
Pirates: Nine Tails Bombards Mary Joa at the Beginning
海贼:开局九尾炮轰玛丽乔亚
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As for the essay pen, it is quite satisfactory and can be read. In terms of imagination and writing style, the protagonist's systematic genre, pretentious sayings, the code name he gave himself, and the code name he gave to his fictitious organization are all the same things that the next door Fei🦌 used five years ago. Even the "zero" and "invisible empire" named by the protagonist are even more embarrassing than the names given by the studios and the funny brats next door.
Let's kill some people. A Roger lives and dies, dies and lives again. This is not how he competes with the world for luck. You don't want to write any of the characters in the original novel to death.
What is written in the front is fine, but what is behind it, especially about the Warring States Emperor Shitian swallowing the Buddha and so on.
The creator of Eight Gates Dunjia.
Let me clarify a fact. Eight-door Dunjia was created by Matt Dai. In the animation, Matt Dai once said in the memory: It took me 20 years to master this only skill. When Dai passed it on to Kai, he said it was the only move he had learned in twenty years. Does this mean that Dai had learned it for twenty years? Is this possible? Is it because he has poor qualifications? It's impossible, even Li learned it within a few years, and it's impossible to teach the forbidden technique to you privately, so it can only be the original creation of Matt Dai. In fact, it is just a matter of translation. Mastering Japanese also means development. The Second Hokage, who once broke the internet, used the Eight Gate Dungeon in the final battle. It was actually nonsense. I went to see it and found that there was no such thing. Later, after watching Metkai's The Seventh Gate, Banye once said: "Isn't it red steam? I'm really underestimated." I thought that Banye had watched Eight Gates Dunjia a long time ago. Later I thought about it, something was wrong. I remembered that Ben survived for a long time and saved Obito Uchiha, who was in the same issue as Metkai. (I think almost 75 to 80 years old, except for a certain old immortal, yes Tsuchikage, I'm talking about you, in the war-prone world of Naruto, there are very few old people). Then you shouldn't miss the big news like Matt wearing a ninja sword and kicking seven people into a three-man army. For this kind of thing, just ask White Zetsu, who has accounts all over the Ninja world. If not, you can ask Black Zetsu who sneaked into all the major Ninja villages and stole secret documents. Isn't that the end of the matter? (Don't tell me that the five great ninja villages won't search when faced with such a big thing.) The matter of the Three Lucky Treasures is big news, brother. If I remember correctly, the mission location seems to be still very close to the Kingdom of Water, which is almost Madara's lair. If you don't tell me, why does Madara know? I would like to ask, why doesn't Madara Uchiha know? From a normal person's perspective, with something like White Zetsu, Uchiha Madara cannot be said to have comprehensive information about the outside world, or at least it can be said to be comprehensive in all aspects. Based on their early strength, the seven people were at least elite Jonin, strong enough to be at the Kage level, but Dai directly destroyed the seven people with the Ninja Sword. Whether it was White Zetsu or Black Zetsu, they would definitely report it to Madara. After all, for the Infinite Tsukuyomi Plan, any unexpected variables must be taken into account. In order to implement the unlimited monthly reading plan, there is no reason why the information on the outside world should be lacking in intelligence. And if you beat him, he won't be as reckless as he was in the later stage. (Ye Kai's space distortion will only appear when he is about to hit someone, so you can still avoid it if you hide before you are about to hit someone. Please see the animation for details. Madara's Taoist Jade only begins to twist when he is about to be hit) Another point is that I personally think it is quite important evidence, that is, Matt Kai's kick almost dragged me to the finale, but Matt Kai kicked me down, and three of the seven Ninja Swordsmen had to run away. This is obviously a hidden injury left when creating Ninjutsu. The most important thing is that the father and son, Metday and Metkay, are just civilian ninjas. If the secret technique is passed down from family, then they are not called civilians but called a declining family. Others say, just think of it, Matt Dai is just a commoner who wants to develop the Eight Gate Dungeon, which involves many meridians and acupuncture techniques. He is not Orochimaru and Tsunade, where did he get the theoretical knowledge? I laughed when I saw this. Even the plot of father and son having learned the Eight Gate Dunjia is even more nonsense. The author is not qualified to read some theoretical knowledge, but he is qualified to learn directly! Don't you think about it, our country's "One Hundred Thousand Whys" even contains basic information about nuclear bombs, but the specific information, raw materials and mathematical equations are state-level secrets. Why do you think that learning materials are more confidential than specific equations? Compared with direct learning, it is more reasonable to integrate data to create. [This is equivalent to being qualified to get specific mathematical equations, models, and raw materials (directly learning Eight Gate Dungeon), but not qualified to understand a little bit of basic research concepts (Basics of Eight Gate Dungeon Meridians), which is nonsense] Don't tell me anything, Namikaze Minato is also a commoner, he has also learned the art of Flying Thunder God. First of all, you need to confirm the fact that before learning, he became a disciple of the Sannin Jiraiya, and he is not a waste like Matt Dai. Secondly, he is a super genius in the ninja school. Furthermore, the flying thunder god technique requires extremely high time and space talent, so he was given it. No way, no way, no one really thinks that Namikaze Minato, who became a disciple of the Sannin and learned the Flying Thunder God Technique, is a commoner. The concept is completely different. However, what is Matedai? "Ten thousand years old genin, the least talented ninja in Konoha." These are the evaluations of Matt Dai by the ninjas in Konoha. Tell me what qualifications he has to learn the Eight Gate Dunjia. Even if the second generation is developed and handed over to Matt Dai for perfection, this is impossible, because it is impossible for him to not even say a word to the third generation. If someone speaks to the third generation or the second generation, Matt Dai will not be insulted so seriously in Konoha. Besides, the Hyuga family's blockade of knowledge about the Meridian Dantian is not as serious as others think, because the Meridian Dantian needs to cooperate with the Byakugan to perform ninjutsu such as Soft Fist and Kaiten, and using chakra to stimulate acupuncture points such a violent ninjutsu is obviously a bit wrong with other people's style. Even if there is a reason why the Hyuga family did not use it. In fact, I guess it was because Tsunade created medical ninjas and organized her own knowledge and spread it. After all, the meridians and Dantian can be seen with the naked eye to help medical ninjas, and the Hyuga family did not dare to be dissatisfied with Tsunade, the first-generation granddaughter. Let me give you another piece of evidence! In fact, there is no monopoly on the basic knowledge related to acupuncture points. Not to mention Brother Ying, because she has studied under the Sannin, Tsunade has a clear and extremely advanced knowledge of the meridians, so she is considered to be related to the upper class. What happened to Nohara Rin? In the plot, her medical skills also include knowledge about meridians. No matter how I looked, I never found out that she was related to the higher-ups. Instead, I found out that almost all medical ninjas have knowledge about acupuncture points. During the unlimited moon reading every day, you can even find a lot of related books on Dantian acupuncture points in the Grand Academy. So to sum up, there is no loophole in Matt Dai's basic theory. (With so many medical ninjas in Konoha, some knowledge of meridians may have become common knowledge) Someone asked about the time? Matt Dai spent a lot of time practicing the Eight Door Dunjia. Where did he find the time to create the Eight Door Dunjia? In fact, he did not spend a lot of time practicing, because it is easy to see in the plot. 5000, It can be seen from this that his cultivation time is far less than that of his son. It proves that he still has a lot of time. It is impossible for you to say that he is lazy, because based on the character shown in the plot, it is impossible for Matt Day to be lazy. I don't believe you when you say Kaihuang has any talent. After all, other crane tails have poor talents, and at most they just can't finish their careers. And what about Emperor Kai? His talent was so bad that he couldn't even go to ninja school, and he almost lost the possibility of becoming a ninja. So to sum up, they have a damn chance to come into contact with forbidden arts such as Eight Gate Dunjia.
Am I not the only one who thinks it would be cool to stand on the head of the Kyuubi and declare war on the world like Ben? And the invisible empire is really a treasure, just call it Xiaodu.
Invisible Empire is a bad name. Isn't Invisible Empire bad?
I hope there won't be a situation like all kinds of demons blowing up to the sky and famous pirate characters being fine in the future.
It's too hypocritical. Kill all the merchants who come to the auction and leave the slaves for auction. I mean, is there a possibility that there are not only slaves but also other commodities at the auction? There are not only merchants who come to buy slaves, but also merchants who buy normally. Also, who told you that there are no innocent people in a place where there are just criminals? Even Gotham has a lot of them. Normal people, even prisons, have innocent guards. If it is not a prison, there cannot be only pure perpetrators. There are also poor people. The poor cannot go to normal areas and can only stay there to live. The protagonist destroys not just one or two areas. Is it so disgusting to play indiscriminate massacre while feeling that I am righteous?
The devil was so awesome, but he didn't kill anyone
I feel like it was written in a mess, just to complain about you, so I subscribed to one chapter. It is really messy. I don't even understand what the Shikon no Tama is. The Shikon no Tama is formed by the souls of the shrine maiden Suiko and many monsters. In the four soul no tama, the souls of the shrine maiden Suiko and the monsters are constantly intertwined. The earth is fighting, the Four Souls Jade is polluted, the souls of the monsters have the upper hand, the Four Souls Jade is purified, and the power of the shrine maiden Suiko has the upper hand. If the Four Souls Jade can be given strong enough power, it can even liberate the many monsters trapped in the Four Souls Jade, as well as the soul of the shrine maiden Suiko. With this kind of extraction ability from all the worlds, I feel that many people have not seen it, and some anime cannot understand their abilities. It is better to let the male protagonist redeem and choose various worlds. For example, if the male protagonist wants to draw a lottery, he can first choose a few worlds, and then slowly improve step by step. If the male protagonist has not purchased Before a higher level world, all the items he draws can only be from this world. For example, the world of Inuyasha and Naruto has 1 million emotional values, while the Dragon Ball world has 100 million emotional values, and Marvel and DC have one billion. First, fix a few world views and let them draw, or new rewards given by the system.
To see how powerful the battle is, go to the Tieba forum "Wang Feng is here" to check it out. The only place in the entire network where the combat power can be easily fought. Naruto's level is indeed higher than that of pirates
The big scenes are well written. It's a pity that the scenes in the front are too big, which makes the battles during Luffy's journey seem trivial, as tasteless as chicken ribs, and it's a pity to abandon them.
Age of the Gods. The world is controlled by the gods. But the gods are merciless. Treat everything in the world like a stupid dog. In. Sophis, the god of love and war, was dissatisfied with the Lord God's ruthlessness. He left the heaven with half of his combat power and came to the human world. Here it is. Sophie discovers a purer creature. They hunt each other. Keep evolving. It's just like a newborn baby that doesn't know good from evil. Live spontaneously. Sophie admires this creature. And gave it the name Devil, he felt. As long as this pure creature bred by heaven and earth grows up. It will give him the power to overthrow the Lord God. But the good times didn't last long. The Lord God discovered Sophie's thoughts. He began to rain down thunder upon the earth. And launch a divine war. Sophis, who once served as the Lord God's right-hand man, was also extremely powerful. The battle with the Lord God. It affects all living things on the earth. After the war. Sophie was defeated. Exiled by the Lord God into the endless hell of burning fire all day long. The celestial warriors who fought with him. He was also exiled to the deepest part of hell. Until the end of time. They will be suppressed forever. The world after the war was devastated. There are no more original creatures left. So in order to fill the gap in the human world, the Lord God took the form of himself as the Supreme God. Created a new race, human beings. And created twelve levels of holy beasts. Used to protect newborn humans from being threatened by demons. Then in ancient times, humans and demons coexisted. They share this world with all other living things. Originally, in order to maintain the balance of the world, heaven and earth created twelve holy beasts to maintain order in the world. And gave them enough power to restrain the devil. Among them, the Holy Lord was originally one of the twelve sacred beasts that guarded the world in ancient times. They guarded the order of the world and maintained the balance of the world, and fought against the evil seven demons (these seven demons are composed of the seven strongest demon wizards among many demons.). But one day, the Dragon Holy Beast listened to the devil's bewitchment, attacked the Tiger Holy Beast, and obtained the power of yin and yang that can integrate all powers. , The dragon is intoxicated with the feeling of having power. He gradually deprived the power of the other holy beasts and integrated them into himself. Under the bewitchment of the devil. He degenerated into a devil who did all kinds of evil. Accepted the demonic energy of fire and became the eighth demon. It also completely broke the balance of the world (do you know why the Holy Lord is the strongest one but is looked down upon by other demons?) But the laws of the world, good and evil coexist, there will not be only evil in the world. A new justice will come. The Eight Immortals descended from heaven to the world and used their supreme magic to seal the demons in another world forever, making them unable to escape forever. . In the same way, yin and yang coexist in the world, and good and evil coexist. When the old evil disappears, new evil will come. The shadow generals representing darkness came to the world from the kingdom of shadow. But the laws of the world will not change. The yin pole produces yang. The power of evil must be counterbalanced by a counterbalance. Among human beings, seven warriors with the power of justice were born. They used their own lives to defeat the shadow generals, and asked their followers to hide the shadow generals' masks around the world to prevent them from meeting again. . However, the laws of the world will never allow evil to disappear completely, because the Holy Lord is not a complete demon, and the seals of the eight immortals suppress the Holy Lord much less. He escaped from the seal. Once again he came to someone else, and he wanted to enjoy the time that only belonged to him . During this period, he discovered a mask that could summon shadow soldiers. He used magic to steal the power of the mask. A long time has passed and the laws of the world have remained the same, and evil will not be allowed to survive alone. The Archmage, who inherited the power of justice, found a way to fight the Holy Lord. He defeated the Holy Lord and turned all the other powers deprived of the Holy Lord into spells, taking away the Holy Lord's body, just like he had taken away the power of other holy beasts. The Holy Lord turned into a stone statue. Buried underground forever by the Archmage... Each of the twelve spells represents a power of the twelve holy beasts, and they are all very powerful and not as fragile as shown in the animation. (The power of a spell is like a big post, and the user is like a cup taking water. How much it can take depends entirely on the user's temperament). In ancient times, there was no coexistence between good and evil, and the side of justice relied on these powers to fight against the seven demons at their peak. Like the eight great demons, each possesses the same power as its corresponding . Chicken Spell: Telekinesis (referring to the movie, super power is out of control) is not just about floating. Monkey Talisman: Seventy-two changes, which can change all living things in the world . Ever-changing, nothing is impossible (can be developed, depends on the user ) Ox Talisman: Move mountains and seas, infinite power. (Can split a mountain easily) Tiger Talisman: The most important of the twelve talismans. Different forces fused into one place are inherently dangerous. Too much power melted into one body. This will repel each other and cause harm to the body. (Xiaoyu doesn't count. He might be the reincarnation of some great god!). With him, yin and yang can be integrated into everything. (The splitting into two people in the animation is just a side effect) (The protagonist will gain more and more miscellaneous powers in the future, and will need the Tiger Talisman to balance,) Talisman-free: Super speed, not just running faster, but all-round, vision, reaction, and body functions, all-round speed up. (Refer to The Flash, or Quicksilver) Dragon Talisman: Has the power of explosion. It should be a flame shock wave with extremely strong attack power. (This is originally the power of the Holy Lord) Snake Talisman: Completely invisible, even the objects you touch are invisible together with living things (not just invisible, it should be completely transparent! Even the shadow is gone) Horse Talisman: Remove all substances that are not beneficial to itself. Be truly invulnerable to all poisons and fearless of curses (with him, the protagonist will not take part in anyone's plot). Sheep Spell: The ability to target the soul, not only to yourself, but also to others. Can easily knock other people's souls out of the body (Is it similar to the ability of the Samsara Eye? He is more powerful than the Samsara Eye,) Dog Talisman: Immortality. (This is everyone's dream! With that talisman, you can really do it without fear of any harm. In addition, with the sheep talisman, even the soul, no one else can think of it) Pig talisman: Cyclops (He can not only shoot straight! He can also strike like a whip, it will break if it is rubbed, and die if it is touched) . ) Rat Talisman: Turn stillness into movement, turn death into life (This spell is very powerful, the statue he resurrected has divinity. It is simply a artifact and a blessing for otakus. Think of those life-size figures at home) The power of the spell is like a vat with very powerful power. And users are like water cups. It can only be based on your own temperament. Use part of your strength. (If too much power is used, it is harmful. Especially when other miscellaneous powers exist together. This needs to be neutralized by the Tiger Talisman) This is why the strength of each person's spell is different when using it! In fact, the same goes for the Black Shadow Mask. No one else can use their full power. It seems that the evil dragons under the Holy Lord are derived from the Monkey Talisman and The Rat Talisman. The monkey shapes it, the rat gives it life. The protagonist can rely on these two to have many subordinates For example, in the Terminator world, grab a T1000 and become a superwoman. Then the rat charm gives life! Praise The eight demons don't just rely on their own attributes, right? They are the strongest demons among the many demons in ancient times Wizards. They have their own magic! (Remember the magic encyclopedia of the Holy Master? Other demons should also have their own memoranda!) The eight demons were the strongest demon wizards in ancient times. They have magic. Not just by attributes! It's just that the long period of imprisonment made them forget too much (remember the holy master's witchcraft encyclopedia, other demons should have a copy!)
Now it feels boring again. I don't care about the interaction between Ann and Roger at all. They have too many plots and are very boring. I don't care about the Straw Hats either. The author's writing is stinky and long. I skip it when the Straw Hats appear. I originally thought that after Thunder Angel and the two demon lords came out, there would be a big scene of bloodshed, but this is what happened to you? What about killing people? What about rivers of blood? I'm extremely disappointed. I'll give it a few more months. What I'm writing now feels like it's just water for the sake of water.
Watching Luffy's plot is getting more and more boring. It's not interesting. I skipped watching it. It's not as interesting as the previous events caused by the arrival of the demon lord.
You dare to write Spongebob Squarepants. That's not how you open a new book and restock the old ones You're such a portrait of a fully booked person🤡 Fortunately, I started reading it for free. It's moist.
I have read this book countless times, and every time I fall for the words "Invisible Empire"
It feels like a familiar author. The author's early writing was very interesting, but the later writing was messy. He only knew how to summon people, and the plot never progressed. A group of people kept fighting around.
Every time I see The Invisible Empire, there is a drama. There are so many opposing opinions in the comments. The author is invisible. They can be called the duo together with the Invisible Author.
Again, Kyuubi Ken can't defeat Garp. Garp can be killed by himself. The tailed beast can be killed, but it will be resurrected after a few years. The Nine-Tails is the strongest when it is the least reborn, and the One-Tail is the weakest when it is killed too many times.
Can you finish writing this book?
😭I feel like this book is really the pinnacle
It turned out to be a fake. Does the author want to continue writing? I will definitely follow the new book
Let's add another chapter
It's too strong. I promised not to be in charge.