Douluo: I Loaded the Odyssey Kayn Voice Pack

Later, I saw that the main character meant the same thing as the fairy grass. Any one of them can upgrade the Seven Treasures Glazed Pagoda into the Nine Treasures. I couldn't comment on it until I watched Ning Rongrong and his father both become the Nine Treasures. From here on, I started to wonder if this book was going to be as mindless as some urban cool novel. You can give the current strain to her father first, and then use some means to ripen it again later. I feel better writing this.

I just read the second chapter, and I suddenly had the idea that I could write a book with Su Yuntao as the protagonist. His specialty is stacking buffs to let many time travelers in, and then Brother Tao will stack buffs for them crazyly to give feedback to himself, and it will be a direct battle between gods.

The more I look at it, the weirder it becomes. You said that you, a genius with three martial souls, did not go to the Wuhun Palace to be a seed, but instead went to work as a dog for a family whose strongest person is level 60 or 70, and your parents and relatives were even taken as hostages. What are you trying to do? Picture the 1 cubic soul guide he gave you? Or the 500 gold soul coins he gave you?

No, Niu Mang and Monkey, these two gatekeepers, are you really writing them as invincible in the world? At the current pace, other ferocious beasts are sucking ice silkworms, and they are not even qualified to absorb these two things. One hundred thousand year Xiongjun Biji made me laugh, why these two ten thousand years are from one hundred thousand years to four to five hundred thousand years, right? 😅 Did you write this thing without reading the information? 😅

It looks so strange. 1. While saying that Jiao Xiaoan's theory is a piece of shit, he also said that if he hadn't cheated, then he would have to follow Jiao Xiaoan's theory to absorb the soul ring. If this is the case, then for the Douluo natives, isn't the theory of prison anus absolutely correct? So why do you say it's a piece of shit? 2. In the original work, after Tang San absorbed the first spirit ring, it seemed to be level 13, but here it becomes level 11 3. The protagonist did not want to have anything to do with Yu Xiaoan, but after absorbing the first spirit ring and coming back, he met Yu Xiaoan, who asked him about the soul ring. He said that he had absorbed a soul ring that was more than 500 years old, but it was actually a soul ring that was more than 800 years old. . But since you have already lied, why not just say it is lower, less than 423 years. He wanted to talk about a soul ring that was more than 500 years old and exceeded the theoretical limit of Jiao Xiaoan, and then attracted Jiao Xiaoan's big attention and reaction! Everyone knows what a dick in prison is like. Once this 500-year-old soul ring comes out, can the protagonist not attract his attention? So later on, the little anal devil in prison was stunned. He felt that the protagonist was lying and wanted to fire the protagonist. Then he started talking about a bunch of nonsense. Isn't this just pure intelligence?

Some mediocre books can reach Sanjiang and reach the top of the monthly ticket list just by relying on money. However, some food and grass jelly are not even approved for signing, so they should go to Beijing.

It was quite fun to watch at first, but as the plot progressed, the supporting characters and the protagonist gradually turned into crazy people, each one more crazy than the last. Sometimes for the sake of plot development, the author can write very outrageous character dialogues and psychological descriptions, and the characters are seriously OOC. This subject matter feels good, so at least let the protagonist be normal, and don't force the plot just for some reason or plot development.

The pig's trotter's three views are also crooked. Even if he had the nerve to mess with Tang San, his three views are also wrong.

Daming, how could Erming have two watchdogs so strong, and they even asked Brigitte to call them supreme

This soul ring configuration makes me uncomfortable. At level 10, the first soul ring hunted alone has a lifespan of 890 years. With such strength, the second soul ring is still a hundred years old! The reason is actually that in the original work, there are only century-old soul beasts but no thousand-year soul beasts.

The title of the book doesn't quite work. A simple book title that is easy to understand and you are more than half done.

, Is completely a YY novel, without plot planning or avoidance of poisonous points or anything like that. It's really strange. Many times he could take advantage of the situation, but he almost got killed by a gangster, and then he ran to Ning Rongrong's house and fainted. According to the settings, it is completely possible to kill soul beasts and level up quickly, but you have to practice slowly. He also helped the poor to kill the gangsters. A man who was set to be the emperor was set up by the gangsters. One thing to say, in all aspects, it is much more poisonous than the original Douluo Dalu. If you write an outline carefully, you can achieve something. When I see it now, I feel purely yyy. I can set the golden finger to be too awesome with my imagination, and then press it hard, which is really disgusting.

There are too many unreasonable and toxic points that give me a headache. Can the author pay more attention to it? As long as the plot and characters are better, I won't post this comment. Finally, I want to ask if the author really has an outline? There's no malice, I'm just disgusted The above is my opinion after reading most of the content, don't comment if you don't like it

The front is fine, but those Xiong Jun in the back actually listen to Da Ming and Er Ming. Why are they called venerable? What nonsense? Two watchdogs, Xiong Jun's cultivation after hundreds of thousands of years, really think that it will come up in ten thousand years?

It's obviously very exciting, why didn't it succeed? And it's not bad either.

First, the author's writing is very good, and it is good food Second, I recently browsed Ning Rongrong, and I feel that the protagonist's style has changed. In Notting Tang San, he was an awesome Klas, but after meeting Ning Rongrong, he turned into a licking dog. (Of course, it may be that I don't like Ning Rongrong, so I feel licking, but in fact there is no licking. ), I think in Ning Rongrong, the protagonist can be a cold male god, because the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect is not a threat to the protagonist for the time being. As for saving a life, you can help Ning Rongrong in the future to repay the life-saving grace. (If you already have the idea of ​​being a son-in-law, there is nothing wrong. I will not say this secondly) There is another possibility. The author's mentality exploded after signing the contract, and he lost his status, so it affected the novel Another point is that I am not saying that this has become a poisonous point, and it does not affect reading. It's just that I personally feel that what I wrote before can be considered excellent, but with Ning Rongrong it became good. Third, the author should try to put it on the shelves again. If it doesn't work, let's reopen it. The money is not shabby and the author cannot use his love to generate electricity. It will not only affect the author's income, but also the author's status and the quality of the work. Finally. The idea of ​​talking dirty is really good, I will bring it with me when I reopen.

The part written by the author about sending Ningfengzhi Xiancao is really poisonous. Qiluo Tulip mainly strengthens the body, while Qiluo Tulip mainly improves the quality of weapons and souls. The two fairy grasses have different effects. As a result, Ning Fengzhi ate the strange velvet Babel Chrysanthemum. Not only did Ning Fengzhi's martial spirit turn into the Nine Treasures Glazed Pagoda, but it also made the martial spirit stronger. Isn't this funny?

The title of the book is too complex and does not attract readers very well. In fact, there is no need to add the words Odyssey to the title of the book, although Odyssey Kayn and Kayn are two completely different people (after all, the Arcana series and the Soul Lotus series are different, and the former is not in the main LoL universe at all). But the words Odyssey themselves cannot attract readers. Even the first time I saw the title of the book, I didn't know whether it referred to the sequel to Iliad or the adventure story of Mario. Even for the subject of Kayn, these three words are still a bit overwhelming. It is better to leave it, or change it to a shorter one, such as Arcane Kayn. The other thing is your speech setting. I only have 50 book membership points, and I have to vote for a monthly ticket before I can speak. This is a book that has just started. Why did you set the speech limit so high, brother🤣.

There are many poisonous points. It is written to make you feel high, but you don't feel high when you read it. You can't grasp the good points. There are many operations to lower your intelligence and combat power.

Author, have you failed to write down your combat power? The Soul Emperor travels thousands of miles in a day? Are you sure you are writing Douluo?

It's too ridiculous for the Ming and Ming dynasties to raise the banner of destroying mankind. Was Di Tian deaf or blind and didn't come out to stop it?

After being persuaded to quit, he actually admitted that he was from the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex, and the Qibao Glazed Sect was already a background force. Why did he insist on admitting that he was from the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex? I'm speechless and embarrassed.

In order to obtain this ghost vine spirit ring that was more than six hundred years old, even the director of Notting College, the forty-level weapon soul sect, worked very hard, relying on his own martial spirit that was incompatible with it, to finally subdue it, allowing Tang San to complete the final kill. I couldn't stand it any longer, so I randomly changed the settings. The dean of Notting Junior College, Yuan Wenming, clearly wrote that he was a level 42 soul sect, but he changed it to a level 50 or so soul king. And level 42 is still the level when Tang San broke through level 20 two or three years later. At this time, it was at most 39 or 40. He directly changed it to level 50 or more. He went to be the principal of a garbage school in a remote town and changed the settings randomly. Fans can create two different designs, but you can't create random ones.

Isn't this what Fierce Beast wrote for his own entertainment?

The author's writing is good, but the handling of my sister and family has always made me uncomfortable. I couldn't stand my problems, so I said goodbye.

It's a book that hasn't been added to the bookshelf for a long time. I stopped reading it when I saw the newest one, but now I see it's still being updated. At the same time, he joined the bookshelf and became the number one in all worlds because he was destined to be a son-in-law and became a saint. The results are so fun.

It's the kind of feeling that looks very strong at first glance, but after a little thought, it seems to be very weak. It's all supported by the quality of the martial soul. First of all, the first soul skill is a long-range attack skill, which looks very strong. In fact, the protagonist has never used it. The most used one is the scythe sweep, which I feel will not be of much use in the future. The second soul skill is a clone, but it has to be controlled by the protagonist in two ways. It has to be multi-purpose, otherwise the actual release will affect the main body's concentration. In fact, without Qibao's distraction method, it is a negative soul skill; the third soul skill is the shadow binding skill, but how can I put it, I feel that it is not worthy of the ten thousand year soul skill. I still have to find a way to link the shadow to the shadow of the opponent. There are prerequisites to bind the opponent? Tang San's fourth soul skill, Blue Silver Cage, can be placed directly under the opponent's feet to restrain the opponent. The protagonist's ten thousand-year soul skill has various limitations; and after the protagonist obtains these three skills, he has basically never used them. In fights, he uses a few self-created skills that come with Kaiyin's martial spirit. If the author really doesn't know how to design skills, he will copy them endlessly according to the game. Why do he have to make some skills that are not very useful and a bit embarrassing? It can only be said that these skills are neither practical nor easy to use, and they are a complete waste of the skill bar.

I suggest that the author join Qian Renxue as the heroine, so that it can better match the conflict between Tang San, and don't force Tang San's god-level protagonist to create his own double god king or super god king. As long as Tang San doesn't die, he can play with Tang San on the lower world as a chessboard. After all, Tang San has too many black spots. If he doesn't destroy the Killing City, Dou 2 doesn't have so many evil soul masters. This is all thanks to Tang San. Maybe Tang San destroyed the Killing City and didn't want to pass on the Shura god throne.

I'm suffering from the second grade disease. In the next chapter, can I have a sentence asking His Majesty to die?

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