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If you take up a mount in the future, please be sure to ride a deer or an ox or something like that, which is a little more fairy-like ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶, and then say "Master", the appearance will be wonderful. More handsome magic weapons, such as purple gold and red gourds, the Bell of Desolation, the Taiyi Light Sword, and the apricot-yellow flag are handsome and fairy magic weapons. The ancient magical power of "golden light flows through the eyes and Samadhi fire comes out of the mouth" is so handsome ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶. The names of ancient Taoist books or books about cultivating immortality and Qi are really nice. Please refer to them more. Those names are so cool ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶

It's outrageous, the author, that this book was cut off the day after it was placed on the bookshelf. This book only has a few chapters in total, and it's not even on the shelves yet. No book written by any author can take off after just thirty chapters.

If the author wants to be popular, but has this kind of mentality, I still suggest that the author stop writing. If it is not suitable, it is better to find a job and focus on making money. You are a newbie with no resources and no reader base. How can you have multiple people? If you want to write a book to become a god, firstly, you have not created a new popular genre, secondly, you have no resources, thirdly, you do not have a large reader base, and fourthly, you are not at the forefront of the times. It is normal to have no popularity. Even starting a company requires primitive accumulation. If you have no accumulation, how can you become popular?

The sentences are fairly fluent and not too much nonsense. I think Taoist literature should not only be endless about killing demons, exorcising evil spirits and killing ghosts. That feels very monotonous. It would be more interesting to add some daily life farming and management. My current favorite Taoist text is "Starting from the Art of Taiping", which I feel is written in a loose and relaxed way, which makes it more attractive to me. There are other books that I have read and given up on. One of them, "The Immortal Officials of the Heavenly Dynasty", has very smooth sentences and a decent plot, but it is too long-winded and full of nonsense when describing the magical method. Also, I gave up on killing monsters in addition to killing monsters. The content of "Hey, Demonic Way" is to take your pet everywhere to fight monsters and upgrade, which is boring to death. "Taomen Sutra Chanter" is actually very good, especially the content with the donkey is very interesting, but it is also very boring to go around killing monsters and upgrading tasks one after another. When I read a book, I first look at whether the sentences are smooth, whether the plot is attractive but not wordy, and it must be simple and concise. My favorite novel is "Gou Zai Shen Wei World", but it is a pity that the eunuch is the best novel. Alas, resentment! 😭😭😭

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Don't you think it's awkward if you don't read it after writing it yourself? Each chapter seems to be missing a few paragraphs and can't connect to the previous chapter, or the logic is confusing and the storyline doesn't flow at all? ? ?

It looks good, the only immortal in the world, slaying demons and demons, no female protagonist! ! Come on! ! ! !

Just call Li Changsheng directly, return Li Changsheng, it's just like imitating others.

The result of Three Thousand Avenues is 72 awesome spells, all of which are just lies.

I thought I had finally found a good book, but it turned out to be a two-world novel, and the beginning was very different from a two-world novel. I thought I had read the abandoned book. When I looked at the total chapters, I read it again and found that the writing was quite good, and the writing style was not bad. There are no bad points at the moment, but it is so good. Especially when I saw the latest one, it turned out to be a two-world novel. It was outrageous. I didn't like it anyway. It was a pity and I thought it was rare to find a classic fairy tale novel.

Let's not talk about the subsequent plot, the writing style is really good, and it has a bit of the flavor of the fate between Di Sha Qi Er and Lan Ke Qi.

Why are some of the end-of-chapter remarks you wrote yourself gone? I felt quite touched after reading some of what you said, and I have a feeling of anger in my chest that I don't know how to vent, alas.

It's a good book, but it's not publicized enough. No one knows about it.

If it's not a stallion, I won't look at it. I'll give it up.

The protagonist has achieved the ability to fly and hold traces by relying on old silk books. This is one of the magical skills of space jumping and life-saving! In the heavens and in each Jambu world, when you encounter strong enemies and are defeated, you can use the old silk book to escape from the golden cicada and return to the present end of the world!

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I also think this book is very good