Pirate: Accidentally Restrained the Esper

There are still some Devil Fruits that can restrain this Teigu. No matter how strong you are in controlling water, you will be nothing if someone freezes you.

It is normal for Kaido, an old villain, to die. I just want to ask, is the Oden family finished?

It's so well written. Don't write about pirates next time.

The only drawback at the moment is that Yamato's father Kaido died here. It feels a bit poisonous, but it will start to get better later.

It's too boring to read. Less than 40 chapters, the male protagonist is less than ten years old, 78 young female protagonists have been accepted, all the characters, abilities, etc. Have been rewritten, and this system is really awkward, except +attributes+give a Teigu, nothing more. No creativity, is this the Zhan Chitong template pirate? Summary: No creativity, no emotional line description, combat power growth is simple and boring, the system settings stretch the hips,

One Piece fandom does not eat fruits. The system text can only produce the Teigu that cuts red eyes. The upper limit of the Teigu is not as high as the fruit. It is poisonous.

Is Bellobetti that good girl who encourages others with her upper body naked?

Also, why do you want to catch Zhanmei and masturbate? Is there nothing to summon from other worlds?

This author also wrote 3 pirate books?

Very strange! Is there a problem with writing Kaido to death? If you can mention it and kill it, why leave it for him to develop? Are you here to see Kaido? Then why don't you just change the book and write about Kaido? It's inexplicable.

Water dragon? ! ? ! What dragon? ? Ah ba ah ba! #@/：：；... Shuilongjin! ! ! !

Hahaha! ! Luffy's mother is a Celestial Dragon. I see how many fan fiction writers have been stabbed in the back by Oda this time.

What kind of water is the protagonist's water dragon? Why do so many fans write that people with abilities will be restrained by water?

The hostess gives me a red-haired daughter Uta

I feel like I could write about Momonosuke traveling through time. This guy really looks like a protagonist. It's better to replace him directly

To be honest, the writing is not bad, there are no poisonous points, the plot is very smooth and coherent, the characters are not very specific, after all, the number of words is small, it is understandable, and the daily life is also very interesting. Overall, it is good food.

The author is great, can there be more passerby characters? Apart from the main characters, the rest are just some code names such as miscellaneous passers-by. I hope the author can correct this a lot.

As long as you write about Zhan Crimson Eyes, I will give you a thumbs up. As long as you write comprehensive comics, I will give you a thumbs up. As long as you write about time travel, I will give you likes. As long as you write novels, I will give you a thumbs up. As long as you appear in my field of vision, I will give you a thumbs up.

Looking forward to getting the ability to use ice

I just want to ask if you can add the names of passerby characters, otherwise it would look too dramatic. Can the author create his own characters?

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Is the protagonist Ignace or Naxi?

Why don't you guys show up, H, picture? Circle, figure

Kaido is dead, what are the arrangements for those little guys? Jack, fly six packs