Wizard's Path

I thought it was a dark flow in the first few pictures, but suddenly it became a love flow afterward.

The author's novel about wizards with indigenous protagonists in a medieval European setting is really encouraging. Please note that it is not a poison but a dissuasion. Because most of the books with good scores have protagonists who travel through time, are reborn, etc. If it is an indigenous protagonist, then the world background in the book should be roughly similar or connected to reality, such as a science fiction world, a wasteland world, a spiritual recovery world, a strange recovery world, etc. There are also stories with indigenous protagonists in ancient settings, but the good results are all related to time travellers, such as Overthrowing the Han and Extradimensional Warlocks. It is really difficult to write a story about an indigenous protagonist in an ancient setting that has nothing to do with time travellers. Even if your book is good, your results will not be very good. The more common approach now is to write that the protagonist has traveled through time and space and been reborn, and then it doesn't matter at all if you don't mention it. It's easy to just make up a random one to fill this hole. Anyway, it's not a waste of time and can greatly increase the reader's sense of involvement. Isn't this better than writing an indigenous protagonist? In short, times have changed. Aboriginal texts with ancient backgrounds are difficult to write and are not popular.

The former way of writing drives away people who don't like the dark flow, and the latter way of writing drives away those who like the dark flow. What are you doing?

The author's words attracted me to read this book. I have only watched part of it so far, but I feel it is average and lacks a bit of flavor. I don't think the Virgin of Darkness is important. In my opinion, the essence of a wizard is not the pursuit of truth and knowledge, but the mystery, absurdity, weirdness and unknown, like an absurd black box. Contact and explore the mystery and weirdness, this is the highlight of wizard novels. In my opinion, the reason why dark wizards appear in many wizarding novels is to create a strange and strange feeling. Good wizarding novels also focus on this kind of viewpoint, such as the various unknown and strange dangers in the mother river of the wizarding world, the absurd and weird dimensions in the wizard's journey, and the strange mysterious things and nightmare worlds of extra-dimensional warlocks. The reason why new copies of these books are opened is also based on this point of view. There is no need to even fill the hole when digging it. The word wizard, although you can define it separately. But without the absurdity, weirdness and mystery, this essence has been lost. Although it is called a wizard, it is no different from a mage or a magician.

The author's way of writing is to drive away those who like the dark flow and those who don't like the dark flow. It is obvious that his expressive ability is insufficient and his writing style cannot control this world view.

There's not much to say except that there's a reason for the poor grades, and the author just wants to be happy when he writes it.

I just realized that this author is riding on the popularity. The original version of The Witcher's Journey has exactly the same name.

In fact, this choice is easy to make. Whether Moya joins or not, girls will die every day, and the results will not change. Moya's joining will only affect the process. That is, whether Moya made the potion. As ordinary people, they are dead no matter what, no discussion As bystanders, they can be said to have a very valuable death (life cannot be measured by value, recite it silently three times). Instead of using it for the redemption sect, it is better to give it to Moya, which can also be considered as providing some strength to annihilate the redemption sect. Of course, they don't want to understand the difference between the person who killed her and the person who killed her Haha, it seems cruel, but it also describes the situation that ordinary people face in the world after the fall of wizards. Their lives are completely controlled by others, and they are no different from consumables.

Aboriginal protagonists are difficult to write and succeed in

I felt that it was very fragmented. The first few chapters gave me the feeling that wizards are madmen pursuing the truth. Later, it suddenly changed to the style of loving each other. I hope the author has figured out what world view he wants to write. It is not a good habit to change this style of painting.

You can talk about any ideas you have, including but not limited to suggestions for the development of wizards, suggestions for witchcraft systems, and unique ideas for various knowledge systems. In short, you are welcome to mention anything you can think of. That's right, I just crowdfunded and wrote a book in such an honest way (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

The male protagonist is a practical idealist and ruthless enough, so what kind of female protagonist do you want? Wouldn't it be good to have a career and magic? (ಡωಡ)Hahahahahaha

Bland, tasteless to eat, a pity to throw away

1. Chapter 28, the protagonist's mental recovery speed is 10 (4-x) = 24, x = 1.6. The protagonist's recovery speed is only 1.6 Times that of ordinary people.

Damn, when I read the introduction, I thought the white wizard and the black wizard had a fight and rescued the protagonist, but I didn't expect them to be friends.

In this book, every upgrade of wizard civilization is a leap in life, but there is no indication of the difficulty of the upgrade. Is it just because the protagonist is the son of the world? It feels easier than upgrading in a low-magic world, and there is no process for wizards to explore the truth. It is obviously still a new civilization, and the protagonist has no growth process at all. Even if he has learned a lot of knowledge before, it has nothing to do with the knowledge of wizards. The protagonist behaves too young and mature, but it makes other wizards look like fools.

Finally, there is a book about the White Wizard. I always go to the Black Bone Forest and the like, and then there is a monster guarding the door. It's annoying to look at it.

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The author's writing is very fluent and the basic skills are acceptable. The reason for the poor results is probably "not exciting enough". The life in the dark wizard's tower at the beginning is very attractive and oppressive, but after coming out, it becomes a long popular science of the magic knowledge system. The protagonist, who has no worries about food and clothing, studies and learns magic. Life lacks a sense of oppression and urgency, and the story loses some tension. Although the magic system designed by the author is very exquisite, everyone is not here to see the setting, but to see the story. Once the drive and tension of the plot weaken, readers will lose interest.

So if the author reaches a later stage of writing, he can actually turn this novel into an infinite stream of fan fiction?

I feel like the writing after chapter 70 is really exciting, but the first part is a bit tasteless.

Put it on the bookshelf first, the introduction is pretty good, it's a bit like The Wizard's Journey world view, it's not bad, I'll give it a try before reading it.

The first and second paragraphs of the introduction are very immediate. Does anyone know whether they were adapted from a speech or a document?