Reincarnation Paradise: Scarlet Reincarnation

I want to write a novel and try to include Brother Lu and Brother Xiao 🤫🤫🤫

Question House, this novel has a lot of problems. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them and I will correct them. This is my first novel and it won't be my last!

The protagonist uses a short knife for close combat. If he encounters a large opponent, he can cut off half of the opponent's fingernail with one strike. I said before that the short knife is too short and I plan to change to a long knife. In the second chapter, I decided to style my growth weapon as a short knife. I am so speechless.

I have a question. When the protagonist returned to space for the second time, he thought the knife was short. The short knife is not easy to use, and it still has the ability to attack large objects when cutting. After all, every inch is short and every inch is dangerous. I sold two daggers, but when I got a growable equipment, should I choose the dagger? What do you think? It doesn't matter if you have a long knife or a slightly longer one. You sell a short knife with your backhand, and then use a short knife. What is the operation? It's a bit confusing and hard to understand.

The young man was smoking a cigarette and had a short knife on his waist with a red handle. Behind him was a huge white snake. A necklace called the Deep Heart is tied around the young man's neck. (My painting skills are limited, so I can only do this hahahaha.)

Why are the protagonists in the recent Paradise fandoms all indigenous? Infinite Flow has always been a box that looks good to outsiders, but it's the other way around in the park. . . List the following data: Weapon natives, a million words ended hastily. The traveler natives were weak in the early stage, but now they are barely strong. Yinyue hasn't read it yet, but I can't comment on it because of the small number of words. Shadow has fewer words, and I like to imitate mosquitoes and download copies. After reading two chapters of this book, I found that it was an indigenous person again. . . I am afraid of comparison in everything. When I searched for Samsara Paradise, the only difference was the waistcoat, which contains millions of words. Although there are some minor flaws, it is consistent with the world view of the original work and is refreshing. Compare the five books listed above. Are the time travelers more vivid and bright than the natives?

The author would like to ask, when writing a fanfic, do you need to get the copyright from the original work, or should you just write it directly? Can you make money by signing a contract, or should you do it for love?

It is recommended that the moves should not be too average. It is better to be simple and straightforward. For example, multiple cuts, extremely fast slashes, concussive impacts, high-temperature blades, super-speed piercing, etc. Are better.

When you have time, you can come and read my book Journey to Samsara Paradise

I came up with the entire meme on a whim (I just used the ones I have seen and which are more in line with the table. I like the picture Yile 😥. I hope it is less "toxic", please) (The update time of Assassin's Legend and Silver Moon Return is uncertain)

A suggestion, if there are female characters that are difficult to kill, then don't write about this world, or avoid contact with the protagonist, and don't encounter beings who are much stronger than the protagonist at every turn. The purpose of Samsara Paradise is to cultivate strong people, and will not issue tasks that seem to be fatal, and will not be exposed to such tasks. At most, they are tasks that seem to be fatal, but in fact, you can survive on your own without exploding and you will get a lot of rewards.

After looking at it, I feel that the features are not very obvious, at least not that prominent. Compared with the Paradise Journey next door, others have outstanding features, with many saved articles and stable updates. Moreover, other protagonists have different abilities, and there are so many paradise fanfics that make my eyes light up. And I feel that the content after starting from Dragon Clan is a bit confusing. To summarize: The protagonist uses a knife, and many fan stories also use knives. It seems to have no characteristics, and its own ability system is incomplete. The content at the back is also a little confusing. Not many updates.

You are not an assassin and cannot kill with one hit, so you use a short sword as your weapon? Brother, if you change to a hammer or a big sword, it will be more suitable for the "Scarlet" profession, otherwise it will not make sense no matter how you look at it.

Author, do you know? There is gravity between people. I want to believe you. Can you respond to my expectations?

Reading this novel, it's a bit embarrassing that the protagonist doesn't know much about the original plot.

I haven't read it yet, what is the main character's sub-profession? If you haven't already, should you consider joining Super Mechanic?

I can't stand Chapter 25 of the Sword Art Online dungeon. The characters are broken. I've let Kirito and Asuna go for the second time. They were killing decisively before, but now I'm a coward. I don't dare to kill and I'm looking for excuses like crazy🤮🤮🤮

Author, for you, a novice, there is no need to consider anything else except finishing the book. Finishing the book is the most important thing. Come on, I'm optimistic about you!

The combat power of your Hokage is too low. You can't kill the first generation before you can kill the second generation. In the ranking of Samsara Paradise's combat power, the first generation is at least fourth level or above. To kill the shadow, at least the second to third level. Your first level strength is killing indiscriminately. This is contradictory and easy to collapse.

Wow, the front is pretty good, but there are three questions that I would like the author to reveal: whether there is a female protagonist, her relationship with Su Xiao, and whether she will become a eunuch for no reason.

There's not enough detail, and the characters don't have distinct or unique characteristics. Keep it up, the author of this book. In my opinion, Samsara Paradise is the best subject for practicing writing.

Anyway, you should have seen it, so I won't talk nonsense. Can you recommend two well-written fanfiction books?

Maybe it's because I'm older. I've only heard of many anime but haven't watched them.