Breaking into Each Other and Passing Through the Window Together

The dialogues are all in the original text... Or are multiple worlds blended together...

Come on! Mutually related investment votes in "Ten Thousand Gates Realm"... Must return!

When I read Chapter 9, there were too many names, the plot was very confusing, and I couldn't see the main plot for the time being.

Pay attention to the typos, the book is still good

Is this a cut? ? ? I just finished my subscription, and I said it will last for two days!

Take it slow at your own pace, come on

It's pretty good, I got into it without realizing it. This is the lost youth

There are so many coincidences. Is this world only the size of 4 rooms? Do you believe it or not?

By the way, Lu Qiaochuan and the others took the college entrance examination in 2015. Why is it 2008?

Male protagonist

There are not many fans of Little Broken Window, but this book is still very enjoyable to read slowly.

The author writes one world at a time, and I feel that the results will be good. I haven't found anyone who can write about the world of fusion until now. The world view you write is destined to be read by old readers.

There are too few updates, only one update a day

After reading Chapter 13, there are too many characters in the plot. As someone who has watched National Defense Student, I can't understand the relationship between them.

After reading the previous chapters, I think it is relatively good among the Little Broken Window fanfics. Writing fanfics and plots is not a bad thing, but the character design of the protagonist is not very outstanding, and the light of other characters is somewhat overshadowed. However, it is really difficult to write fanfics + group portraits. I hope the author can keep updating and write until they graduate. Come on.

The first three chapters are so awkward. Two female classmates call you and a male classmate to come over, but they don't call their boyfriends. Isn't it embarrassing? Aren't you classmates in the same class who don't avoid suspicion?

Personally, I think it is better among those who were classmates. Although the author has added his own innovations, there is no change, and he still follows the plot. In fact, this is the most difficult, because the plot path will be very messy if you are not innovative. (Learn skills from the world of film and television) There is a plot in this book about classmates who were classmates, which is well written, but it is a pity that the whole plot is not written. What we want to see is not the difficulty in the original drama, what we want to see is to change the plot with a sense of substitution.