagonist. You have a system that is so much better than Xu Qian's, he is just a time traveler, don't you care? Advance your layout, improve your strength and then fight the boss. I wonder what use Xu Qian has to the protagonist? Calling 666 as a younger brother? There is no need to spend too much time on Xu Qian, just write a little bit. You even confessed your identity as a time traveler to him. You two are from the same earth. Are you so nice to him? Zhu Tianliu has many opportunities to travel to the parallel world of the earth, and Xu Qi'an is not special at all.

The protagonist, who is completely brainless, tries not to improve his strength, but just plays for fun, and ends up getting beaten up and called daddy. It grosses me out. Grass.

You can just copy the original text of Tomb of Gods. The protagonist doesn't have to appear. I can copy the original text of Chen Dong for several days in a row. I can also write this novel.

! ! ! ! Da Feng fellow, I'll go! ! ! ! I'm really excited now! ! ! ! ! Is this a lifetime series? ! Really, The Watcher is the most satisfying novel I have read in so many years. I really miss the days when I stayed up late to watch Dafeng. I still can't forget the determination of "a young man whose promise is worth a thousand pieces of gold" and his passion for "Wei Gong, I won't be an official anymore". The courageous chivalry of "Asking for the Future" is Xu Tongluo's salute to the east after killing his superior with his sword. It is Xu Tongluo's inheritance of the Tsing Yi that kills the foolish emperor for the sake of peace in the world. It is Xu Yinluo's single-handed formation to cut a way for the people behind him! It is the tearful expression of "I am celebrating a year, I have nothing to do today, I just listen to music on the hook",,,, and there are many, many more. This book may be criticized by many people, but it is also the juvenile detainee in my heart. It is almost the pinnacle of the cool literature genre. So I am really looking forward to the author of this fanfic writing that feeling. Come on, author! ! !

It looked okay from the front, but the first world grossed me out, like a nanny. Damn, is Ning Caichen his father? I didn't talk about it when I came to give him money. We have only known each other for a few days and we have a good relationship. After defeating the tree demon, he actually gave me a skill. I just want to say that if you lick a dog, you will die a good death.

The protagonist doesn't participate in the plot at all. Even if he does, it's just a trivial plot. It's not exciting, doesn't show off, doesn't accept girls, and it's boring to watch.

You should be bolder when you write Da Feng. Don't be afraid of the original author. After reading more than ten chapters, I still feel like you can't let go.

The writing is very boring! The plot development is really just at the door, no excitement, no sense of participation

Nanny flow protagonist? Is Ning Caichen your father? So generous? Give a girl a gift

The ink, and it's the old lady-style ink, the action ink, the rhythm ink, the protagonist's character ink, the character ink, the whole thing stands out inexplicably. They are already in love with Munan Zhifang, but they still spend the whole day with Princess Zhenbei. Where is Princess Zhenbei? Diaphragm response. His mind is weird, like a broken string. The future master must be soaked in the water, and he can't catch it at all. Looking forward to the next more progressive book. Abandon books.

What kind of cause and effect does a female ghost have? If you deliberately show off your lust and seduce others to commit lust for the sake of greed, do you deserve the punishment? Just living an ignoble life and talking nonsense

This book is about real estrangement. The protagonist is someone else's nanny. He gives them whatever they need. After only getting along for a few days, they become brothers and sisters, sharing their hearts and souls.

This novel is so funny. Yuanshi Tianzun, who can destroy heaven and earth, went to the small world and couldn't smash a brick.

There is no need to follow the protagonist in the plot of the original work. Those minions who should be killed can be killed directly, and those who can be promoted can be promoted. It is more serious to write more female characters. Who wants to watch those villains? Just end it in one line.

The Book of Heaven Covering is really rubbish. It inexplicably recruits female slaves. What an old routine. They come to capture the protagonist, the protagonist fights back and kills her, and then takes her as a subordinate and passes on her skills. The result is that the protagonist inexplicably gets two losers, and those two people have no losses at all. Instead, they are listed as big bosses and directly prosper. This is an old routine from many years ago, and it's disgusting to still write it. And is that a female slave? A harem is a harem, and slave girls are given back. There was also an inexplicable preaching to Yin Qingwu, and he hooked up with her out of nowhere. How come he has never seen a woman before? The plot is also dragging and not crisp at all, it really relies on the defense.

To be honest, no matter how much you read these original plots, we will almost run out of them. I just looked at the titles and haven't subscribed to several chapters. Who wants to read all the original plots? Why don't you just travel through the heavens honestly? The protagonist has such a high starting point and has defeated all the invincible opponents in Da Feng. Is there anything else to write about the Da Feng plane? The number of words for "repay the water" is too high.

Fang Qingxue, who was in the realm of immortality, was challenged by Hua Tiandu, who was at the tenth level of supernatural power, and the fight was back and forth. Was the Lightning Mother too weak, or Hua Tiandu was too strong? ! Is what you wrote reasonable?

I heard that Da Feng's fandom was unable to sign a contract due to copyright issues?

It's a very speechless novel. It's too watery. What can you do in a second? It took me five or six chapters to finish it, but I still didn't finish it.

There are relatively few Dafeng themes, so this effort is too much. If you follow the plot, you can make every character look like a junior high school student.

Realm

I just skipped through dozens of chapters when I suddenly thought of a question. Why doesn't the protagonist practice the Yang Shen system in one step and start directly with the I Ching?

I saw a video today and I have some ideas about the heroine, but I'm really afraid that I won't be able to write it well. So fellow book friends, wait for me to think about it for a while. Book friends, can you guess who I want to write about? Tip: The novel sword is coming!

I have been in the Dafeng world for too long and it has always been my daily routine. No matter how good it looks later, I can't stand it anymore.

Do you have any recommendations from other Da Feng Da Geng fans?

I haven't watched it for a long time, and I actually got on Daily Guide