Liver Emperor Martial Saint: Start from the Experience Panel

After reading a few chapters, I decided to read it without thinking.

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There are too many constraints when writing about parents. Nowadays, people like to have fun. When the time comes, many people will not be able to stand it because your parents don't handle it well.

I just read the first few chapters, and in two days I was paid two protection fees by gangsters. I also used my own father being beaten to promote the plot. If you write like this, fewer and fewer people will read it. At least I can't stand it!

The reason why this book does not do well is because the protagonist wants to act cool too much and is brainless. Nowadays, the protagonist in the novel is basically stable and submissive. The protagonist never reveals his true strength.

Live well if you have experience, and create conflicts at the beginning. I was charged three protection fees in less than two or three days during the plot. Stop living. What kind of business are you doing? Stop doing it. Rule makers must at least abide by the rules on the surface in order to make long-term and stable profits. Conflicts are not created this way. They have to be integrated into the plot step by step. It is really confusing to insert conflicts into the plot abruptly.

In fact, I prefer to watch a normal plot. I don't like to always rely on abuse or oppression to introduce the plot. I feel that normal cultivation reveals part of the strength and is displayed in the ranks of ordinary geniuses. It is satisfying to be taken seriously and enjoy, and I can secretly plan without being harassed by little people every day. I can't always kick and explode like the honest poor rely on mutation. It's boring.

So brave, if it weren't for the halo of the protagonist, I wouldn't be able to survive more than a few chapters

Are you a new author? If gangsters are so violent and violent, why haven't I heard about that gang that all died after a few blows? Others join the society to live a good life, not to show off. Do you believe that in real society, the boss directly kills this gang member who offended the martial arts school? I have seen the big brother in the society often take the younger brother to eat with JC to make them familiar, and JC beat the younger brother, and the younger brother will never dare to retaliate. Do you know the reason? In the same way, when people from a martial arts school beat up a gang member, the first one to take action is the boss.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 12. I died of poison, byebye

The writing is too stupid, Goldfinger is okay, but the author is too bad at writing, and he changed from a novice to a strong man in just one or two days? Cultivation? The writing is very unreasonable and the progress is faster than cultivating immortality.

It's unremarkable, the conflict is too deliberate, and it's a bit nondescript to deliberately imitate the conflict writing methods of those great masters.

What's the point of having so many fellow practitioners? We don't have enough money, and it's pointless to delay progress. Two books are not as good as one top-notch one. The progress is already relatively slow compared to the geniuses in this world. This is a hang-up.

It's mediocre, nothing too disgusting or poisonous, but I just don't feel the desire to watch it anymore!

The author is not good at the first chapter, where the gang minions are causing trouble in their own gang's place. If you want to cause trouble, do it in private and ruin your own job.

The biggest fear when writing Ji Dao Liu is that it is not refreshing enough. It needs to be fun and neat at the same time. If you see someone who doesn't like it, just cut it off. It doesn't matter if it doesn't comply with the logic. Unless the writing is very good, the dragging plot will be very discouraging.

Yes, it's still possible, but some conflicts are too obvious and not smooth enough.

Why don't you stop cheating? Everyone is cheating, and more resources are needed. 😰

I still recommend this book. The plot contains the old routines of Shuangwen. Writing a book would be great, but the plot (assassination of a gang leader) feels so familiar and old-fashioned.

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The day before, I broke the hand of a gangster who doesn't know kung fu. When he takes revenge, he can use a concealed weapon. Isn't there any logic? I still took the elixir.

There are also systems. If you don't practice martial arts, just punch and kick, but if you think it's not good enough, you don't know how to find a martial arts master to practice martial arts, and you have to be a bun.

There is nothing wrong with practicing martial arts. You can steam the steamed buns and go out.

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Come on, don't be a eunuch anymore

Those who can survive through three chapters are good comrades with ideals, morality and discipline.

It's a pity, I don't know if the author is good enough and doesn't want to continue it

It should be suitable for writing female novels. If not, just change the track. This is too insulting to the IQ.

Trash should stay in the trash heap!

On the first day, I was overcharged for protection fees. On the second day, I learned martial arts, and on the third day, I was overcharged for protection fees. Progress is a bit slow.