I Had a Home in 1980

It's a bit verbose, and some of the behaviors are inconsistent with the characteristics of the times. For example, calling an older woman "sister" is simply a hooligan, and you may be caught. In the early days of reform and opening up, the names given to women were not so inconspicuous, and many titles were not yet derogatory. When it comes to addressing women, it's better to call them big rather than small. Zhu Bajie was asking for information in the bottomless pit of Zengkong Mountain and even asked two female monster grandmothers to please him. Older and higher-ranking people have higher status and have more say. This comes from tradition. In ancient times, unmarried people of the same age were called girls, married people of the same age or slightly younger were called sister-in-law, married people who were slightly older were called sister-in-law, and the older ones were aunts and aunts... In the past, people who were not relatives were called aunties. Only people with high status and low status were called aunties. For example, calling a maid a female helper, etc., Called aunt or aunt. This is not necessarily disrespect, just inequality. The word aunt often has a small connotation in it, and the elder is noble and the young is humble. Sometimes the name aunt has a really derogatory meaning, such as concubine, such as aunt. In different eras, the meaning of titles is different. Girls and young ladies used to have the connotation of being a prostitute, and they both had the meaning of being noble, but the word aunt gradually became more popular after it broke the traditional culture.

When the score of a book you write is poor, ask the author to read the book review and then carefully reread the content you wrote. These typos, wrong words, and broken sentences really give people a headache. Almost every two or three sentences I can't help but find a few typos or sentence breaks...

I feel depressed, let me say a few words. First, there are too many irrelevant plots and they are long. The key is that the important plot is sandwiched in the middle. If you skip it, you will miss it. If you skip it, it will be uncomfortable. Second, the author lacks key knowledge. It is very troublesome to make DC motors brushless, but our country has always used AC, and AC motors cannot use brushes. It doesn't matter if you don't have enough knowledge, you can figure it out just by disassembling an electric fan. The whole thing is made up, and the more you watch it, the more embarrassing it becomes. Third, if you still understand the low-cost electric fan, you can get a so-called black-tech water-cooled fan. Everyone in the know knows that this is a typical IQ tax product that is harmful to the body. The dry air in the north may be better, but the humid air in the south makes it very easy to get various rheumatic diseases. Fourth, there is no logic. Mountain bikes were sold in the 1980s. The author really dares to think that even if you get a 24 or 26, it will be in line with the times. Mountain bikes can neither carry people nor goods. Fifth,... Forget it, I won't write it anymore. Although there are a lot of typos, the sentences are still smooth and the subject matter is okay. I'll straighten out the logic and solidify the knowledge points. Let's start a book and rewrite it. If you don't like it, delete it. Goodbye.

When I read the introduction, I thought it was a big guy who returned to 1980 to cause trouble, but when I saw Chapter 80, the protagonist only did two things, repaired a briquette making machine and resold a few mountain bikes. The rest is just water, drawing a lot of design drawings, bragging about what I can do better, but the result is still nothing. Most of them just introduce some things from the 1980s, and some of them are introduced incorrectly. The black-and-white TVs of the 1980s didn't even have a remote control. They were all knob-type TVs. How could you turn off the channel automatically?

Post a post, no wonder few people read it. This book is full of professional knowledge, but the author has opened dozens of branches and has not produced a formal product. I want to do this today, and I want to do that tomorrow, I'm so tired from watching, bye👋🏻

Five-axis linkage machining center, the high-precision one costs tens of millions... Our factory just imported two units from Sweden, each costing 12 million. I don't know how much rebate the purchaser received. I'm so angry 😫😫😫

I can't stand it anymore if I keep smoking. You don't know how cruel this is to a person who quits smoking. I can't continue watching, it's so uncomfortable.

The author's writing style is very good, but he has a nagging problem that many middle-aged and elderly people have. The writing is very wordy, and the protagonist has no clear goals. He always looks here and there, a bit confused, and feels like he is muddling along. The timeline is a bit inconsistent. It always feels like the protagonist has done a lot of things. Looking back, only one day has passed, which makes people feel very unreal. The protagonist should be more dazzling and shock more people. It should look more relaxed and eye-catching.

There's so much nonsense, Rory.

The main plot is unclear, it lacks literary foundation, it is just chatty and confused.