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New author, please bear with me and give me your comments. The problems I found after reading are: 1. This book is labeled as e-sports, but there is too little content about e-sports. I hope the author writes more related to the title. 2. The author makes too many irrelevant foreshadowings. I hope the author will get the story back on track soon.
Anyway, I am a new writer, so please give me some opinions and don't be aggressive. For now, I can only say that there is still a lot of room for improvement. Ah, just come and comment! How can a writer improve without training? Can newbies read online articles now? I can't stand it, you don't have the strength, you know, but if some new people don't come in to write new things, there will be no fresh blood in the online literary circle. Now you see dozens of new books, all of which are about cultivating immortals, cultivating immortals, or TM cultivating immortals! It was really miserable for Pong Yi to be sprayed by others. It was just a normal one and he didn't deserve to be criticized. Anyway, all the people who could see here were gods.