Konoha Ninja World: from the Warring States Period to the Finale

Rubbish article, he had a child with this woman, but was irresponsible to her, married another woman, and now he falls in love with Tsunade, ruining all three views.

It's obviously a passionate article, but then you turned it into an emotional article. There's no fighting at all. It's not suitable for men at all. It should be divided into the female side. It's all about emotions. It also always weakens the protagonist. The more you write, the weaker it becomes. It's just an emotional article. It's all a grinding emotional shit plot. It's really disgusting.

You have sealed all the memories. What did you write in the previous hundred or so chapters just to give the protagonist a powerful institutional bloodline? 😰

It feels like the protagonist is getting weaker and weaker.

It feels like all the accumulated wealth of the protagonist has been sacrificed on the road, and Hei Ze's attention is also a bit inexplicable. Does the protagonist have a taunting physique? It's so easy to attract Black Zetsu...

They are all so awesome, I have to arrange a plot killing, the memory is gone (ー_ー)!!

() Start Protagonist time traveler He was born in a whirlpool Taught chakra refining within the clan at the age of 3 The protagonist read Naruto fan novels and felt that directly absorbing natural energy to practice is better than practicing chakra, so he imagined a way to directly absorb natural energy. He wasted six years sensing natural energy without realizing it. Then he gave up at the age of nine and refined chakra in one night. Too()

I think those two women ruined the book

I can barely see it from the front, but it's disgusting from the back. It's basically the same as the original, and the protagonist hasn't changed anything. As a member of the Uzumaki tribe, he has never been on the battlefield and is despised by his tribe. As a man, he is irresponsible and flirtatious, and his methods of picking up girls are low-level. He lies to cover up when faced with simple tailed beasts. He has always been running around just for himself and has no sense of responsibility. He cries when he loses. His attitude towards relationships makes people feel childish and ridiculous.

Hey, I knew that writing something intermittent would be a eunuch. Fortunately, I cut my losses in time and stopped reading.

Did the author refer to romance novels when writing the book? Why does it feel weird?

I feel like the author didn't grasp the protagonist's character well. The further I go, the more I think about it. I want to write about the factors that affect the growth of a person, such as "the war in the Warring States period in Naruto" and "getting used to it after traveling to another world", but it seems that I tried too hard. It feels too fake. The strength also goes up and down. It should be a reference to the long-lasting friendship, but it doesn't feel that way. My daily writing is not very good.

The writing is okay, at least it's smooth to watch, but it's just painful to watch, and the plot development makes me uncomfortable.

In an era when 12-year-olds generally get married, it would be ugly if 12-5-year-olds don't get married until they are 18, let's not talk about whether they will.

I thought it looked good, but it turned out to be disgusting.

Rebirth was given to me in vain. Did my wife, son, and grandson all die?

The creativity is okay, but the plot is a bit promising.

It's really strange. The writing is okay, but there are so few people in the comment area.

What an old scumbag. He forgot about the girl of the Thousand Hands clan after being fucked. He stayed in seclusion for ten years and didn't tell anyone to give an explanation first when he came out.

During the Fourth War, the pharmacist turned on WiFi for everyone to enjoy, but the ferret pulled it out and everyone was disconnected from the Internet. Unexpectedly, Banzang has a lot of traffic. He opens it privately to dance alone. When the time comes, he can't continue dancing. However, Hei Jue stole his number, broke the secret, and gave it to Kaguya's envoy. The Liudao Network Manager was very smart and felt something strange, so he ordered Ming Zuo and his two men to block his account immediately. The world will be at peace

Good guy, the author is really great. The harem is open to Naruto. Which female in Naruto can accept it? They are ninjas after all and have killed people. I don't think they will be sloppy. Write so many emotional lines in hot-blooded comics, and they are still grinding and divisive. The other thing is writing power. If your writing power is not good enough, don't touch the emotional line. Some authors have good writing power. Regardless of whether they have a single heroine or multiple heroines, their writing is not obtrusive and readers can accept it. I don't have good writing skills. It's difficult to write a single female protagonist. I'm talking about you, the author.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

What's good about being a tough guy? Not to mention his irritable personality. He's ugly in his clothes and can't find beautiful women. He must have been brainwashed by the Hokage. His outlook on life is abnormal.

Two updates a day is not enough.

I'm used to novels written from a third-person perspective, but it feels weird to suddenly read them in first-person perspective.

None of the explanations made in the early stage make sense. Just say no without in-depth understanding. You can do it based on your own imagination. That's bullshit.