Dou Po: Five Emperors Po Kong, Please Add an Old Six

The author should not add too many modern words, what are you talking about? This is too dramatic, so delete it. Don't describe too much in your heart, just a few sentences to set the tone. Whether you want to be an alchemist or go to Canaan Academy, you must have a plan for the future. Whether it can be realized is one thing, it is better than rushing for opportunities. Don't have too many ideas in the early stage, or opportunities in the middle and later stages. These are not things you should consider. You are not a fighter. If you want to write hundreds of chapters, just travel to a few hundred years before the protagonist was born. You must have your own things. The opportunities in the original work are all Put your head in your belt, the chapter about refining the Green Lotus Fire melted the mountains, can your body bear it? Modern people have a safe way, why take risks, you only have one life and you are not afraid of death, it doesn't make sense logically, and everyone has no sense of substitution. The highlight of Dou Po World is the alchemist. You have everything you need to become an alchemist. Fans are copying the original work. Based on the world view of the original work, you can design your own opportunities. For example, you can compete with Yao Lao on the same stage at the alchemist conference, join the alchemy tower, wait for the protagonist to become stronger, and then catch a ride. You copied the original work completely, so why don't I go and read Doupo again?

The idea is new, but there is only one thing. The protagonist's cultivation is too easy. The protagonist of the original book is the most difficult one in Tudou's works. He is either risking his life or on the road of risking his life. He is as tired as a dog even if he has a master to teach him. The main character of the Lord masters all the skills and formations by himself, and he is very good at it. Tudou's book no longer has that passionate taste.

I think Dou Po actually likes the little medical fairy, and everything else doesn't matter.

The update is so slow, I don't dare to read it, who knew it wouldn't be updated that day, it would be unfinished!

Let's talk about my views after reading the first five chapters First of all, I am very satisfied with the introduction, and I hope the author can write it according to the introduction. But there is always a but in everything. I think the author's way of writing at the beginning is very strange. One: Timeline is a very important thing. Since you have decided to help Xiao Yan, you should clarify the timeline as soon as possible and make a certain layout. The method given by the author is to go to the Warcraft Mountains to support the Little Medical Fairy (?). Although the Little Medical Fairy did not meet Xiao Yan, which can be used as a reference for the time, the current time should still be mentioned when expressing feelings in the first three chapters. Second: I am not right or wrong about my premium kindness towards the Little Medical Fairy. I don't want to get too involved with the female protagonists like the Little Medical Fairy in terms of the protagonist's character. However, the author still wrote a romance-flavored plot... If you may have thoughts about the Little Medical Fairy in the future, I explained at the beginning that I chose a Little Medical Fairy. Although it is not that majestic and upright, at least the readers will not feel that the character is strange. Third: (My personal opinion on the novel) It can be seen from the Six-Star Douhuang that the protagonist has traveled through time for six years. Let's not mention the details of why he took a Douhuang everywhere to find resources for six years but did not have any backup or subordinates. Even though the protagonist has divination, how can he guarantee that he will have a strong enough opportunity to become the Dou Emperor without robbing Xiao Yan? Not to mention other things, shouldn't I at least click on it when making up my mind? When fortune-telling, I have a vague feeling that a certain place is very important, and explain the main line? To be honest, if it weren't for this introduction, many people wouldn't be able to stay.

Didn't you see the heroine named Qu appear in the article?

Is there a female protagonist? If not, can you create one yourself?

Come on update!

A man is born between heaven and earth, how can he live in depression for a long time?

I finally saw a normal Dou Po fanfic. It's not easy. I support 😭

I haven't read it yet, but I followed it based on the introduction.

I don't understand. There is nothing to hide. If I were Xiao Yan, I would have admitted it directly. I was the one who did it. That Mo Cheng wanted to gouge out my maid's eyes. He is the one who deserves to be killed.

How did the protagonist bypass the Gama Empire's ghost-suppressing gate? And Aoyama Town is located at the junction of Izumo Gama? Are you funny?

I didn't watch it, but I think this should be when Xiao Yan and the others became Dou Emperor, they took the opportunity to seize the spiritual energy and break through Dou Emperor.