
Naruto: I Play with Uchiha's Hellfire
木叶:我在宇智波玩异火
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- Completed
- Length
- 823k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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259Chapters
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Strange Fire Escape is too awkward, so try Flame Escape instead.
Six-year-old Shisui opened his eyes? And he also has a special teleportation technique? It's so ridiculous, I feel like even Shisui can't be so strong.
You will regret it, Hiruzen I am the Hokage!
1. First of all, the idea is very good. Let's not mention the power of the alien fire. Just talking about the characteristics of the alien fire is worth talking about. Secondly, regarding the issue of "Extraordinary Fire Release", it was better to change it to "Fire Release" after a hundred chapters. It was not changed before, which is very embarrassing. 2. The supporting characters are not portrayed enough and are very "innocent". Protagonist: "I want you to obey me and follow my orders in everything" Supporting role: "Okay", it feels like you don't have your own ideas and just trust the protagonist casually. 3. The combat power is a bit low. I still don't understand how the training progress of the strange fire can be improved so fast. I only completed the training of fire escape in the past few years. In the next battle, I will increase my proficiency by dozens of percent. On average, I only need one kind of strange fire in 10 chapters 4. I don't understand why a Danzo can write 200 chapters, and after 200 chapters, the author doesn't consider Uchiha Madara and White Zetsu who are still alive. Black Zetsu is still hidden, but Madara doesn't have any reaction, especially when it comes to tailed beasts. (Chapter 217, Uchiha Madara appears for the first time, in tears) 5. It feels like the supporting characters are written like NPCs, like dungeons. The next event will only start after one event ends, and the supporting characters will appear.
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Is the alien fire so rubbish? It takes so long for a corpse to turn to ashes even if it is burned by the fire in your heart. Is it just ripe?
Why do you need to form seals and use ninjutsu when there is a strange fire? The strange fire itself is very powerful, right?
Hey, I'm starting to hate watching Dark Naruto fanfics. They all follow the same routine. The protagonist has been rejected by the third generation and other people for various reasons such as his ancestors and family. Danzo always pretends to be a waste, and always encounters various accidents that cause the disguise to fail. He is always suspected by the Third Generation and Danzo at a very young age. Once he is suspected, he will be suspected for many years. Whether he is a child or not, he will be suspected, and some people doubt his IQ. That's all. The most important thing is, if you are cool, I won't say it. The result is not, the protagonist is always taking advantage of the situation. They are always being plotted against each other, but they are still unable to do anything to their opponents. They are a group of frustrated people, and there are a lot of them written down, which affects the senses. I would like to give some suggestions to the author here. Add some more fun things, such as what the protagonist did to cause the third generation to have diarrhea for a month, how much money was lost, how many ninjas the Konoha F4 family lost, Danzo broke his leg unluckily, etc. It feels aggrieved to not always write about the protagonist when writing a Naruto fanfic. You have to fight back and make the enemy suffer. Otherwise, it will be very frustrating to read, not very exciting, and readers will not be able to retain it, and they will all run away. Come on, author💪💪
I remember the double-headed snake's ultimate spirit-fighting move in Dou Po that wiped out half the city. The weakest alien fire you can pick has a shadow-level strength. Even those who are slightly stronger can hit the squad, and the top ten strange fires can overpower Naruto.
The introduction is too funny. One strange fire is enough. What's the point of having so many? It completely conflicts with the bloodstain setting.