Daofu Murderous Intention

The next day, when I was on the Immortal Platform, I heard the roar of cranes in the air. I raised my head and looked at each other. There were many colors in the sky, but I saw a pillar of golden light coming from me. On the other side of the golden light is Xiongtai. "Brother Tao, long time no see! I'm here to pick you up!" "Long time no see!"

After reading it, please give me your opinion. I feel that the pace of the writing is a bit tight. I killed two mini-bosses in six chapters, and the monsters came one after another. I originally thought that the protagonist could escape from the wilderness and take a break, but unexpectedly, a little monster guarding the tower appeared... The pen and ink were almost spent on the description of fighting and golden fingers. The protagonist's mood changed a little too fast. He quickly adapted to the environment and even started to talk dirty to the mini-boss in the first three chapters. The little monster guarding the tower was subdued in just one chapter. It's so fast, it doesn't feel like reading a novel, more like playing an RPG game.

Short,

Generally speaking, the writing is relatively smooth. The previous plot design is a little awkward, with some traces of assembly line work and insufficient foreshadowing. However, all points have been taken into account. A little foreshadowing would be enough. For example, the sudden conclusion that the murderer is hiding in the temple is a twist that really makes people jump to their waists. In addition, the BOSS battle is a bit of a mental challenge, um, but it's not a big problem. The golden fingers will be more ink later, which will make it more enjoyable. Raise a wave first.

An acquaintance who did not want to be named passed by.

Code words make me happy, code words make me want to stop! 🌙

Come on! This kind of novel is better to be darker.

It's beautiful. I have never read such a beautiful book. The imagination is as wild as the imagination, the plot arrangement is compact and reasonable, and the foreshadowing is as smooth as a snake's gray thread. It is a wonderful novel.

Awesome, such a great guy, his writing style and imagination are so good! !

Suck, suck, suck😃

The writing is excellent and the plot is compact and reasonable 🌹

It looks good, waiting for the update~~

Ahem, let's occupy the building first, and I'll be venomous later.

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😍It is rare to have no golden fingers