I Had a Home in 1980

It's a bit wordy, and some of the behaviors are out of touch with the times. For example, calling older women "sister" is practically indecent and could get you arrested. In the early days of reform and opening up, the way women were addressed wasn't so inappropriate, and many terms didn't carry derogatory connotations.

When a book you wrote performs poorly, ask the author to read the book reviews and then carefully reread what they wrote. These misspelled words, incorrect phrases, and grammatical errors are truly a headache to read. I can't help but point out a few typos or punctuation problems every two or three sentences...

Feeling frustrated by what I've read, so I'll say a few words. First, there's too much irrelevant plot and it's too long. The key issue is that important plot points are sandwiched in the middle, so if you skip them, you miss them, and if you don't, it's unpleasant to watch. Secondly, the author lacks crucial knowledge.

I came in based on the synopsis, initially thinking it was about a brilliant geek returning to 1980 to cause trouble. But after 80 chapters, the protagonist only did two things: repair a honeycomb briquette making machine and resell a few mountain bikes.

I'm posting this because it's no wonder so few people are reading it. This book is full of professional knowledge, but the author has branched out dozens of times and hasn't produced a single solid product. He wants to do this today and that tomorrow—it's exhausting to read. Bye! 👋🏻

Five-axis machining centers, high-precision ones must cost tens of millions... Our factory just imported two from Sweden, each costing 12 million. I wonder how much kickback the purchasing department took. I'm so angry! 😫😫😫

I can't stand the constant smoking anymore. You have no idea how cruel it is for someone trying to quit. I can't watch any more, it's too painful.

The author's writing is excellent, but it suffers from a common trait among middle-aged and elderly readers: a tendency to be verbose. The protagonist lacks a clear goal, constantly jumping from one thing to another, giving the impression of drifting through life.

You're talking too much nonsense and rambling on and on.

The main plot is unclear, it lacks literary foundation, it's just rambling and confusing.