Cybertronic Candle Dragon

The subject matter is very novel and the author has great ideas, but overall he lacks experience, which is a pity. 1. The background is not well laid out. The protagonist at the beginning has a certain strength and is a small overlord on a mountain. However, the overall layout of the mountain and the other races on the adjacent mountains are not described in detail. After the battle is over, the main leader of the alien beast camp is what do those ultimates look like and where do they have their territory? The situation of their territory and their relationship with humans are still not explained clearly. The battle was fought inexplicably. What are the ancient mythical beasts? The alien camp knows nothing about it, and the humans don't seem to pay much attention to it. The protagonist's first transformation seems inexplicable. 2. The characters are not well drawn either. The protagonist kills a monk for the first time, which is originally a good point to unfold the situation of human beings cultivating immortals. However, there is no detailed description of the specific situation of the refugee monks. All that is known is that a scarf is tied on the head. Finally, what is the operating mode between cities? Why can the protagonist come and go freely? Everything is pushed towards the spider, which seems too pale. Even if you say that the protagonist is talented in lurking, it makes sense. That Walker 02 has so many interactions with the protagonist in the plot, but he is still a main character. For a long time, he didn't even know what he looked like. Then he suddenly cooperated with the protagonist again. What he was going to do was not explained clearly. Then he went to the Zhang family. 3. The plot is baffling. What on earth is the protagonist going to do? What is he going to do? The book didn't explain it clearly. One moment it seemed like it was evolving, and the next it seemed like it was looking for ancient ruins. But after I got a key, nothing happened. And are all the ultimate alien beasts blind? Why don't you come and see such a big scene? That centipede must have some reaction, right? Just write, "That centipede came to investigate after seeing such a big scene, and found that the protagonist couldn't move for some strange reason. He was overjoyed and wanted to step forward to take advantage. As a result, the protagonist had some extra energy after completing his evolution. He sprayed it out from his mouth, killing the centipede. Seeing this, the other ultimate beasts also gave up the idea of ​​exploring here." Wouldn't it be good? And that mercenary died suddenly? Is it intentional or a ruse? There is no explanation, so you just say, "Caesar, who was flying, received the reminder from the system that the signal had disappeared, his eyes flickered, and he continued to move forward." That's fine, seeing the Zhang family's inexplicable hostility, I can't stand it anymore, and I have no idea what the logic of the protagonist's entire behavior is when he enters the library and goes to find the Zhang family? What's the purpose? I even doubt whether the author wrote an outline. Overall, this idea is very novel, but I'm afraid the author doesn't have the writing power to control this subject, which is a pity.

Don't you think this book is interesting? As a dragon novel lover, I think this is very interesting, very consistent with my imagination of cyber dragon novels, technological and interesting. The writing is good but the content is poor. Although the author may need to spend more energy to understand some technology-related knowledge points, the flaws are not concealed. This book is really difficult and easy to read. Good luck, author! I am definitely following this book😂, the ultimate cyber life.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​…                                                                                          The duality, the wave is not the particle, the particle is not the wave, the wave is the particle, the particle is the wave, the quantum entanglement is also the same. There is no Maxwell's demon, no double-slit interference experiment, no energy input, after all, entropy increases and heat death, no four basic positions, no superstrings, and no ion spin. Speed ​​of light The speed of light, after all, the speed of light is difficult to exceed and difficult to reach, and the mass is infinite.

This is what I heard: At that time, the Buddha was at No. 108, Zhishugei Industrial Park, with the employees of the Mahayana Group. The World Honored One said: You, a true and kind person, can move freely through all communication ports without any hindrance. At that time, countless megabytes were placed between the Tathagata's brows, illuminating the network of Buddha lands in all directions in the east.                   2.01.3——

Future Now

Electronic dragon? I'm going to start struggling

Su, if that doesn't work, let's try to attract some traffic by touching porcelain platinum.

Electronic dragon, is that so?

If it conforms to the book, please give me some feedback! Great author!

Sai Badragorn!

This book also writes about the evil sect, urban immortality, classical immortality, underworld cultivation, and mechanical ascension through the pain of flesh and blood. Author, how did you do it? I'm going to blanch, won't your genes be disordered? I remember correctly that the protagonist is an electronic dragon, right?

Isn't he the cyber Taoist priest from Station B's "Capsule Project"?

Very handsome too

You electronic dragon, can you pull out the Chimeric Terminator Dragon?

Is anyone messing with Star Dragon? The lines are so flammable! For example, set a blood value in system mode? Unlock the BOSS stage. Or the story of the evolution system, traveling through various different worlds to activate various evolutionary abilities, and saving the world by the way. And is the Star Dragon essentially on the same level as the Time Dragon?

After reading dozens of chapters, the setting and creativity are very good, but the author's writing skills are not very good and the writing is too simple and almost boring.

Have you heard of Zhulongxing? In the second year of Yuanhe...

5 For a piece of bread 10 for a bottle of water 😄

Did you read Zhulong and write it from the left?

Can it evolve into the Armored Dragon?

It's rare to find this book that is very suitable to your taste. Why did you cut it? Author😭. I really like it very much. It is the book that best fits my imagination of cybernetic cultivation😭. Wuwuwu, I beg you, can the author finish the Zion section and then cut it? Wuwuwu. Come on for the next book, author, if you write about dragons, I will definitely chase after you 😭😭😭

Crowdfunding 💡, recently I have always felt that this title is not suitable. If I change the title, will it improve the performance (of course, I will try to enter the mode of updating three times a day recently), so readers can help give some suggestions, just some ideas and so on. If you choose it, you will be rewarded with a mua~

I have read a similar novel before. At the beginning, due to unknown reasons, all human beings turned into various combat robots. Then the earth began to merge with other parallel worlds, starting with Attack on Titan, Demon Slayer, Tokyo Gnawer, Inuyasha, This type of relatively weak world, slowly followed by One Piece, Naruto and Dragon Ball, these relatively powerful worlds and after turning into a robot, the food is the soul of living things. If you want to continue living and not starve to death, if you want to continue to evolve and become stronger, just They can only keep killing and devouring the souls of other life forms And people on earth can drop skills by killing them, such as killing Konoha chuunin to get white-scale incendiary bombs, killing S-class gnawing species to get super alloy tail blades, killing Aburame clan jounin to get nano-metal insect swarms Kill wave Feng Shuimen obtains a space teleportation device, kills Blackbeard to obtain a black hole annihilation cannon, kills Hawkeye to obtain a plasma ship-cutting knife, and a series of skills In this case, there are no good people on earth who can survive, and each one is more cruel than the other

This is also a dragon

The world of spiritual practice will be opened later: Fusion Evolution, Synchronic Evolution, Super Evolution, Ritual Evolution, Pendulum Evolution, and Link Evolution.

The author's ideas are really novel. Chinese cyberpunk is rarely this good, and it is indeed good but not popular. When will the author create a book club?

Omnissiah, the machine spirit has appeared!

Alas, watching the beginning of this reminds me of the eunuch's Cyber ​​Sword Immortal Tie Yu

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