As Lovely as Ever

Chapter 71 is surprisingly written. At first I felt that these two aunts and nephews acted like secret traps. I couldn't help but say a few words. On the one hand, it is really rude and strange for a middle-aged man who only has a slight business relationship with his niece to visit his young aunt and nephew who is single and weak because he has made a lot of money, and then stays to exchange glasses with the beautiful woman. On the other hand, there is only one young aunt living in this house who is practicing spiritual practice, a famous female gentleman who has been exterminated from the clan. She is weak and has no one to rely on. There are only a few people in the house, and it is not enough to keep the door open. How dare you invite a strong man who has only met your aunt for the first time to drink at home? What do you think? Not to mention the melon fields and plum trees, it is completely because I am afraid that I will live too well and ignore my own safety. Not to mention too much, what should a man do if he goes crazy under the influence of alcohol? What should I do if the wine is not good? What should I do if I lose my moral character after drinking? With the Internet being so developed, it's not difficult to know what weird things happen after drinking, right? Even if he is not crazy, a man smelling of alcohol wanders out of a house where only two abnormal women live. Is this when the people in Chaoyang District are just for show? It's impossible for serious people to do this. So, if it's just to find a reason for my aunt to meet a man, anything is fine, including a chance encounter while shopping, right? If you have to gamble with limited human nature with unlimited temptations, even gods can't guarantee that nothing will happen! This is really wrong, very, very wrong.

I won't talk about other things, but the author is really great. Some of the turns are too sudden, and there is no clue or mention at the beginning. When the key is reached, he is suddenly ready and has a countermeasure... It is really unbearable. For example, the heroine left home at the age of 10 and earned a big house in 3 years. Money, you said it would be okay if she planned it with her aunt, but it would be amazing if she could do it on her own. Even if she really relied on herself, it would be better to give her some foreshadowing. After reading those few chapters, as a reader, I am as confused as my aunt, and I really hate this kind of elders asking about the situation. Junior said You'll know when you get there, trust me, etc. This is not about giving gifts or playing house. When something happens, you don't open your mouth to explain it clearly. You keep trusting me and trusting me. What a ghost. Moreover, the protagonist in the article is only 13 years old. The adult aunt really doesn't ask anything. She is independent and smart like before. The contrast between the characters is so great, so fragmented, and the plot of a sudden loss of intelligence is really stupid... Even if I tell a few short stories to highlight the heroine's intelligence, it can still improve the number of words (crossed out), and enrich the character... It's a bit much to say... Personal opinion, don't blame me 😥

Please... It's the amnesia routine again How long have you waited for the man to finally show up, and then he lost his memory... I really want to give up the article, it would be better to have amnesia all day long, and when the memory recovers, I will have to talk about half a million words? ?

The author's writing is really smooth and has a much better look and feel than ordinary cool writing. The characters are distinct and the pace is not sluggish. But this adoption joke is really hard to get past. Good people are all adopted... It's really weird. Since he was adopted, ancient literature has turned into fantasy literature. First of all, the aunt is described as such a well-behaved person, how could she have a private life-long contract with a man? If the background was more Tang Dynasty and the atmosphere was open, it would make sense, but the aunt is a bit uncharacteristic, and she seems to value small etiquette but no great righteousness. It is really difficult to hold a child in the key scene. We are a Confucian blood society, and confusing blood is a serious crime. How come it is so easy to get a child and replace it, whether it is a manager or an aunt? Auntie, let's not mention it. Does the heroine's nominal mother have any other unnatural identity? How can a musician contact outsiders, bribe his subordinates, and get the heroine under the hood? Are all the people in Yun Mansion dead? The heroine doesn't have to fight with the Yun Mansion at all. Her aunt's bloodline is doubtful and her biological father suppressed her in the same year. If anyone is exposed casually, the Yun Mansion will be finished.

The writing is smooth, but it seems a little immature when it comes to plotting plots, but as you read it seems to be getting better at it! As for the plot, I thought it would be limited to the domestic civil war, but it was written that war is coming. It seems that the war is more about promoting the emotional line. I am not too interested in the war and the emotional line, so I didn't read the follow-up. The author Jun in the book has worked hard to create a growth-oriented heroine who puts her career first. As the mystery of the heroine's life experience is revealed, her background and strength have continued to improve. However, the overall feeling is that the heroine is still missing something, and the look and feel is a bit average. For example, from a business perspective, the heroine opens a shop to run errands for others. In layman's terms, it is a modern express delivery + purchasing agent business model. In ancient times, it can be said that the business sense is very keen and the vision is forward. The heroine is determined to "reach the world" in the business territory. It can be seen that she is quite ambitious and dares to think and do! The character design and business blueprint are both very beautiful, and the author is very bold in writing. As for how to realize it? But the key issues are often brushed aside, giving people the feeling of a castle in the air, which is very empty! To be honest, in ancient times when transportation was underdeveloped and inconvenient, and even travel safety could not be guaranteed, it was not impossible to engage in express delivery and purchasing agents. The premise was that you must have transportation advantages and security capabilities that others cannot replace. Obviously, the heroine does not have these two conditions, nor does she have sufficient funds or a strong background to support her. Even the management staff for the initial start-up were borrowed from the Chu Family Trading Company! What should I do? ! Just like the author Jun just said "I have a way" to solve the problem of difficult transportation of colored glass! Then? Whatever else is there, it's all solved! . . Well, I spent a lot of ink and introduced excellent business ideas, and then ran to continue the power struggle.

It feels like both the layout of the plot and the portrayal of the characters seem to be just a little bit off, always swinging back and forth in embarrassment.

Looking at the label, it was a sweet and humorous house fight. When I came in, I found that the house fight quickly escalated into a palace fight, and the palace fight escalated to a fight among various countries. The pressure at work is quite high, so I just wanted to lie down and watch the well-dressed young masters bickering, joking, and falling in love, but I didn't expect to keep watching fighting, fighting, fighting... Oh, if I were so ambitious and loved fighting ability, I would have been promoted long ago 😜

It's wonderful, the plot constructed by the author is very rich, and it reads very smoothly. The character descriptions are just right; the branch lines and main lines change naturally and are interlocking. In addition to this book, I am also following "The Monk Family" and read more than a thousand chapters in one go! There is a shortage of books. Do you have any good book recommendations?

It's a bit interesting. You can read it. It's much better than many silly and sweet little white articles.

Pinyin input method used? There are too many typos and you didn't read through the manuscript before submitting it to correct it?