Krypton Artist

The creativity of the protagonist who is miserable is okay, but the same routine is repeated later on. The protagonist is miserable and vomits blood, and then does not die, and passers-by are moved and cry. It is boring to watch too much. Moreover, I personally feel that the gender setting of the protagonist is wrong. If it is a female, it would be fine. Opposites attract, and it is understandable to be beautiful and miserable. However, a man who is miserable can attract this kind of "concern" that goes beyond the normal from a patient of the same sex in the same bed. It seems a bit weird and gleeful. And it's not right for a man to be miserable all the time (I don't mean to discriminate against women🐶)

I just want to see the main character die on stage after his performance in the finale. . .

Finished spreading flowers! Is the protagonist really dead? So damn meow! Open the champagne!

List 5 serious shortcomings of this book. The first major shortcoming is the subject matter; the subject of this book is Wen Chao Gong. To be honest, the subject of Wen Chao Gong is poorly written. I can only say 0 points in terms of subject innovation. Writing about Wen Chao Gong can write a good book, but you have to have a strong grasp of the interesting points and plot of the article. The second shortcoming: the lack of grasp of the cool points. There is a system in the book, and there is a copy of the article, so this book is positioned as a cool article. The cool point of this book is to express your life, copy songs, and win awards. From beginning to end, there are more than 300,000 words. This process has been repeated. The first time I won the song copying, it can be seen as a refreshing release. This process lasted a full 300,000 words. The only thing that makes you happy is winning a prize for copying a song. What else can you do? Third shortcoming: The plot is weak. The protagonist wakes up in the Fourth Hospital and has written more than 300,000 words. The protagonist is still in the Fourth Hospital and the ward has not been changed. How about your plot promotion? You can also use some good medicine to extend your life in disguise. Plot promotion is one aspect. There is no daily plot either. Daily plot is a buffer and adjustment to the overall rhythm. This book has no daily plot. There is also the main character, a coder who becomes a god after one song and becomes a song artist. He has never learned the staff and then directly draws a staff of 20 lines per page. This plot twist is too blunt. I have talent, so I won the Nobel Prize after graduating from elementary school. Is this possible? The fourth shortcoming: the supporting characters and the passers-by are weak. Strictly speaking, this book only has two supporting characters. One is the grandfather I met in the ward, and the childhood sweetheart whom I lived with when I was a child. The husband is responsible for helping the protagonist cheat and solve all problems, and the sweetheart is responsible for unrequited love. What about other supporting characters, 1 with 2 with 3, passers-by, and villains. There are none of these. How can the protagonist be shown to be awesome and the story vivid? The fifth shortcoming: no sense of substitution. There is nothing wrong with the waste chai flow starting with a decline and then a rise, but the waste point is that you have to stand up after the second cool point. You can't be useless all the time, but the protagonist is really useless all the time. A full 300,000 words have been spent. The reader is required to keep bringing in a useless person who is lying in bed and will die at any time. Is it possible? There is no sense of immersion, so how can I continue reading.

I want to see the reflection of the world after Yue Li left, I want to see people remember Yue Li after music develops, regret his untimely death, and be jealous of talents, I want to see Heizi slapped in the face, I want to see everyone's respect and understanding for him, and I even want to see a movie adapted from his experience released Although the article has been completed, there are still regrets, please add a sequel

If the protagonist never dies, then he will be a gangster...

I would like to ask the author if he has been poisoned by dirty words.

The terminal illness was exposed and he could die at any time. When fans around the world found out, they were heartbroken and silently lost their fans in unison. See if the pig's feet are dead

A few years later, there was an article about the famous musician Yue Li in a textbook: "He grabbed the throat of fate" Yue Li, who was born in an orphanage, has a "musical talent" that is astonishing throughout history. However, as an orphan with no one to rely on, he was forced to become a musician in life. He was a programmer, but God's will played a trick on him, and he suffered from a terminal illness in his prime. Before his death, Yue Li struggled with death. He lamented the unfairness of fate and was unwilling to pass away silently. In the struggle against fate, he created unparalleled works one after another. He said: I want to hold the throat of fate, fate will never make me surrender!

Read a few chapters. How to say it. The main character in this book is so miserable. I have to spend my life to change the work, and I don't have a few days to live. The key is that the energy consumed in arranging the music will shorten the lifespan due to the energy consumption. . . This is too exaggerated. Are you going to spend the entire book in the ward? I read a book before that was also terminally ill, but that one was so energetic, and could still hold concerts, wander around, and at most faint when the plot required it. It's two extremes from this one. . . Isn't it neutralized?

The male protagonist went bald during chemotherapy and suddenly had no sense of empathy. He could be a sickly handsome boy, or even better.

This novel is probably about the author venting his inner sadness through Yue Li.

After reading the previous part, I feel that the protagonist can only live for two or three years at most. It will be difficult to end without death! Unless you treat everyone as a fool

After reading the introduction and not reading the content, I wanted to know how to write the book One Hundred Years of Solitude. The plot of the original book is very boring and has no shocking points. It cannot be substituted for Western stories at all.

After the author rewrote it, I always felt something was wrong when I read it. I wanted to say something about it. The protagonist was a professor before time travel, so he couldn't remember all the songs, right? Then, the original character came out of the Qidian Orphanage and became a senior migrant worker. It's not very reasonable for him to produce such a good work all of a sudden. But it's still great, come on, author

There are no fifty chapters this week, so I can't get over the hurdle of deleting the book!

Fans' voices are so loud that it's unjustifiable even if I don't die.

Your protagonist is a bit of a doctor.

I like the author's professionalism in writing books, and I'm looking forward to the next one.

Hahaha, you are the one who shared the melons, right? I found the melons recorded in the group chat. There really is this book.

I also read part of the first edition before deleting it. I think the writing in the second edition is much better than the first edition. I couldn't help but jump from the pirated edition to the genuine edition. Unfortunately, it ended too suddenly! I hope the author will not post it because of temporary poor results, come on!

Is there any extra😭😭😭

However, I am just a layman, and it is full of highly artistic recommendations! Oh, I can't stand it anymore

In fact, I always feel that this one is better than the others. Because it can express the protagonist's inner misery through music. It was a creation that was more than just a performance. Similar to the combination of a writer and a calligrapher, I can't help but write well and write well. Similar to composers and singers. And this book vividly shows it, the feeling that a scholar who is a confidant dies and mourns more than the death of his heart. I have always felt that music, like writing articles, requires a kind of feeling and resonance, and then the feelings and emotions can be expressed through music. Therefore, the composer's feelings for me are much greater than those of the performers simply based on the weight of history. I very much agree with the protagonist's almost tragic ending, because he has always been a popular character. Probably every musician and writer has extraordinary experiences and emotions that bring their works to the pinnacle. Most of them are painful. So that makes me more satisfied with the protagonist. In the end, I still hope that the author will make a small side story to commemorate and express condolences to the protagonist and hungry readers.

First time order, please give me more attention🌝

All I can say is, why not read the book?

Wow(⁠≧⁠▽⁠≦⁠)

Give it a try

After watching the video describing Li Cheng, why do I have such a sense of déjà vu?

I actually grabbed a sofa today? !