What to Do in Red Dead Redemption

I feel it's a bit embarrassing for the author to write about moonshining to make a fortune. In what era in the West, moonshining was worse than tobacco, and you can go into industry later. If you don't know how to write it, look at how Carnegie made his fortune and follow it. After industrial processing and machinery manufacturing, you can also work in a military factory. There are prototypes for you to copy Dupont and Rockefeller. As long as you use the funds you have to spend 100 million US dollars, it will be enough. Take a look at the video on the b station that introduces these yellow flags in the United States. It will be very enlightening.

The writing is pretty good so far, and I finally see someone serious about redeeming Arthur. After all, if after the game starts, the mess that Arthur has done means redemption can no longer save him. I quite like the interaction between the protagonist and Arthur, it feels a bit like a father and son. What will you do if you encounter the Western Idea King later?

It's been 17 days and there's no chance. Quack

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It's a bit too streamlined. The first thirty chapters can be shortened to less than 5 chapters. There are no plot ups and downs in daily life. Characters appear in piles but there is no plot or description that can leave an impression on the readers. I suggest the author revise it appropriately, otherwise it will be difficult to increase the readership.

Oh oh oh, there is actually a book called Big Cousin 2. The last one has been moldy on my bookshelf for almost a year. I haven't read a chapter, so I'll go check it out now. I hope Maigou can get the redemption of Revolver

It's okay to have a bit of life, but it can't be too much. I was stunned for a moment when I saw the inventory. I forgot that the protagonist had a system, and there are many easter eggs in Red Dead Redemption, such as UFOs, scientific experiments, travelers through time and space, lonely giants, vampires, serial killers, etc. 😁 I hope to see these plots. Author, you are too slow to update! The plot is too bland

I'm really convinced. Author, please hurry up and update 100,000 seeds a day!

At that time, Morgan died, everyone was stupid, and I didn't touch Big Dead again for a year.

The Easter eggs in Red Dead Redemption are so exciting, it would be a pity not to write about them

It looks pretty good. Let me be the first investor. Come on✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

By the way, can the protagonist's strength still increase? The values ​​in the game are fixed, but there are no limits in reality.

Don't let other characters in the story get involved, it's very dramatic.

Are you really stupid? With this amount of updates, it's all fake. Just a few chapters about my niece's opening of a factory. It's dozens of chapters, but you're still so stupid after it's released?

Let's talk about three personal feelings 1. There are too many characters in the first dozen chapters, and it's hard to remember their names. They are too long and there are no fights. They are all about life. Generally, you will quit without calming down. 2 The paragraphs are too long. I'm used to reading them at the starting point. Who can bear to squeeze more than 100 words into one paragraph? It's tiring to read. 3 A few small questions, such as whether the money given by the system needs to be cashed out in banknotes, is it cashed out of thin air, or is it double the amount of the reward. Regarding the protagonist's marksmanship, is it a weapon that unlocks the body, or is it inherited from the original owner? There is a possibility of mistakes. Just talk about it

It's really not surprising. Will Charles and John come out later? I really like them. After all, Hosea's life has changed when he was with Dutch for the first time. They are no longer a problem. I guess they haven't met Dutch yet. The update is slow. No problem. I will automatically subscribe to support you. Don't go into the palace.