Starting from Swallowing, It Spans the Heavens

See Chapter 59? Is that Liu Xi reincarnated? ? ? The god king reincarnated and had to train disciples to take him back step by step. Is this woman better than the God King? Can you run back as soon as you wake up? The will of the original universe must not be stared at? What level? Hunyuan?

There are so many women in the original novel, but you have to find an original heroine. Li Yao's wife is even more interesting than your original heroine.

The mountain guest is neither blind nor stupid! If you can swallow Hun, 80% of the world will become worthless.

There are reasons for poor grades. Before writing fan fiction, you must stand from the reader's perspective and understand that it is better for readers. After all, reading is about bringing in the protagonist. This is the main premise, and then the main outline of the plot. Most of the readers of Devouring Starry Sky have read the original text. Writing a fanfic is actually to give readers a perspective, to generate a character, to explore and grow in the original world of Devouring Starry Sky. The plot must closely revolve around the protagonist and the original protagonist and important supporting characters. Original characters are also possible, but it is not easy to stand out. If it is not written well, it will inevitably cause resentment among readers: Who is this? That's not what I want to see. What do you think of the character Liu Xi? It's good for the author to have ideas, but as a reader, it's hard to buy into it. Why? After all, it is a fan, and the most important thing is that on the basis of grasping the plot of the original work, it can be enjoyable for readers to watch, and it can be comparable to or even better than the protagonist of the original work. Most of the writing must be around the protagonist. Of course, you can write other supporting characters, but the key point is: to set off the protagonist, you can be awesome, but not too awesome, and it is best not to be awesome. Let the fan protagonist lead him/her to be awesome. Heartfelt words for the author's reference

Can you not go to the Tianlong Divine Eagle? It's useless. I really can't think of any use.

If I had to write about Liu Xi, it would be very discouraging.

In Chapter 59, Liu Xi was reincarnated and awakened, which was very painful. It would be better to have no one at all. . . .

Isn't it embarrassing if you don't understand the meaning of Liu Xi's coming out? Luo Feng devoured the original universe but couldn't find it. Mountainer's own research institute was stolen and he didn't know it.

To be honest, it's fine when it comes to writing about national martial arts, but it's really unnecessary when it comes to writing about internal skills. In "Swallowing Starry Sky", internal skills are of little use and it's a bit redundant.

There are too many private goods, and there is no taste of devouring them.

Let me tell you, please, please don't keep books, okay? Everyone knows the recommendation mechanism of Qidian. To be honest, I was promoted to this book by accident. Now in the second round, every recommendation is an effective follow-up reading every Tuesday, so I hope everyone can stop reading it? Or come here every Tuesday to catch up on the latest chapters? With the current trend, there is really no hope of advancement. The minimum to advance to the second round is more than 400, and now I don't even have half of it... I'm numb, so please don't keep books. Really, I beg you!

How strong does it have to be to be reincarnated? ? ? The author makes this boring.

Don't write about women. In Swallowing Starry Sky, we can't see each other for tens of thousands of years. In this case, all feelings will fade away. If you want women, it's better to find a few sex partners. The next step for the protagonist should be to go to Yangshen to level up. Both the body and the soul can be leveled up. Then he can go to several urban worlds with space magic weapons. He can also go to Zhetian. Zhetian can go to get ruthless skills to improve his genetic level. The skills in Panlong Star Transformation are also good.

The author overestimates Xiongba, which is not a power system at all. The protagonist is completely a dimension reduction attack.

I subscribed to one just to talk about Liu Xi, never to be seen again

If you don't spend your money, it's all in vain! Create martial arts? Has Babata: Is the inheritance high? Improving strength is the most important thing. Gang Jin, Bao Dan, Broken Land Immortal, Wudang. You haven't gone to Quanzhen or Longhu Mountain (Tao Te Ching, Huang Ting Jing, Huang Di Nei Jing, Yi Jing, Bagua), who are you looking down on?

It's not like he's someone behind the scenes. He's so capable but can hide it so well. Also, joining the training camp is useless. I really don't understand.

One beast general, tens of thousands of beast soldiers, awesome! Tomatoes are not as awesome as you, and you are just around the corner to become a great god, just because of your ability to tell lies with your eyes open.

Some people always say that feelings will fade after not seeing each other for too long. However, tens of millions of years have passed by the time you reach your cultivation level and sleep. For such a big shot, isn't tens of millions of years of not seeing each other equivalent to not seeing each other for a day? Will your relationship fade away just because you haven't seen your partner for a day? Don't make assumptions about gods from ordinary people, okay? For bugs, a few days is their whole life, and then they say they haven't seen humans for a few days (a lifetime), do they still have feelings? Isn't this ridiculous?

I have read a lot of comments saying that the world of martial arts is useless. Do you think that the world of martial arts is purely about cultivating internal strength? Do you think that cultivation is just about piling up energy? In most martial arts worlds, there are four realms of cultivation: the Taoist cultivation system of refining Qi, refining Qi and transforming God, refining God and returning void, and refining void and combining Tao. Can't you think of it? The simplest way to refine Qi and transform it into Qi is to cultivate internal strength. What Jing is is the physical quality that can swallow up the starry sky and the abnormal internal strength of the body and cannot transcend the spirit. Refining Qi and transforming into God is to use internal strength to strengthen the spiritual will. Although this spiritual will is not that of a mentalist but a warrior. Do you know what it means to refining the spirit to return to the void? It is a powerful soul to take care of itself and the void to achieve communication between heaven and earth. Perfect control of the body and domain is very similar to understanding the laws. After further controlling the power of heaven and earth, one can turn against the innate body. At this step, many martial arts worlds will strengthen themselves to reach the innate body or even the more abnormal body without leakage. Do you think this has something to do with the body genes in the swallowing starry sky? As for refining the void and combining the Tao, isn't it just about cultivating the power of laws and the power of heaven and earth to combine one's own Tao? Even the Tao of the whole world, if it can be perfectly integrated with the Tao of the world, will it mean that it has taken over the world in disguise?

This book has been signed, so you can invest with confidence!

This author's Swallowing Starry Sky is so poor. Others spend millions of dollars to become a 5-star member of the Virtual Universe Bank. The author's 3,000 dollars is enough.

It feels like the settings were forced to change just for the sake of a watery plot.

You should practice the Devouring Starry Sky cultivation system well. If you don't practice, you will practice some kind of immortal way. The main world is meant to swallow the starry sky. If you practice the immortal way, what other pursuits and state of mind? I am speechless. You are talking about swallowing the starry sky and ruining yourself for money. If you don't have money, you are practicing a shitty way.

Won't Dragon and Snake go? The realm of dragon and snake is high. Wang Yuanshi became a saint in just a few years. Comparatively speaking, it is equivalent to swallowing the inside to achieve immortality in a few years.

Why doesn't this protagonist participate in the genius battle? There are resources and benefits, so why not participate? , How big a secret can your own secret be? Every genius has some inheritance. Who can appreciate your little thing? I can't figure out why he didn't participate?

In order to save everyone's time, go through those comments and understand the situation of this book. I have specially opened a complaint post here. If there are any problems in this book that I think are poisonous, I can tell you about them. Of course, some of them are small foreshadowings, not poisonous points. Finally, I hope everyone can view this book rationally. It is very difficult for a new author to write a book. This book has been postponed for three weeks. Even if it is published, the word count will be stuck. This book is a loss. But as a newcomer, I also want to slowly learn and absorb the experience of writing a book, so if I don't know how to write it, I will treat it as accumulating experience. I hope everyone will be merciful.