None of These Fairies Are Normal!

The late and middle stages are different from the early stage. The system also seems to be missing. I went back and saw that the author also knew about the plot rhythm problem But so far, I am quite satisfied with it. Come on, author! It's a pity that the commander of Star Palace is dressed in black. I thought she was the third/fourth heroine, but it turned out that the supporting role was invisible throughout the whole process. In addition, I also saw from this paragraph that Ji Lengyin should have changed the settings? I thought they had a good relationship.

There are some minor issues that cannot overshadow the strengths of this book. The mood is very full! The characterization is very full! The sense of anticipation is strong! This is the kind of book that makes you want to know the follow-up development! ! The package belongs to the demon from outside the territory. I would like to make a few digressions that are not specific to this book. I have read several books about demons who failed to achieve enlightenment halfway. Oh, even if it has to be cut in the end, just write a few more chapters to give these characters an ending.

Ji Linyin looks a bit like Xia Mi Both are old enemies Love each other and kill each other Very cute

It looks good, I'll give you two monthly passes 🤓

Just ask for leave and ask for leave. I read your book every day. Have I ever asked for leave?

Can you write a book? I haven't seen the protagonist poop until now, so why doesn't the protagonist need to poop?

Don't you think this book has too few male protagonists? There's only one, can't there be more male protagonists?

The author opens my account every day, knows everything I do, and writes about my daily life without my permission. Don't I want to lose face?

Let me just say that daily promotion and Taobao history can make a big hit

The author's writing is quite good, but he is too greedy for money. When it is almost exciting, he starts charging. Then I can only say goodbye.

There is no doubt that the reincarnation of the demon from outside the territory smells like the trash cat next door. I hope I don't bring the ancestral literary youth and Zihao here too. Personally, I like the author's writing style. Let's talk about the large size and I'll go look at other works.

Don't you think this book has a little bit of dual practice? Not even once. Can't you do more dual practice?

Why do these fairies all have Chinese names? I don't really like them. Can you give me some English names?

Can the author write down the details of when Su Liyue gave birth to Su Youqing 🙂

It's not bad, a very eye-catching plot, but a big shortcoming of writing it like this is the lack of stamina, and the supplement of the setting. If the ambush is buried for so long, it will collapse in the end for very superficial reasons. The second is some of the dialogues of the heroine, and some of the dialogues of the male protagonist, which will be added later. Some of the light-hearted and humorous Internet memes are a bit out of place and are not integrated well. Another thing is that some of the descriptions seem very immature. The pros and cons are clear. The pros are the strong rhythm and eye-catching. The shortcomings are the focus on a few characters, and the writing style has a very girly and literary flavor. From now on, I give it a 7.3.

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Does Shen Nong share similar meal replacements? Waiting for updates, urgent 😭

If you avoid the book opening period of the great masters, this book will definitely be fully recommended Keep writing, and if you don't collapse a million words, you will definitely be able to achieve everything.

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There is no need to describe the appearance of the heroine's mother, and it also emphasizes that she looks like her daughter.

Mo Zhiwei is my belief, Mo Zhiwei is my answer! 😫 No! ... Mo Zhiwei is different... Only Mo Zhiwei is different——! 😡 Mo Zhiwei... Is different from anyone else. 😌 Because Mo Zhiwei's name... Sounds very nice. Just thinking about it makes me feel safe. That's the most holy melody in the world... I don't want to omit it. 🤗

Can you write a book? Why are all the heroines female? I really vomited

Why doesn't the author give the male protagonist a holiday? Is it easy for the male protagonist to never take a holiday?

🙂I originally liked this book. I think the first fifty chapters are really good, and the next hundred chapters are pretty good too. But since entering the secret realm of some bird in Chapter 150, a dungeon mission has been written in a stinky and long way, really verbose, and the pacing problem is huge. At this time, I started watching 😴😴, and then the time jumped to hundreds of years later, which was inexplicable. I can only say that after reading the first 150 chapters, the content is indeed good. Starting from the secret realm of Priest Dusk Township, I personally think it is a mess

Wow, I wrote all this. Fortunately, when I went out and saw a bunch of magical heroines, I cut my losses in time. Looking back, it turns out that the author is also a magical eunuch like the heroine he wrote 😁😁😁

The eunuch's life will be complete when it is almost over.

Keep updating, platinum writers are waving to you, don't give up, platinum writers, don't let them slip away in vain 😭

Why the update😡😡😡😡😡Why😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

When will the update be finished? It's all written to the end. Stop being a eunuch.

You old pastor author, look at others😡