Mystery Revival: Controlling Two Ghosts From the Start

I only read a dozen chapters, and it's disgusting. This protagonist has no brains. He keeps bringing up the life-saving grace, and then he turns around and becomes the dog of that person. No wonder he's named Xiaotian; isn't he supposed to be a dog?

If you ride in a bridal sedan chair, will the bride get angry with you when you take the bus?

The protagonist is already a father, yet he's still a student, in a position of inferiority. I initially thought this was a good premise, but this setup is truly unbearable.

The protagonist of this fanfiction is a native? Most people who read fanfiction just want to see the protagonist use their precognitive abilities to dominate the original story; otherwise, they might as well just read the original work. The author has even gotten the core concept of fanfiction wrong. I'm outta here.

I came here with great enthusiasm for the subject matter, but in the end, it was just Yang Jian's dog, the Celestial Hound.

Many novels are so bad that I don't even want to click on the main character's name. Is that a name a normal person could come up with?

If he wasn't a time traveler, where would this fanfiction come from? If he wasn't a time traveler, this person simply couldn't exist. It's utterly baffling!

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It's a pity the main character is a bit old, his name isn't appealing, and what's the point of his family later on? Aren't some of the ghosts a bit too human? I remember the ghosts in the original story were quite dull (like the grave-crying ghost), which was a bit distracting. Sigh :-(

The writing is alright, but the main character is really unlikable, which is a shame.