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I have some suggestions~ Reduce each sentence of dialogue to as short as possible. It is best to limit the unimportant words to fifteen words or less. Be sharp and energetic, don't grind. Increased plot and scene descriptions. For example, eyes, [Don't starry eyes and a wry smile, you can't stand it] For example, battle scenes, Sonic booms, distances, air waves, big pits, spider web cracks, etc., are used to enhance the sense of impact, shock, and excitement. Adding plot is to tell stories. This is the only way to read novels to enhance the sense of immersion. Thank you if you accept it. It doesn't matter if you don't, just pretend you didn't see it. I make this suggestion mainly because many novels written in this way are quite popular. Author, I think your book has great potential. It is normal to be a little bit toxic in the early stage. Samsara Paradise is like this. It is very toxic in the early stage and very exciting in the later stage. I can follow this approach in your book. I am looking forward to it.

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you Even if you can't finish it, you have to write more than 300 chapters for me. This is my wish and my wishヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉﾞ❀~

What kind of stuff are you writing? Do you think you are a woman? Is there any connection between what you wrote and the title? The writing is fluent and includes some irrelevant things. You don't write well but you also like to engage in vulgarity? Disgusting to watch

The pace is too slow. I've read Chapter 25 and am hooked on Chapter 22, Chapter 10 of the Water Chat Group, Chapter 10 of the Water Zerg Technology, and the main nest was hatched after more than 20 chapters. Engineers, according to this writing, can you open a branch base in Chapter 100? You can't even defeat a small tribe of Goblins.

Joining the chat group at the beginning, I really can't stand the groove in it. Tony joins the chat group. I can stand it if it's a white beard, but Tony can't stand it. I support Tony in the early stage as a playboy, but when facing the chat group, the first thought should be to study the essence. After all, there is something in the head. He will not be worried. At this time, his vigilance should be very high. In case there is the ability to check thinking, or pulse electricity to warm the brain, his brain is still very precious. Collect brain model information to build a thinking model. Isn't this a steady stream of Tony Stark? There are too many threats. During the Afghanistan period, Tony had just received a life threat. At this time, the threats in the brain could only be ranked lower than the life threats on the surface. At least the things in the head could communicate. In the middle and early stages, Tony was affected by palladium poisoning, and the things in the head could also be used as life-saving straw. In the later stage, when Tony was free of life threats, he would care more about the threats to human beings from the things in the brain.

After reading Chapter 11, the protagonist didn't do anything and just stayed in the water group.

What is the use of chat groups? In order for the Zerg to invade other worlds along the network line later?

I feel like the Zerg in Raising All Humans are the most awesome ones, but they were outplayed by the protagonist.

There are too many honorifics. It doesn't look like artificial intelligence or the fire of civilization at all, but more like a sycophant who is lucky enough to enter. The swarm is pursuing colleges and universities. It seems that you can't say a word without a great one. How much time is wasted. Will the protagonist have to talk like this in the future? This kind of harsh supporting characters is no longer suitable for today's online novels, especially yours, which is equivalent to a fan fiction setting. There are too many occ, which makes fans uncomfortable, and the readers it attracts are also easy to filter out.

What kind of zerg? Star zerg, tyranids, or killer swarms.

Why do people still write such pretentious articles?

It's pretty good, but I don't know if the relationship between Zerg and humans can be resolved. In fact, it would be better if the main world did not have humans. I will describe humans later.

I am a newbie who has just written a book. Please forgive me if the writing is not good~ Thank you very much for your support, thank you! If you like it, you can join the group: "378020986"

In all the works, the Orcs in Warhammer 40k are the most powerful. The Tyranid Zerg cannot outnumber the Orcs, forcing the Zerg to use decapitation tactics.

I have read in many novels that when someone threatens your life, you still have time to think about (other things). I can only say that life is too beautiful. The moment a person, no matter who he is, faces a life-threatening situation without being specially brainwashed or trained, every cell in your body will fight for survival. This is instinct and cannot be violated.

The front part is very interesting, and I haven't seen a Zerg novel that I like in a long time. However, the communication in the group and the communication with the elves are a bit awkward, and it seems a bit too stiff. And I haven't felt any ups and downs in the plot until now. Will the subsequent development also have this particularly gentle rhythm? It is recommended to create some new events, such as going to other worlds to show off and show off the Zerg style. After all, the protagonist is so powerful, but it turns out that he always practices with the land, which is a bit too bland.

Starting from tomorrow, 10,000 words a day will be good. Looking for further reading.

Are you... Fooled?

This latest chapter looked embarrassing, so I gave up.

Thank you for your support. I really appreciate it. I'll give it a try first.

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The modification is completed and released.