Douluo Dalu: Hunted by Qian Renxue from the Start
斗罗：开局被千仞雪猎杀
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- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
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Qian Renxue is over 20 years old and only has a fourth-level Soul Ring? Qian Renxue was already level 20 at six years old, and at 29 she's already a Soul Saint, almost breaking through to Soul Douluo.
Qian Renxue's level is wrong! How come she's about the same level as Tang San? She's even higher than Tang San!
The subject matter was good, but the author wrote it like this—a mountain of shit.
The protagonist's "smart-dampening aura" is too powerful; he fools everyone he goes. If it weren't for the protagonist's aura, he would have been killed long ago.
This book is toxic! Tang San doesn't die in the end, and then it immediately jumps to "Douluo Continent II: The Peerless Tang Sect"? Are you planning to write 5000 chapters? After "Douluo Continent II: The Peerless Tang Sect," are we going to see "Legend of the Dragon King Visiting Another World"? What kind of medicine is this? I've been following it for two months, and this is what it's like! Ugh!
It's one thing for their companions to seek out the Elemental Academy, but even the Golden Generation would have been better than those three. And they even offered so many benefits, giving the Elemental Academy to Qibao, and sending over three of their trained geniuses—they couldn't keep their own power's geniuses.
Honestly, if the author had done any research on the characters' ages before writing, this book would have been a hit. The main problem is that you wrote it without any research at all; you were practically poisoned to death right from the start, unable to keep up.
Looking at the comments, this doesn't seem to have much to do with being intelligent.
Author, aren't you going to explain how you set this up? Tang San was about 13 years old when he first appeared, and Qian Renxue was 11 years older than him. That means Qian Renxue is now 24 years old and has only just obtained the fourth ring. Don't you consider the original work and the logic when you write a novel?
The idea that Qian Renxue was assassinated is absurd, okay?