Panlong's Heavenly Way Reward Diligence

Let me give you a suggestion, don't use colloquial language when writing a book. The first card you start with is "I'm fucked", which will not make people very humorous, but will particularly affect the senses.

It is difficult to transcend the Panlong universe. In the original work, Lin Lei was able to transcend only by various chance coincidences. Because of the chance, Lin Lei's soul mutated and it was also the soul mutation of the four elements of earth, wind, water and fire. In the end, he must have the main godhead of the four elements. Only by becoming the main god of the four elements can he merge into the power of Hongmeng. It is necessary to become the main god of the four elements of earth, wind, water and fire. Hongmeng himself said that one more is not good, and one less is not good. I don't know if there can be more, but Hongmeng I can't say anything less. In fact, if a time traveler comes to the Panlong Universe, there are only three ways to transcend. First, luck is against the heavens. By chance, the soul of the four elements of Feng, Water and Fire mutates and becomes the main god of the four elements and merges into the power of Hongmeng to transcend. It is as transcendent as the original Lin Lei, which especially tests luck. Second, there is a gold finger plug-in, because the gold finger plug-in forces detachment. Third, there is a power beyond the level of Hongmeng to help you transcend.

This is my first book. Please forgive me for my poor writing style! 😂At the same time, thank you all for your support. Please correct me if there are any shortcomings!

The writing is in urgent need of improvement. It feels very childish, but not cute. The plot is not bad, but it is too distracting and easy to jump.

First of all, the author is too self-indulgent in this book. Many parts of it that he thinks are humorous are actually embarrassing. It doesn't matter if the protagonist improves the strength of his father and elder brother, and it doesn't matter if he improves Beibei Duoduo's strength. But when you see someone, you help them improve. While improving, you are afraid that Beirut will know. Hey, if you are a normal person, you will know that these people have problems with their strength improvement, and they will forcibly reduce their intelligence. Is it difficult to wipe out the two Holy Sees after breaking through to the god level, especially the mid-level god? That's the revenge of killing one's mother, the hatred of the family! In the original work, Lin Lei forgets to take revenge all the time. The protagonist is lucky enough to have the strength to take revenge, but he is afraid of killing innocent people indiscriminately. Why are you afraid of everything except Beirut? After practicing quietly for decades, you will probably become a god. What is there to be afraid of if you are afraid of wolves in the front and tigers in the back?

What should I say? It looks a bit embarrassing. Why does the protagonist seem to have never grown up? When he traveled through time and became a child, he also became a child?

There are too many hooks, it's too big, the characters are not fleshed out enough, and the plot is a bit exaggerated,

I was attracted by God's reward for hard work, but I was dissuaded by the catalog first and then by the content after reading one chapter. I think the writing is a five-star rating.

The protagonist's aura can be very powerful, but it cannot be very dazzling. For example, if the villain wants to kill the protagonist, he will be struck by lightning, a maid found on the street will be the reincarnation of the emperor, and kicking a stone will be the heart of the universe. Especially when it comes to time travel stories, don't make the original work completely unrecognizable.

It's really annoying. Panlong's colleagues are either eunuchs or rotten. . As for that? ? ? ?

Intelligence theory has nothing to do with God rewarding those who work hard.

In the original work, those who understand the mysterious laws by themselves are all understood by studying the special techniques, so there is no such thing as understanding the mysterious laws but not being able to use them. And many of Panlong's colleagues clearly understand the mysteries themselves, but they are not as good as the garbage gods who refine the godhead. Isn't this nonsense? 🤫

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