The Prehistoric I Am the Enlightenment Tea

The author is thoughtful, and overall it is very good. The author wants to write something of his own. I just think there are a few points, and I hope the author can improve them. 1. The character of the protagonist, including the characters of other characters, always feels a bit petty and does not have the sense of sanctity that comes from the ancient times. As the protagonist who assists Pangu in opening the world, the blessing of the great road should be the spirit of my birth. The protagonist is the enlightened tea tree. I think the character should be based on the points of "virtue, kindness, and kindness". When I read it, I always feel that the protagonist is like a child.                                                                                                   Overall, the writing style is a bit immature, the characters are not clear enough, and different characters are portrayed in different ways. They are all portrayed from the heart. When reading, you will feel that the article is long-winded, the sense of substitution is not strong, and it is a bit dramatic. If the protagonist in the author's works takes the path of high cultivation and protects the world, you can learn from the character creation and plot arrangements of the books "Taiqing Dao in the Ancient Times", "Red Cloud Avenue in the Ancient Times", "Pangu Taichu in the Ancient Times", and "Hongmeng Supreme in the Ancient Times". Although these books may have high or low levels for readers, I think they are still helpful to the author's writing. The author follows the line of domineering emperorship and draws heavily on the books "Chronicle of the Heavenly Emperor of the Ancient World", "The Beast Emperor of the Ancient World and the Divine Rebellion", "The Heavenly Emperor of the Ancient Haotian", and "The Demon Emperor of the Ancient Age". If it wasn't so bad, it would still be pretty good. 2. The plot arrangement is a bit unreasonable, and the conflict arrangement is indeed too compact. It is still necessary to appropriately arrange some travel links, get to know some Taoist friends in the discussion, and discover some spiritual treasures in the treasure land. The portrayal of the conflict between the protagonist and the dragon clan is a bit too childish. They always start fighting before finishing a few words. It should be more deliberate. One is a high-level practitioner and the other is the ancestor of the race. Since the cause and effect are involved, it should be more about communication. For the portrayal of Patriarch Hongjun, the author wanted to make the writing more vivid, so he had to fill in the aspects of virtuous cultivation. …………That's all I can think of for the time being. Come on, author, I'll keep an eye on you.

Although the male protagonist is sometimes annoying, overall, the writing is good, especially the description of why the protagonist can travel through time because of the Chaos Orb fragment, one of the five treasures of Chaos. This prehistoric era is also very suitable. It is not like other prehistoric novels where various systems are rampant. Overall, it is good. I just don't know whether it will become a human nanny in the future. In many prehistoric novels, once the journey to the west of the gods is written, the whole prehistoric world feels low-quality. Also, this prehistoric world is infinitely large. How could the human race occupy the entire prehistoric world? It is very unreasonable. Many of the prehistoric stories are filled with human scenes, which is extremely boring. I hope this book will not be too vulgar. After all, humanity is the path of all living beings. Also, I have always believed that Nuwa did not become a saint by creating the human race, but became a saint because of the first way of creation. The following human races also gradually became the protagonists of heaven and earth because they were created by saints and were looked upon differently by heaven. By the way, measuring calamities is how Heaven perfects itself. What can the human race bring to Heaven? I hope the author can write it clearly in the later period. Many ancient works collapsed into a mess in the later period. The human race can cultivate into a quasi-sage casually, which is even more outrageous than those innate gods and demons. I hope the author will not lose his fighting power in the later stage, come on

It would be better to write more generously and calmly. The negotiation between the protagonist and the dragon clan is not in line with my idea of ​​the prehistoric era at all. The previous writings are all good, but here it is a bit too exaggerated. I hope to see a book about ancient fairy seedlings, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Why do most authors who write prehistoric novels like to be hacked by Pangu? Can't you escape from chaos? Infinite chaos, infinite universe, infinite heavens. Staying outside, waiting for Pangu to create the world... Prehistoric times are the back garden. Standing still and thinking can be done, Refining system, main god space and other immeasurable golden fingers... Spreading to the immeasurable world (spiritual thoughts can also be traveled).

Enlightenment of the tea tree! Cook your own leaves and start enlightenment. ...... Enlightenment is over, the realm is improved, and the origin is strengthened. Boil the tea leaves again, the origin becomes stronger and the tea leaves become more magical. The cycle goes back and forth! Pig's feet finally proved the truth! Heaven bestowed a title: Tea-making Saint!

The protagonist drinks his own tea and becomes stronger, and then the tea becomes more effective. After drinking it, he becomes stronger. The protagonist is updated again and the cycle continues, and soon transcends the avenue and rises above infinite dimensions.

I really can't bear it anymore. I am a tree, and drinking my own leaves can make me stronger... Even if I am a fairy, I can't bear it anymore. So the ancestral witch can become a saint physically by drinking his own essence and blood?

I'm really annoyed by words like muttering to myself.

The protagonist is the Enlightenment Tea Tree. Aren't their leaves and themselves one? After all, the leaves have not withered since ancient times. The Golden Immortal is immortal. Will your leaves still wither and wither? Or are branches and leaves two different systems? It would be more reasonable if you divided the Taoist charms absorbed by the leaves into 3,000 types and absorbed them together. You can boil your own leaves and drink them. What do you think?

It's a good start. It would be great if you write another Three Emperors style, and then all the worlds. It's a pity that you failed to write it.

1. The taste is of old-school prehistoric literature, especially the one about Demon Emperor. 2. The author works very hard and wants to write something new. 3. The protagonist has an unpleasant personality, is a bit talkative, is distracted by fights, and is startled. He is not like a true moral cultivator. The character of the decades before the time travel controls the character of hundreds of millions of years after the time travel. This is unreasonable. 4. The plot conflict is too tight. You must understand that what is cultivated is the Tao, and it should not be a mortal wandering around causing trouble. If you go out appropriately and practice your own Tao quietly, the Demon King will have good control. 5. Others are fine, you can see the radish and pickles.

Yes, it's Alicora at the moment. I hope it won't collapse in the later stage. It's pretty good so far. Many settings are very primitive, unlike other low-end primitives. As for Lingbao, it's better not to overdo it. After all, there aren't many treasures, and don't have just one top-level innate Lingbao. If there are so many, it will collapse in the later stage.

People can't eat too much. Once they are too full, they will go crazy. You can go to heaven by kicking your left foot and right foot!

The author writes well. Even if he has nothing to do, he can still write about daily life, such as the merits and virtues of the Tiandao. There are really too few ancient works. I am very optimistic about you.

The prehistoric era in this book has hundreds of thousands of innate spiritual treasures, which is so awesome. People like me who like to read the normal type of prehistoric world are not worthy of reading such a ridiculous novel.

The spiritual root that truly represents wisdom and enlightenment in ancient times is the bodhi tree. What is enlightenment tea...

I'm really annoyed by the words "I" and "You". Brother, you write for modern people, not for ancient people. These two words are used every time I speak, which makes me feel uncomfortable listening to the book.

1. The plot setting is actually not bad, but the writing style is a bit immature. It may be a new author, and it often makes me feel uneasy when reading, which means it feels a little brainless. It should be good to write more in the future 2. The setting of the protagonist is really unlikable. I see many comments saying the same. It does not reflect the key to the prehistoric era at all, just like a fantasy novel 3. But this new book is already better than some other prehistoric novels. After all, there are not many people writing about the prehistoric era, and the details are pretty good.

It's not to his liking, he doesn't want to spit it out, he doesn't think much of it.

I'm so tired. The whole movie is full of explanations, and it's very confusing. One action requires more than a dozen chapters to explain the cause and effect of the action. Alas!

Seeing that the protagonist is so unpleasant, the part where he persuades Xuangui to quit is so yin and yang and weird, I don't know what's on his face.

10% To 12% boring, grinding grinding grinding machine

After all, we are just like a tree, but you are just like a few leaves on the tree...