From the Moment He Broke into His Master's Daughter's Body, He Became the Immortal Emperor.

Many people are talking about the issue of the second senior sister. Let me spoil it in advance. Bai Weiming was the princess of the previous dynasty, and her relatives were killed by Ji Guang's father. She was using Ji Guang to plan the restoration of the country from the beginning. She had no feelings for him, only hatred, so there was no ntr behavior.

It's pretty cool to be able to write such a stupid, scumbag and irresponsible protagonist👍🏻

The portrayal of the female characters is okay, but the IQ of the protagonist can be appropriately improved. He is always said to be a powerful immortal emperor, but his performance is like a fledgling boy. Also, I agree with another book friend. Don't keep writing plots where you can't die. You can just go with the flow. If you can die, it's good. If you don't, just go on like this.

In recent chapters, I would like to give some suggestions to the author. I saw some chapter reviews and book reviews written about ntr which caused discomfort. The main reason for the discomfort may be that the protagonist and the senior brother have no conflict of interest. Judging from the previous plot, they even take care of the protagonist. This leads to the sudden ntr big brother, which makes the protagonist give readers a bad impression. If it can be changed, it would be better to change it. Either write in the front that the senior brother hates the protagonist and there is a conflict of interest between the two parties, or polish this part of the plot. If it doesn't work, you can write less of the part describing the senior brother, so that there won't be so much interaction between the senior brother and the protagonist. After all, this is still Seven Points, not a pornographic network, and the protagonist is not a villain.

It's hard to describe this protagonist... He has no IQ and no brains.

Bai Weiming, the heroine, can only say that the author is young and ill. He insists on writing this kind of plot even though he knows that readers don't like it. If you don't pounce on it, who will pounce on it?

Let's talk about it again. I really stopped reading Bai Weiming's book, but later because of the shortage of books, I was unwilling to give up this kind of high-quality book source, and then I read it again. This previous setting should have been mentioned earlier, this should have been paved earlier, and the content was connected. This book would be invincible. I feel that it is a top-A book, but now it can only be rated as top-B.

This is written as if it were written more than ten or twenty years ago, but the author has just come to shore and his style has not yet changed.

You can write it. , But if you really die, I feel that this book will have a different breakthrough, and it will probably become popular.

After reading the introduction, I felt that Da Neng was being plotted. The unknown existence felt that Da Neng might threaten him if he broke through again, so he pushed the protagonist to become the Immortal Emperor. However, the protagonist is incomplete, which means that the protagonist cannot cultivate to perfection. Similarly, Da Neng is incomplete without the protagonist. Nor can it be perfect. This will eliminate the threat.

Good guy, the author has a lot of thoughts, and he has put a lot of effort into combating piracy.

I took a look, this book ntr

It hurts, it hurts too much. I said I would be good to my senior brother while doing fake NTR things. It really doesn't look good. Brothers, when the relationship between the three of them is clear, kick me and take care of me (Master is really good)

Okay, you want to open a harem? If you don't open a harem, you won't be able to write?

I really can't believe that the author is actually a newcomer, I thought it was a trumpet account opened by a great god or platinum. The plot is very good so far, but I just hope that there won't be any Empress Dowager stories, which are just as meaningful as they are meant to be. Taking so many of them will affect the viewing experience. If you do six, seven or eight, it will be boring to death.

I was thinking, since I can change my memory, why not just slap him to death? That would be faster, but it doesn't make sense logically.

This novel gave me the feeling of watching a soap opera

Personal opinion: I feel that it is better for the protagonist's attitude to slowly change. In the beginning, he only wants to die, but he can't. Then he slowly goes through some things and no longer wants to die. If he dies, he will get what he wants. If he doesn't die, it will go with his heart. Face life with a fearless attitude and a positive attitude. Otherwise, the entire article would be about begging for death, which would feel a bit boring, and the protagonist's mentality would also be a bit impetuous.

I read it overnight two days ago. I took a look at the last one I read a few years ago, and then looked at the author's update frequency. I feel suspended. I actually quite like this novel. I also cast a monthly vote, but I have to admit that this novel is actually very poorly written and has many problems. The characters of the four female protagonists are actually very delicate. I am also very satisfied with the description and progress of some meaty scenes. However, due to the setting of not being able to die for real, in order to promote the development of the plot, the description of the characters is too heavy. Then there is the realm and combat power, because the protagonist wants to become an Immortal Emperor directly, so he is always downgrading, which seems very vain Then there is the writing style, which is too wild. In human terms, it is just a strategy for several female protagonists. The progress and techniques are too fierce. If it were Qidian in the past, it would actually look like this, but now Qidian has basically banned these wild ones, and everyone's aesthetics have changed. It's probably the difference between 18 and 18G It may also be the reason for NTR. Although it's a pity for the eunuch, the author actually has nothing wrong with stopping the loss. It can only be said that the author still needs to learn the lessons of this book. There's actually nothing wrong with an outline. But you need to pay attention to the setting, whether you can eat it for a while or eat the whole book. And you need to control the style of painting and tone it down. Although everyone denounces it, the most popular thing in Qidian right now is the marginal game. Don't get first blood like this one. Just start letting yourself go. The female protagonists have a lot of fun with various ways of playing, but the style of painting can easily fall apart completely. All I can say is, ah, it's actually a miracle that this book is not blocked now. It may also be due to low grades. Come on author.

Fortunately, I didn't read the chapters on the shelf, otherwise I would have wasted money again.

It's good to read, but the main character is a newbie. It's the first time I feel this way after reading a novel in so many years.

I raised him to death after two months...

I hope the author gets better soon and will update if I want to read it😁😁😁

It feels good, but I think the author may want eunuchs. Most of them are eunuchs at seven o'clock, 😭😭😭

I watched an AI video to read the original novel. I enjoyed watching it but suddenly it disappeared 🙂🙂🙂🙂

Let me tell you my opinion, there are details, but not many. If you observe carefully, you can feel the change, and you will feel that the change of the second senior sister is excusable. And so far, there are no poisonous points in the chapters updated so far. It is still a relatively good novel, I hope the author will work hard! More 🤓

Understand everything

The writing is quite good, and there is NTR ( ఠൠఠ ) which I love to watchﾉ

Waiting for a big outbreak next month. There is nothing I can do. I hope the author gets better 😁

It was very well written and I finished it in one go. I read the book for two hours, one and a half hours of which I spent holding my phone with one hand, and the other half of which I spent making the bed because I accidentally spilled high-calcium milk on the bed with my other hand.