The Wandering Swordsman

There are many problems. One is the name, which is written about Zhutian. In fact, most of the Zhutian written now are about martial arts, and few people write about animation, so they cannot attract anime readers. The second is that the writing style needs to be improved. Three is that the protagonist will suffer amnesia and weakness when changing worlds. Half of the worlds are changed after serious injuries and amnesia. Nowadays, serious injuries and amnesia are a taboo in online writing. Most people want to run away when they see it, even if you write it, you will find it back soon. Four are ways to change the world. Many of them are suddenly changed halfway through writing, which is unfriendly to readers who know the plot of the world. The five characters are that the protagonist has a changeable personality and is aloof and silent. From time to time, he will give long speeches to teach the protagonists in each world. He will teach the protagonists in each world. If you write too much, you will get tired of it. It is probably like this. The protagonist appears in the new world, and then meets the anime protagonist after a while, and then finds out that the protagonist is very talented and appreciates it and then teaches it. This is the case in almost every world. Sixth are emotional issues. In fact, first of all, the relationship between the heroine and the protagonist is not well written. Secondly, it is better not to write about the protagonist who doesn't know if he will come back or when he will come back. It is better not to write it. Seventh, hatred is no longer popular among protagonists. The protagonist suddenly recalls something and then becomes more powerful. It is also a bit embarrassing to see that the author's writing is not good enough.

First of all, let me say something. I know that few people like to watch the plot of 86, so I will try my best to finish the explanation in about five chapters and then change to the next world. I have also read some messages in the comment area, saying that I have no main line, or that my writing is poor, etc. I fully agree with this (not an irony, it is true). Actually, I wrote this novel on a whim, so I didn't have an outline or an idea. I basically just wrote whatever came to my mind. My writing skills are not good, and readers should be able to tell. Anyway, I will keep on writing. When I really have nothing to write about, it should be the end. In the next world, I plan to write about Qin Shi Mingyue. If you don't like it, you can skip it, or replace it with another world. Considering that some readers may not see what I wrote in the author's words at the end of the chapter, I wrote the World Collection directly in the book review, so that more people can see it. Then there is the world collection. It is still the same old rule. I will write about everything I read. It is only a matter of time. As for saying that I haven't read the novel, I haven't read it. For example, I haven't read The Sea of ​​Fire. I only read the novel Yun Pass. If you don't mind, I can write about it too. Then write the world you want to see in the comments. You can use parentheses at the end of the sentence to indicate if you don't mind passing it by. This way I will understand what it means when I see it, and I can write it. Thank you all for your support.

There is no doubt that there will be a single heroine, but there are two subsequent developments. One is that Chen Wuya and Chelsea confirm their relationship, but Chelsea will not exist after this world, and they will only be mentioned once or twice at most. The other is that Chen Wuya and Chelsea confirm their relationship, and then the two of them go to various worlds together. Which one do you prefer?

I can finally see that the protagonist's troubles all stem from his birth. He is confused about the way forward because he doesn't know anything. But if you change the protagonist from Earth, he has a system in his hand, plus the perspective of reading novels all the time, he can just travel across the world. You are not afraid of waiting for your own people to grow old. Is it true that reversing time and space is rare among the heavens? Maybe you will be confused, but there is definitely no protagonist like this

It's boring. This book only aims to overthrow the original plot force. It doesn't dig deeper at all. It changes the rhythm and it's boring to read. Adding a useless pig's foot has no purpose at all. Every world is messed up. I can't read it anymore. The plot problems are too poorly arranged.

Why is there a Legend of Sword and Fairy Tale inserted into a comprehensive comic? Isn't this equivalent to having a cake suddenly stuffed into your mouth?

If it's written as a Japanese manga fanfic and it's covered in Chinese names, I'll just give it a zero score.

Has the author read The Arrival of the Sword Master in the Second Dimension? It reminds me a little bit of being seriously injured and dying in another world. There is no limit, the harem is the king

They are all unpopular worlds, or worlds that you have never seen at all, and you don't want to see them.

A nanny who wanders through the heavens. . .

Writing about swordsmanship requires very high writing skills. The main character's fights are extremely boring.

The writing is quite good, but it seems too sad. The discussion about me is very different from other slasher novels of the same type. I feel like a philosopher.

After reading dozens of chapters, there is no ups and downs in the plot. It is very bland and cannot arouse the reader's interest. But if it's for love, for those "worlds", then please, the author, keep writing.

It's been 23 years and I'm still writing a protagonist who doesn't know the plot. . .

I want to ask, is it a manga but you don't know the plot at all?

The protagonist is an ancient person and has no idea about the plot, so I'll say goodbye.

Suddenly I found that the status changed from serialization to completed... But I guess I am still observing...

This book is suitable for people who have just started to read novels. If you have read too many decisive killings or strange things like me, if you look back at this novel, you will only find it boring and a bit unpopular. After reading a few chapters, you can probably determine the protagonist's behavior style, which is similar to a neutral one. In addition, the protagonist in the world has no idea what will happen or the situation of the protagonist and supporting characters, so it gives people a feeling of being kind and merciless. It is too bland.

The protagonist is often suppressed too hard and it's not fun to watch at all.

This new chapter of yours is completely out of line with practical teaching, so just cut it out. Hey, I don't have the perseverance. This book can be discarded.

It's a rare food. The protagonist is growing up all the time. His awkward personality is quite reasonable. After all, human nature is quite complicated. I'd like to give you a lot of support from the author.

Thanks to the author, I finally found a novel that was good to me in the cesspit.

I'm going to check out your updated chapter. The content is barely connected to the above, and I can't write practical teaching anymore. What's most speechless is that you portray Chen Wuya as very contradictory. He seems to be cold and ruthless, but in fact he is sometimes nosy and warm-hearted. This is so capricious, and he doesn't look like he is cold on the outside but hot on the inside.

Practical teaching is really fast, forget it

It's completely incomprehensible. Reading a novel is to bring the perspective of the protagonist. It's too much for you to read a novel and be fed dog food. You don't even understand the point of going there in Sword Art Online just to eat dog food?

There is a surplus of dog food, so don't buy it if you don't like it!

The growth path at the beginning is quite interesting, and the daily life after Invincible is not bad, but many worlds are not introduced, and there is no foreshadowing. It is too confusing and can't be watched (I haven't finished it, just record it)

Can anyone tell me more about this book?