Starting in the Mess Hall at Lake Changjin

In fact, the equipment you bring is a big failure. With the little things you have, you might as well hand it over to the country and let the country study it. What is the use of bringing it to the battlefield? And if you want to join the army, how will you pass the test? If you bring your own weapons, and you have never passed the test, you will not be afraid of being regarded as a spy.

The writing should be concise and the language should be smoother. The main and supporting characters seem to be stuttering when listening to the book.

The word cooking is not mentioned much in daily life nowadays, right? Is it so fancy?

To be honest, this kind of subject matter cannot be written at all. If you have a little knowledge of the historical background, you will know that this is a large-scale encounter and a tough battle. Everyone is following orders to attack the tough battle. There is no room for extra play. The commander is also the commander-in-chief who fights tough battles.

Has the author carefully observed film and television works such as Changjin Lake? Wu Wanli is written like a good student at the beginning, but in fact, at the beginning of the movie Changjin Lake, Wu Wanli is obviously a character similar to the gangster in the movie Eight Hundred Middle Concession. Wu Wanli does not have the political consciousness of a PLA soldier before he becomes a qualified PLA soldier. For Wu Wanli's character in the book, you can refer to the character of Li Yunlong. He may have a ruffian spirit, but it is more realistic.

American army? U. S. Military? Isn't it okay to write about the US military?

He is also an old writer, so he should not be cut off

I finished reading Chapter 8 with my nose pinched. The appearance of modern equipment is the biggest poisonous point. Maybe the author got to know the military through games and anti-Japanese dramas. I hope the author writes better and better and succeeds in refining fans.

Can you write it more simply? It makes me uncomfortable.

With so much equipment, how can it pass the review? Even if it's a novel, it has to be a little more reasonable.