Becoming a God Begins with the Earthbound Spirit

There are a lot of bugs, and the characters are not fleshed out enough. The elder sister of the two sisters gave me the first impression of being a cautious and sensitive ordinary person, but later on I saw Wushuang fighting a paper-throwing person... A poor woman who may have worked hard for many years, is it a bit exaggerated to tell me that she can react quickly and kill the paper-threading person on the other side?

After watching the first game, I felt that the protagonist was too invincible and could crush the game without any suspense. In fact, it is more interesting to write this kind of evenly matched game. For example, the protagonist is very strong, but has great limitations. He must trick others into triggering conditions in order to kill people, and the greater the difference in strength, the greater the restrictions. Or because the gap is large, the enemy will have foreign aid or other supplements. This is called a game balancing mechanism.

In fact, I still don't like watching non-human protagonists, especially those from races that are full of malice towards humans. I posted this specifically to ask the author, why did you choose this subject? You can't just create a fun-loving protagonist of an evil race so that you can continue to whitewash your character later on, right?

If you have any suggestions, you can put them forward here. The suggestions in this post will not be deleted, so you can feel free to put them forward. You can also tell me if you feel something is wrong in the plot, and if it is appropriate, it will be modified immediately. I love you, moma 😘

If there is no heroine, why do you have so many women? . If you want to watch the heroine, watch the protagonist without touching anything. I didn't want to see the female protagonist, so I accepted a few more girls. The protagonist's character feels a bit mediocre.

Please keep reading. Only when your reading volume increases, I will be more motivated to write.

Leziren yyds, can you recommend any other Leziren novels?

There is good news and bad news The bad news is that you are on the books The good news is that you are on the books

The subject matter is good and worth looking forward to. There is room for improvement in the writing style and story layout. But I found that every time the protagonist comes back from a game mission, he just plays the game except to strengthen himself and his subordinates, and does not make any other arrangements. For example, if he can't go out to collect intelligence, he should at least let his subordinates collect more intelligence. For example, when the Dark Curtain Bureau came before, he prepared a lease contract that didn't even have dry ink. What kind of intelligence does this have to think it can fool people? Now that we know that something happened in the building and that the Dark Side Bureau will come to investigate, shouldn't we prepare things like these lease contracts in advance? He basically knows nothing about the outside world, and basically knows nothing about the Dark Curtain Bureau. He waits until things come to a head before he is surprised that others are so powerful and progress so fast. Even if he is a Lezi person, he can't just be a Lezi person who doesn't know anything, right? Not to mention how comprehensive the protagonist needs to think about, as long as he spends a little time sitting in front of the computer and playing games for these preparations, he will not need to lower the IQ of the supporting characters in the dark curtain game to get through the plot and get rid of suspicion.

The plot of the protagonist is too little, I don't like the behind-the-scenes drama

How can I put it this way? If this book becomes popular, it will be banned. I have seen this type of book before. If it becomes popular, the book will be gone.

Everyone, if you have any extras you want to add, you can send them out. Please take a look at how to post it specifically. It would be best to mark what it does in real life, so that adding dungeons and the like can help divide tasks. Optional addition if appropriate. —— Also, if you come up with any interesting templates (similar to earthbound ghosts, clowns, scarecrows, nightmares... The best are those that are somewhat different from other weird ones.), You can send them out when the time comes. You can also give some ideas and use them if appropriate. (˵¯͒¯͒˵) Yes, I do play murderous intent.

Tea time Tea time

From Chapter 139, it was about killing so many people under a name, and killing so many people without a name, and giving the broken pages of Amitabha to the director. After the director got it, he had to hand it over at first, then he had to raise a private army, and he had to fight against the Jun team. Yes, Gou is about to show up again. If you don't want people to find you, just don't show up. After you show up, you have to let go at first, then kill everyone, and then write to the director. It feels a bit sudden and abrupt, not smooth at all.

Well written and really enjoyable to read! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on, come on, it's well written, but I'm afraid of being harmed, so take it easy😁😁

The story is good, I hope you don't become a cultivator

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I don't understand. When I saw Chapter 7, I thought the protagonist's identity arrangement was a little too invincible. The matched opponents felt that they had little combat power. The black dog's blood to suppress ghosts was forced by the protagonist, and the vajra was useless. In other words, the worst case scenario for the protagonist is that he cannot get any growth, so he just kills them all and completes the mission with a guarantee? Isn't this a good setting? There's no suspense.

The strength enhancement of Mi Lin and Zhuang Sheng in the subsequent eight-person dungeon was too illogical, and there were probably too many fragments in their pockets. Tens of thousands of disposable props were thrown out. The transformation was too abrupt.

To lower the wits for the sake of lowering the wits, there are too many logical loopholes and the author is not strong enough in writing, so why not engage in a battle of wits and just have fun?

After watching the collection of Kaidan, I feel that whether it is four people, multiple people or one person, the protagonist almost always crushes the game, which is quite boring. I really want to see a close match, not to mention four, but just one. Moreover, the cursed weapon is too outrageous, it is simply a dimensionality reduction attack. With this template, the protagonist is really killing indiscriminately.

I stayed up all night to read it. It was well written. Good luck to the author!

I kept it and forgot about it. I looked through my bookshelf and found the latest update 14 days ago.

At first I thought it was a dark novel, but then the real world turned out to be like the Holy Virgin.

Is there anything similar? I have already started reading the author's second book. But, there are so few.

It's a pity that it was too late to see you

A casual character wants to create a bit of a sad drama, but the emotion explodes without any preparation. It is very uncomfortable to watch and gives people a hard sensational feeling. There are too few details. Generally speaking, the writing style is better and the person is angry. The anger is described directly from the expression to the voice to make the reader feel the emotion. But the author is, he said angrily... It's basically like this, the writing is poor, and then the writing at the end is very messy and there is no main line.

Everything about this book is good, except that the first twenty chapters are too malicious and they are all about finding faults to attack the author, and the design is unreasonable. I suggest that the author should manage the bans that should be banned. Even if someone says that they are banned, it can still survive the current environment where newcomers are discouraged, right?

Where is the author? Say something.