Knocking on the Heavenly Gate with a Sword

Author, how many novel comment sections have you visited? I've seen it on several novels.

As a novice author, the overall story is pretty good. There are some minor flaws, such as the wording. A small sentence is too dramatic, and it looks like a line discussing online game equipment. Also, there are some things that don't need to be explained too much. You have to learn to just go to the point. Too much is easy to be verbose. When you have time, you can read Wangyu's new book Immortal. The genre is very similar. The refinement of language, word choice and atmosphere are worthy of reference.

I suddenly found out that there is a female protagonist, forget it, bye bye

Personally, I suggest that the first few novels should not be too long. You should focus on practicing sentences, focusing on contradictions to push the plot, and writing a complete story. I'll think of a good idea later and write a long story slowly.

Brother, you are constantly updating. Advertising is a waste.

Oh my god, if you practice Qi at the ninth level, you can hit a full-strength blow at the peak of foundation building. Don't talk about the protagonist losing half his life. 🉐, Can this combat power not collapse in the later stage? Funny, there are so many ads that I actually thought it was a good book.

Why don't many people like to read this book? It feels okay🙂

Dear masters and brothers, we are still working the night shift today, but there are relatively many things to do. We will update at around 14:00 tomorrow afternoon.

I have only read thirty chapters so far. The writing is very good. Keep up the good work.

The author supports you. The newspaper seller used to be a street kid and is now very popular. The experience he summarized in writing online articles is very interesting. He mainly highlights the word "cool", but everyone has his own style, and you don't have to follow the path of others.

The author's current update volume makes me panic. Can I give you a monthly vote?

If the little girl were the heroine, she would be very reluctant to let go of Senior Sister Chen.

Why are there all swordsmen with flying swords? There are no swordsman-wielding swordsman novels.

The book I opened in August last year only has more than 100 chapters😓

I'm curious how the author manages to recommend his novels under so many novels, and post them one by one?

Come on brother, even though you are a novice writer, you are doing much better than the average person. I have seen that some people have not commented a lot on Qidian😁

The name "Thunder War Eagle" is really out of the ordinary and feels like a game.

Dear lords and fellow Taoists, we won't update for the rest of the night today. We are going to save it until tomorrow's dinner and post it together. Uh, let's challenge 4,500 words.

What is golden finger? I haven't seen anything after reading Chapter 3

[Books] Borrow the precious treasure to promote the book, "Cleaning the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, I will complete the incomplete skills", mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if the IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a closer look. If you are disturbing, please mute me.

Thank you for your message and tip! Let's encourage each other together! I may have more free time than you, so I write more. It takes several hours to write every day. You have to work hard too!

My brother is still updating it. In this case, it is better to re-open a new book.