I Am in the Anomaly Management Bureau Simulation Game

If you don't know how to write emotional lines, just don't write them, okay? It looks so embarrassing.

I don't believe it when I see so many people saying that the love line is awkward. After reading it, I can only say that if you can't write a good love line, you don't have to write it. Anyway, there are many people who like to have no heroine. Sorry, farewell

No, author, are you serious about this plot development?

The emotional line is a major drawback of this book. I think even a book without a female protagonist would be better than this one.

Dear author, your first two books are very good. Why haven't you upgraded them to level two?

Newbies and new books, please collect them, read them, and ask for everything, thank you! ! !

This is okay, but there are too few people watching, and the emotional line is a bit awkward. Readers can easily not tell which one is the simulation.

Almost half of the dozen or so comments are saying that the emotional scene is not good. You can imagine how bad it is.

Things were fine before I met Wang Xin again, but after I met Wang Xin, there was nothing I wanted to see. He told Li Ming adamantly that he had the ability to cause trouble, but when he got into trouble, he always wanted to be at home and let the tall man take the blame. Although I turned on God's perspective, I really think about the protagonist's thinking. I can find the protagonist by sorting out all the interpersonal relationships in Wang Xin's family! Moreover, he is a fortune teller who can predict the protagonist's fortune, which is different from ordinary people. Xiaohu who is equipped can know that no matter which character is the master, it is a failure. So is it necessary to open more? Male combat, female magic, brawny flesh, dwarf agile assassin, different characters in different dungeons, developing interpersonal relationships with different characters, writing group portraits are better than yours. Thank you for reading my complaint. I just want the author to look at it. You don't have to do what I say. I just hope that the author can make progress.

So far, it is quite well written and worth reading.

I just saw more than 30 pictures... It gave me a weird feeling. It's an emotional drama. Although the protagonist and Wang Ting are childhood sweethearts and have a good relationship, the protagonist has never been in contact with her, and the reader knows nothing about these two, and then suddenly they appear together. A copy, and then started to say that he is destined to be my xx woman, it seems to be this sentence, it is outrageous, and the original person does not even know Wang Ting's thoughts, and he has always been a good girl. In such a relationship, they usually treat it as a younger sister. The protagonist is because of this I just fell in love with it, and then what is the main content? I feel like I just downloaded one copy after another... There is almost no real-life content, and then there is whether his ability in the game can be applied to reality, and the little rabbit said that you can have him if you let him reach a certain level. According to normal people's thinking, you shouldn't summon him first to have a look. After all, people know what it is, and the protagonist himself doesn't know. There is nothing wrong with it, but it just feels weird. Personal thoughts, don't comment.

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The first part was very well written, and I thought I could keep watching it, but from the moment Wang Ting appeared on the scene, the plot was drawn out to the end. The plot of the living dead was very toxic, and the second part of Alcatraz left people scratching their heads as to what the author was going to write. I really couldn't watch it any longer.