Phantom Bug Apocalypse

I read your beginning If nothing else, you are crazy about signing the contract Chapter One Every inch of land is precious, and a hundred words will give you the protagonist. Don't you know? What's the use of a lot of non-existent environmental descriptions? This style of writing is what editors hate the most There is no protagonist at the beginning, and there is a dialogue between grandfather and granddaughter. What's the point? Any editor who sees this kind of writing method that does not cater to the market and has no reliable market verification will not sign it

I'm so impressed. Whose little cat is trying to steal food from me?

Every time I see you sending a code word record on the assistant, it comes right away.

Are all assistants here? ⚆_⚆

I always thought you signed a contract. Can you still read the book at Qidian without signing a contract?

You can delete this post after reading it After reading a few chapters, make some suggestions The protagonist is just an ordinary person who can run faster than ordinary people, and he has a good brother who is trustworthy and depends on him for life and death There are already many themes in zombie novels But those who stand out are those who have golden fingers, and they can rise to the top by fighting monsters. Level route If there is such a cheat, it is best to show it in the first few pictures If it is just about the survival, struggle and growth of ordinary people in the apocalypse, it is better to spend a few hours watching a movie. At least the heroine in the movie is superhuman and decisive, and the time spent is still short.

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I got it from an assistant and after a brief look at it, I found that the author's writing style is very good, but it is a bit inappropriate for today's fast-paced novels. The first page that is most important to attract readers is the description of the scenery. If you are not a master, foreshadowing is of no use. First, you have to get the readers to read. I also flipped through the comment section. I couldn't figure out who the protagonist was at the beginning of Chapter 1 and Chapter 2. Of course, it might be because I didn't read it carefully. Although this kind of beautiful writing is very good, it is difficult for readers to read carefully word by word. For example, I basically read at a glance. So, the first chapter only talks about a few words of dialogue between an old man and a little girl? Nowadays, they say the golden chapter, emm... Except for some readers who like to read this, it is difficult to attract mass readers.

This is not an accurate review