The Xunfeng Sword Master Who Devours the Starry Sky

The plot is gripping and the ideas are unique. Except for the slow update, everything is good. Please speed up the update.

The fairy author actually invited the poisonous god from ancient times and the parents of the heroine with a villainous face. I have really seen each other for a long time. How long has it been? The Internet has developed to the present, and you have successfully reminded me of ancient memories. The mother-in-law shows off all kinds of tricks. Do you want to be with my daughter? If that doesn't work, my daughter will have to find Mr. Xx, who is powerful. In the end, the protagonist worked hard to marry the heroine, and the mother-in-law enjoyed the success and the supreme treatment. It was really intoxicating. . .

Unbelievably, the protagonist cheated on her after one year of marriage; Afterwards, she got pregnant with the protagonist's child; What's even more unbelievable is that the protagonist didn't know that he had a child. I skipped and read it, and after hundreds of thousands of words, the protagonist even became a domain lord and still didn't know that he had a child; The most outrageous thing is that the author probably forgot about it. As mentioned before, there was no plot or ending at the end of the writing, and the character just disappeared.

Can you please stop writing emotional dramas? I think Swallowing Starry Sky fandoms are here to watch this. The stories about sisters and girlfriends written are really blunt. Please @ me when the big brother in the back sees that he writes normally. Thank you.

For fan fiction or other novels, I only have one suggestion right now. If you can't write about sisters, family plots, or emotional scenes, just don't write them.

The routine of ancient novels uses the star-swallowing skin, and even if you are scolded, you will not come out to refute it. The old guy comes back to the world and makes every village a bitch.

The difference between you and Luo Feng's wife, Xu Xin, is hundreds of times and billions of times. This is the gap between you and the platinum-level god. He is a bullshit. You should watch your plot and compare it with others. There is a world of difference between them. One is in the sky and the other is in the abyss.

Nervous? Devouring this world of cultivation and testing has been written by you like a bloody city. Who in the world of cultivation likes to see this from you? Wouldn't it be nice if you just started reading urban literature?

I didn't watch it as soon as I came out of the Sword Realm. The realm that swallows the world is the realm of laws. What did you write?

This introduction successfully aroused my desire to read the comment section and see someone scolding the author. As expected, it turned out to be a lot of poison, more poisonous than I thought.

Chapter 68: Kuro Rikutsuna inexplicably guessed out of thin air that he found the treasure and did not restrain his desires, so he deserved to die. Why are you so disgusting? You just bring in private goods.

It's really disgusting, the heroine's parents are disgusting, the protagonist also had a one-night stand later, and died because Lu Gang was greedy for treasures, you are really 6666666

You are getting more and more outrageous. The protagonist is being suppressed like a grandson. Now, the entire Hai Yao world wants to kill him, and has already encountered an invincible enemy. It still needs to be experienced, 6

The planet-level comprehender of the four laws, the Genius Zhanganwu Universe Nation ranked eighty-fifth, the essence of the laws must be understood to be mentally retarded!

I'm so disappointed. I'm a long-time reader of this book. Why does this book want to screen me out like this? With a bride price of 10 billion, the woman still dares to look down on a genius who can enter an elite training camp? ? You also said it's not difficult. Adding a dog will lead to a happy death.

I suggest the author watch the Swallowed Starry Sky a few more times, and respect the setting of the original work. Time is the most confusing. In the original work, Luo Feng was the master of the universe for hundreds of thousands of years, but you are still the top overlord of the universe after almost 300,000 years.

If I remember correctly, the Wang family is just a God of War family in the original book, right? In the original book, God of War has thousands of family forces like the Wang family on the earth, but there are probably dozens or hundreds of family forces. There are really many forces that the country needs to please. In the original work, the family that the country can easily crush to death has become the target of your favor, and the base market has become the back garden of his home.

What is there to write about when the earth is too big? Have you written about business war? Writing such ink is not as good as urban writing. What about Devouring the Starry Sky? Ugh, disgusting.

What have been written in these two chapters recently? A mere sixth-level attack frightened the Demon God of Xu Zhen. In the original universe, hitting the strongest person in the universe with a sixth-level attack was like scratching an itch. The original universe only limited the attack power. The strongest person in the universe had a defense of at least seven or eight levels. The protagonist's sixth-level strength could barely cope with it at most, but here he actually beats the Demon God of Xu Zhen. Why? Which one has the upper hand, attack, defense, soul, or will, the protagonist? Where's the logic?

My son is also controlled by the soul later on. It's really poisonous.

It does not conform to the original work, and the settings have been changed randomly. Not all the masters of the universe have 10081x genes. There are even almost no masters of the universe with 10081x genes. The strongest ones all have 10081x genes. There is also the Law of Chaos. After reading so many fans, this is the first time I have seen such a weak Law of Chaos. I have been fighting against a demon clan that is close to the Invincible King for decades, and I am still a little bit invincible. Come on, the chaotic airflow of the cosmic sea can annihilate the Venerable. The Law of Chaos is a law understood by the Eternal True God. Complete understanding is the Lord of Chaos. Even if it is just a little bit, it is not something that is close to the Invincible King.

It's so well written that you can understand the law of chaos before you become immortal. Why don't you go to heaven and the law of chaos can only be understood after you become the eternal true god?

The more you write, the worse it gets. When writing fan fiction, you should write it well. At least the combat power and framework should be consistent with the original settings. So what are you writing about? The realm of swords? Is there such a thing in Devour? The combat power is even worse than that of the original work in the end. The original work can be restored to its original state. They have set up the framework for you, but you can't just copy it? Also, what the hell is that about forcibly adding an illegitimate child? I've probably forgotten all the writing about it. There's almost no emotional drama in the film. It's all about nothing.

There are so many typos that I won't say anything. Well, the combat power in the back is completely broken. The world lord can kill the overlord of the universe randomly. The author hasn't read the original work or something.

Stop writing novels and drive screws yourself.

The author of the old book, the quality is guaranteed, I am chasing it, but don't get into it if you have a glassy heart.

No matter which book I am a fan of, if the author dares to write that the protagonist is an indigenous person, I will admire him and say that he is awesome. As for the results, it really depends on fate.

Read a hundred chapters and rate it. The good ones among the Devouring fans. The setting of the indigenous protagonist is relatively novel, and it does write something new. However, the first dozen chapters are a bit immature, and the plot has a few minor flaws. Jiang Fang's place is a big poisonous place. It is estimated that half of the people were poisoned. Otherwise, this book should be a high-quality book. Generally speaking, the author still has some aura for writing books, and after some time he should be able to write more books.

You are too fond of Luo Feng. It is a bit dangerous to get the opportunity, so you don't have to rush to give it to Luo Feng, right? Moreover, only those who have broken through the Realm Master Tongtian Mountain are considered to be geniuses who have emerged in tens of millions of eras, and geniuses who have emerged in tens of millions of eras can only become King Invincible?

I can't speak, so speak less. This book now has 200,000 words, and it is the best one among the Devouring fandoms, at least for now. The good points lie in the following points The characterization is three-dimensional, vivid and impressive. The background explanation has added a lot of patches to the original work. For example, through Mr. Shu's words, the world view and various aspects of life from Nirvana to the plot have been completed. Respect the original work, there is no foresight, and the plot during the period on Earth will not appear ridiculous such as passing it by in one stroke. The golden finger is not unexpected, it still requires the protagonist to work hard and even desperately. Even this golden finger is not as good as the emperor's fate of the original protagonist. The logic is smooth and there is no nonsense. As for the comments in the comment area about fantasy and romance, and that the romance is not well written, if it is not for the anti-fans to start a fight, then it is probably because they are really naive and don't know how to praise others and only find faults. It's just that the writing is a bit short and not enough to read. After reading it for a few hours, it was not satisfying. Many online articles, including those by fans, like to be full of good stuff before being put on the shelves, and then become irritated after being put on the shelves. I hope the authors will not be like that. Most authors like that have no future. The act of cutting leeks is worse than a eunuch.