The Days When I Was Guarding the Gate in Beizhen Fusi

Look, the three recommendation votes are gone again, and my family doesn't even dare to rest like you!

I understand, the protagonist is a puppet and is led by the system.

Does anyone know about this version of Dongfang Invincible

The physical fitness of the protagonist is so bad! He can't even be satisfied with his own woman, and he was injured by a sword from the Captured God. If he is not treated in time, he will have incurable hidden injuries. It is recommended to practice a physical training method. Also, the protagonist's kung fu is mostly focused on swordsmanship, which has limitations.

No, your wife is gone just like that? What does this mean?

I just read one chapter, and I would like to mention a few points. First of all, this is a systematic text with punishment, and secondly, the protagonist's first-level cultivation level came from a cliff, and it is a brushstroke background. Then the mission asked him to kill someone. The good guy said something before killing and another when killing. Couldn't he be more neat? At this point I couldn't stand it anymore. I took a look at the catalog and saw that the system also asked me to marry a wife. The protagonist actually went straight to it, which is awesome.

It's understandable that the protagonist can't discover that the people around him know martial arts. After all, Dongfang Invincible's kung fu is superior to that of the protagonist, but Dongfang Invincible can't discover it. It doesn't make sense that the protagonist has decent martial arts. After all, the Grandmaster level is not called for nothing. Can't you even tell whether a person knows martial arts?

Click on the martial arts category, it's all in the fucking system, why don't you open a system category?

It's the same routine as my wife is the leader of the Demon Cult. The male protagonists are all swordsmen of the Guigu lineage. Pretend to be an ordinary person and hide. My wife is a leader in touching traffic police. There is a little maid from the Demon Cult beside him.

I'm so speechless that I'll explode. I'll gather a wife to serve as a god.

Aren't you afraid of being considered a lunatic if you talk to the air for no reason?

Puppet style, the chapter name is well chosen

What the hell is this writing? After reading a few chapters, the protagonist completely follows the system. If Qian Jinyiwei goes to be a killer, he might as well join the killer organization directly.

No, boss, you are very cruel if you also punish people in your cool articles.

The writing is not good, the common sense is not enough, the settings are not enough, the ideas are okay, hay

I'm drunk after reading only five chapters. Did Tongfu Inn and Dongfang Bubai mess up? Is there something wrong? Isn't Xiuchundao not enough for your word count? You don't have to be so hungry to write 10,000 words before you start stuffing garbage.

Why are the books that the editor highly recommends discontinued for two or three days?

To be honest, I feel that the writing style is okay, and although the subject matter is not novel, it is still interesting. The structure is a bit poor, but still acceptable. The plot rhythm is ordinary. The system task penalty is a big flaw. Even if your logic is consistent, even if you can explain it, even if it is a foreshadowing in the later stage, it still cannot change the fact that it is uncomfortable to watch.

One thing to say is that the imagination of this novel is okay, but the author's writing style is not good. It makes people feel like a newbie who has just entered the online literary world. The most important thing in a mixed martial arts novel is the description of battle scenes. If the battle scenes cannot be written well, half of the novel will be useless. I suggest the author read Pei Tugou's works to learn how other people write battle scenes, and don't write forced pretentiousness, so as not to disgust people.

I can't write anymore. I'm going to start a new book and everyone will continue to support me 🤝🤝

I couldn't survive the first chapter!

Inducing poison every day, only eunuchs? How many times have you come back?

I gave up decisively when I saw that Dongfang was being driven away.

The first-grade is a great master, but the second-grade is more numerous than dogs. Even Qu Feiyan is a second-grade.

I think it's okay. What are you guys complaining about? It turned out to be a eunuch. Alas.

I feel like I can still watch it disappear😭

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