The Substitute Anchor Takes the Audience Through the Plot Bravely

Author, you don't just introduce the background in the introduction. You also mention it in the first chapter of the text. I glanced at it and I didn't understand what this parallel world is and why the author changed. I only found out after reading the introduction that it was time travel.

The progress is too slow and dragging

The author is quite imaginative. This book is a combination of live streaming and time travel, but the combination is not very good. First of all, the plot is too delayed. Although I am not opposed to a plot that takes a lot of writing, the author's writing is too bland. I insisted on reading the thirty-two chapters and found nothing interesting. The conflict between ancient and modern times, the conflict between reality and fantasy, these two are very attractive to me, but the author does not seem to show it very well. Secondly, there is the issue of worldview introduction that many people react to. The novel lacks an introduction to the world view, and some plots were difficult for me to understand. Finally, I feel that the protagonist's "gold finger" is not too obvious, and his personality is a bit "licky", which I don't like too much. (The above opinions are only personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like them (´•灬•｀))

The author really should add some nice comments, otherwise it will affect new readers.

Why are fantasy novels placed on urban channels?

The progress is not good, it is too slow. Two hundred thousand words for a story?

You are really only suitable for tomatoes🍅tomato🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅 Nonsensical and funny, don't accept this from the starting point. Write with some logic

Why is the protagonist of the only time-travel live broadcast always afraid of being pornographic? The protagonist of this genre usually communicates with the audience normally. This is the first time I see you licking your face and complimenting the audience. The gifts the audience gives you have no use for your system except money. I don't know what the author thinks.

Outrageous, I actually cut it, wasting my ticket,

Warm congratulations to the author on becoming a eunuch in the palace! Sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers 🤭😁😁

Nowadays, when writing entertainment articles about traveling through parallel worlds, the ones that come out are all stars from the earth, which seems boring. The ones that don't have songs from the earth are all the stars from the earth (Internet celebrities)

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