Riding and Slashing Simulator in the Lord of the Rings

The orcs you think of: powerful and numerous. Darkness in the Mountains Orcs in total battle; there are many. And it all depends on the giant arms The elf you think is: handsome in appearance, superb sword skills, perfect shot, good style and strict discipline. The Elves in Total War: We cannot afford a war of attrition. I just formed a full set There are three full sets of Kiriyama Orcs next to me. The Luohan you thought: The whole army attacked! Lohan in Total War: Only Orcs can be defeated. Even the strong orcs can't be defeated. The Gondor you think: In addition to being beaten, you will be beaten The actual Gondor in full war: it is harassed by pirates from the Southern Barbarians all year round to the west, faces the volcano of Mordor to the east, and the capital guards the main route of Mordor's westward march. What you think are the other forces in Mordor: They are eyeing, well-equipped and fighting against the forces of justice In the actual battle: there are no trolls and giant elephants, and the combat effectiveness is directly reduced by 60%. They can't shoot the elves, they can't hold the dwarves with the line, and the equipment is all garbage. It all depends on the automatic spawning of troops when the city is besieged.

It's a very good book so far, very powerful, and it's even more rare considering it's my first time writing online. The writing style is completely passable for a web article. It is generally smooth and natural, and it is very comfortable to read. It does not have the problems of task-oriented dialogue and lack of detailed feedback that often appear in novels written by some students with game backgrounds. Recently, there have been several issues of Qidian recommending several toilet paper books like this. It's a real eye wash for me to read normal novels after reading them too much. I really appreciate the author's description of small-scale conflicts and wars. For a web article, it is wonderful, rhythmic and detailed. This kind of excitement does not mean that the writing is not realistic, but that it is very exciting to read as a web article. There are fewer and fewer new authors who can write good war dramas. Many of the books on the recommendation list in the history section have more war plots than the previous ones. They are either romance novels disguised as history, or purely political and domestic affairs novels. What stood out to me the most was that this book had a very slasher flavor, or rather a Western fantasy flavor. The author is obviously very familiar with games related to Western fantasy backgrounds. Some of the words and dialogues, such as the lord's longhouse and the confessions of Alan and James, have a particularly Western fantasy flavor. It's not that I couldn't write this one down, it's very enjoyable to read. The most recent hack-and-slash novel with this flavor I've seen is The Chronicle of a Horse-Blade Battle. Unfortunately, it went astray after 300,000 words. It wrote a lot of superficial and uninteresting stories about how to get started as a capitalist, and I stopped reading it for a long time. In addition, I suspect that the author may have serialized horse-and-blade novels in tieba before. The simulator's chronicles are really amazing. It reminded me of the feeling of chasing novels in the bar several times... But then again, this book still has its shortcomings. The most obvious thing is that the level is unstable. For example, in a previous chapter, the author introduced the geographical configuration of the camp in the tone of "I". I would comment on this thing in two words: redundant. This kind of writing method in which the author himself comes to fill in the background can be used in traditional novels (but it is not clever), or it can be used in games, but it is completely unnecessary to appear in online articles. This is because web writing uses substitution as a core element. This kind of similar description will bring a sense of tearing and is not suitable for web writing. If you want to write, you can borrow Artiman's words and mention them incidentally when arranging the defense details. This is also called a reasonable word count. Or just don't write it, because the transition will be quick anyway, so it's totally fine not to write it. Another point where the level is obviously unstable is in chapters 29 and 30. These two chapters are really called running accounts. No details have been mentioned carelessly, and the writing has no meaning at all. So at 31, when I finally had the simulator's "running account" to look at, I let out a sigh of relief. In addition, a hidden danger in this book lies in plug-ins. This simulator is set up to be too versatile and powerful. The CD, identity and other restrictions you set have no actual loss at all, so from the reader's point of view, there is no difference from having no restrictions. Even with the focus of space, what you get from plug-ins is still obviously far more than what you get in reality, which will cause your pace to be too fast in the middle and later stages. The inability to reasonably limit the development speed of the protagonist forced the author to forcibly weaken the character, and the plot exploded. This has already ruined many classic online stories. I saw that you only plan to write less than 800,000 words. If so, it may not be a big problem, but in fact, if the pace is slower and the writing is more detailed, it will be very easy to break through one million. Finally, I would like to ask the question of whether the content of the simulator should be written in detail. This thing depends on your own overall grasp of the content of the book, control the length, don't write too much, just write it as a two-world novel in essence. Don't listen to the words of those colleagues and onlookers and rush over it. There are two reasons. First, there is no final conclusion on how to write a plug-in like a simulator. I remember that Lu Bu's book "Life Simulator" has been ordered for ten thousand or almost ten thousand times. What he wrote is very detailed, more detailed than what you wrote, and it does not affect your grades at all. The second is that your plug-in itself is set to be strong and rough. If you don't pave the way through the intermediate process of writing, this book will directly become a brainless and invincible text. And with all due respect, some of your replies look more like jealousy. How can anyone ask you to cut up the book and rewrite it? Even if it is a book with really serious shortcomings that stink, I will at most criticize the book. I won't say anything if the author deletes it, duplicates it, or rewrites it. Generally speaking, this book is outstanding in terms of quality among the current Qidian new books. It is already better than the 70% to 80% of Qidian authors who have failed. I hope it can be completed smoothly and at a high level. In fact, the most difficult thing for novice writers is to serialize for a long time. Every starting writer has moments when passion and literary thoughts flow. The problem is that once the serialization time is extended, dull moments will eventually account for the majority. How to rely on an outline to keep the level of the novel from declining significantly when the ideas are flat, and how to balance real work and boring coding during a creative slump. These are things that can only be deeply felt after writing a novel yourself.

A character written by the old pigeon who rides and slashes becomes an excellent lord with the help of the simulator, fights with other forces in the world of Middle-earth, and then participates in an epic adventure. The story in this novel is far from that. Why not read it?

Take good care of yourself and come back as soon as possible. I will read other books to support you😁

The Lord of the Rings TV series is not available in China, otherwise I would file a complaint. The entire series is only available in black and white. I will file a complaint against Amazon for discriminating against Asians. Anyway, they shouldn't be able to escape the American zzzq😏🤭

It's too slow, too little, and not enough to watch. Just keep it. If you have a monthly pass, you will get it. I also have some suggestions: 1. Middle-earth is very good in terms of historical depth and world structure. Using this setting reduces the difficulty of writing itself and is very attractive to a specific audience. This is also a major advantage of this book. However, Tolkien's story has not been completely written, which means that the historical setting is very long, but the original work is not long enough. Therefore, in this limited-length scroll, more secondary settings and original works must be expanded horizontally. The most important point is the development of the territory. If you blindly follow the plot to catch up with the progress, you will eventually find that the "plot" or "time" is not enough, unless you open a new world or purely original work, but this risk is very high. So what we're talking about here is actually a matter of rhythm. 2. When talking about territory development, we are talking about the rewriting and secondary design of the riding and slashing content. At present, it seems that the content in the simulator is not very good, and readers are not very interested in this kind of small unit drama story, because it is really difficult to stand out. In the case where most readers largely skip the simulator part, and if they want to continue to play the attraction of the riding and slashing element and its positive role in the development of the story, then territory development is the best choice, including military and diplomatic operations against surrounding areas. This is imperative if you want to continue to attract the audience of horseback and slashers. 3. There are too many excellent online works for reference on territorial development, which are rooted in the sense of gain and accomplishment brought by farming. Then the content that can be written is not limited to games, but can be added through secondary designs. For example, the recent birth policy and martyrs' cemetery are very good trends for change. The planning, process and results of farming, the discovery of problems and improvements, etc. Are all important aspects that can attract readers. The feedback from the outside world is the sense of farming identity, such as the attitude of human countries towards the wilderness, the status of diplomacy and trade, the degree of folklore, etc. You can even switch perspectives from time to time, such as what it is like to see this emerging force from the perspective of a small person like the Traveling Merchant of Gondor. There are so many things that can be brilliant when writing territory content. You must open up your mind and change your perspective. The perspective not only makes the description of the territory more vivid and perceptible, but also plays a very important role in shaping the characters and filling out the worldview structure, which means that the world is more real and has a sense of depth. You can imagine it as I said, and then let the readers feel it. 4. Discuss the issue of intermission with the author. I have always believed that interludes are very important to a novel. Firstly, they are a valve for adjusting the rhythm and can be freely controlled. Secondly, the intermission does not affect the main plot, and the author's talents can be freely used, and the play can be interesting. Third, it can be used to transition to water when the carvin is in the state, hehe. The current simulator can actually play a certain role in the interlude to a certain extent, but the correlation between the simulation and the main plot is too weak, and it is useless to skip the play. In fact, a lot of content about territorial development is suitable for writing in intermissions, that is, part of the content is dealt with in detail in a small space. As for how to write intermissions and what intermissions are, the author can spend some time Baidu. 5. Finally, let's briefly discuss the pros and cons of this book. The first is the collision between horseback slashing and middle-earth. The theme is not only creative, but also has a very large space for entry. The two basic elements have already achieved success, so they have an advantage in terms of popularity. Second, the two themes have their own audience groups, and the viscosity is definitely not small, so the audience base is guaranteed. Third, the excellent structure of the two themes reduces the difficulty of writing in terms of world view and historical line. The author can have more energy to focus on the second design and originality, integration and improvement, character creation and detailed description, so the difficulty of getting out of the circle is lowered. The disadvantage is that the original materials are not enough, that is, the length of the Middle-earth works is not enough. The author wants to use the simulator to open up more writing space, and even make up for the shortcomings of Middle-earth history to a certain extent. This idea is good, but if you want readers not to skip large sections, you can only strengthen the connection between the simulation and reality, and work hard on rewards and personal growth. In this way, coupled with excellent short skits in the simulator world, they can complement each other instead of two skins. As for writing skills and character creation, this is something I have to practice slowly and need to think about while writing. It is okay so far ~ but if I want to stand out, I need to work more on the characters. At present, the story is slowly unfolding, and the characters are entering a process of becoming more and more full. It depends on the story. How to use the details in it, such as the image of Gandalf. At the same time, some small quirks make him more vivid. If you grasp a few main characters and shape them well, as long as they are not flat, it will be successful. As for the group portrait, it is difficult. It requires skillful hands or accumulation slowly. Finally, I would like to tell all book friends that the author chose the form of simulator due to the lack of space in Middle-earth itself. If it were replaced with a system task flow as some suggestions, then this book would walk a tightrope between collapse and shortness. I unknowingly wrote so much, and I didn't expect that I would be so excited. I really want to see such a collision between Cavalry Blade and Lord of the Rings. It's even rarer if the author is good enough, so the author has to work hard. If this book is well written, it will be even more popular next time!

Who doesn't love elves 🤓

It's rare to see a book about Middle-earth. After reading the first seven chapters, I can see that the author is writing seriously. I support it. I voted for 🌹 The logic and details of the protagonist are online. Unfortunately, I have never played Mount and Blade. Can the author include a picture in the corresponding comment area when the character appears or introduces the character. (For Middle-earth characters, I can still match them) Except for Jamila, it's hard for me to search for what they look like on Baidu 🙄 I haven't left enough impression now. In the future, there will be more characters, and they all have long lists of names, and I really can't tell them apart 😠

There are 100,000 words. I have created a group. If you are interested, you can add it to 739020905. Thank you.

In fact, there is no need to rush to finish the book. The power system of The Lord of the Rings is not high, and it is also suitable for some low-magic mods of cavalry and slashing. It is not easy for the protagonist to rely on cavalry and slashing to gnaw down the territory bit by bit. The orcs in Gambada and Misty Mountain have a base number of hundreds of thousands. After putting it in the Lonely Mountain, the number of words will be quite a lot. Before The Lord of the Rings, some plots about the fight with the Rune Landlanders can be properly included. There is also the Lord of the Rings. You can write more, come on 2 million words! 😁

To encourage procreation, shouldn't the protagonist lead by example?

The Lord of the Rings map, I originally wanted to upload it in high definition, but I guess it was too big and it couldn't be uploaded. 😭

It's the end of the story. Although the plot is indeed unattractive after the Five Armies, it is better than the one next door, The Elf of the Ring + Medieval Warhammer Species, which is set in Westeros. At least the author has finished writing it, and there are no eunuchs.

The comment section of the first ten chapters is full of Warhammer combat power addicts. Just a matter within the galaxy, the local gang has been bragging about it for 10 years, and the combat power is compared with the Lord of the Rings?

Gondor armor is so beautiful

The plot of this book is really uncomfortable to read. It is neither a movie nor a physical book. This is a novel. It hurts, which means it is not fun to find. Coupled with the update problem, the performance has dropped. It was almost two thousand even before, but how much is left now?

It was originally intended for the Cavalry and Cutting Corps, and the author's writing is not bad. But just abandoning the territory and taking risks when the territory is developing is the biggest failure. Take risks in the simulator and take risks outside the simulator.

Just some of my personal opinions. I personally feel that the description of the world of riding and slashing can be slightly reduced, and the writing style of the world of The Lord of the Rings can be slightly reduced. At the same time, there can be more original plots, deeper depictions of some farming plots (in the World of the Rings), and more emotional descriptions of the characters. For the heroine, You don't have to write it at the end. After all, it's still a long time. As a king, you need to have an heir and a queen. The description of the male protagonist feels too rigid and the character setting is too positive. The male protagonist is a king, not a brave man who saves the world. In this regard, the author still needs a deeper portrayal.

It's amazing, this book is still being updated? Okay, okay, pretty perseverant, no eunuchs.

The protagonist's territory

Is the author interested in writing about the medieval warhammer background? I feel that the knight-and-slash system plus warhammer or the Lord of the Rings system plus warhammer background would be pretty good, but I have never seen any novels on this theme. There is one hero who is invincible.

Although it was rushed and there was some time break in between, it can be regarded as the first Lord of the Rings fanfic that I have finished. Finished with flowers🌹🌹🌹

I gave it a monthly pass. In my eyes, the author's writing is pretty good, and it can be considered a masterpiece. The writing in the early and middle stages is so delicate. The ending was a bit rushed. But the writing has the same flavor as my ideal Middle-earth. In fact, there are many other races and humanoid races in Middle-earth, and the world is actually very huge. It's just that the mainstream forces are the four races of elves, humans, dwarves, and orcs competing for hegemony. The elves just want to stay quietly, because they are cursed and are unwilling to go out and run around. Dwarves are just a bunch of weird-tempered engineering men. Human beings are everywhere, but they are also scattered, with few unified forces uniting them. I recently bought the Lord of the Rings trilogy novels and plan to study the history of the novels in detail. Come on, author, your writing is very to my liking. I support you. Many new readers can't stand your writing techniques. The style of novels experienced by new readers in the past 10 years is much different from the style when Qidian started to rise. At that time, there were high-quality products all over the place, but now they are just looking for treasures in the garbage dump. It all depends on luck and my appetite, so I can barely watch it. Come on, author😁

The author might as well write a book about it. I searched and found that there are several copies of Mount and Blade Game of Thrones, but I haven't found one of the Mount and Blade World of Warcraft titles so far. The author can be the first to try something new.

Let's start a new book from the First Era 🙏

When I saw the part about enfeoffing Bard, I asked, is it really going to be a county? Will there be other vassals? I think Western Fantasy has to have the flavor of Western Fantasy. Besides, the fate of reformers is usually not very good, so I'm asking if there will still be enfeoffments.

Chapter 166 Who is the dead Abinas?

Are there any other good Middle-earth fan works that I can read? ?

When did Wilderness Town change its name to Fishlet? Did I look too quickly and didn't notice?

Laugh, I'm on the poison again. 🤓🐶Aren't the newly updated chapters no longer in Middle-earth?