Brother Fisherman Feng

I took a day off from everyone today and drove back home. When I got home, my car hit the wall of my house. I was so depressed 😭

The first three chapters were not written well ① The creativity is not enough, the subject matter and style are biased toward daily life, and plug-ins should be simple. The best thing is the superpower, just keep it simple ② Background setting, modern life background, just write it simply and have a sense of substitution. It involves a lot of career and experience, it is complicated and unnecessary. Just sort out the reasons for a returnee and the foreshadowing that may be used in the future in an inductive way ③Not attractive enough, the author thinks, Atlantis? A super-civilized creation? Are there any exercises? Do these elements attract or dissuade readers? Does a fisherman need these plug-ins? An ability to simply communicate with animals and plants would probably be more useful! Be more eye-catching!

I read a lot of books about fishermen! Basically, after most people buy an ocean boat, their books start to go downhill. It gets worse and worse from behind.

With the title of this book, I'm going to have two poisonous people, a holy shield monster, etc., And wait for Brother Feng to support each other's shields and lead me to eat chicken.

Qidian's rules don't work. The author is a eunuch if he wants to be a eunuch, treating the readers and consumers as treasures. No restrictions on the author

Damn it, are you raising the author's eunuch?

After reading so many suggestions in the comment area, I also have a suggestion for the author. Don't listen to what the comment area says, just write according to your own outline! Don't change the outline! It's easy to break down if you change it, just write whatever the outline is! Don't listen to the comment section, don't listen to the comment section, don't listen to the comment section! Important things have to be said three times. I don't know how many authors have changed their outlines based on the suggestions in the comment section, and then the book collapsed.

There are no good people around the protagonist? A cunning and vicious neighbor. A greedy ex-girlfriend, Cha Liang's team of subordinates, a relative with partiality issues?

When I saw this title, I thought of Fat Head Fish yyf

As for the eunuch, will Qidian refund the coins?

There are too many bullshit, too bloody things. Even if you are all evil people, you can't write about it every day. It has nothing to do with the theme of the novel. Also pay attention to writing standards and use punctuation marks indiscriminately, especially brackets and exclamation points. After reading about ten chapters, let's put it on the bookshelf for a while.

🥺Too little, not enough to see

This type of articles about fishermen going to sea is the same as articles about farming. If the first one you read by chance is a long one and the quality is okay, then the articles of the same type that you read later will feel very boring. The content is almost the same, the plot routines are very similar, and you will get bored if you watch it too much.

It looks like I want a eunuch,,, I want my money back.

Since it's a eunuch, don't put it in your listening book recommendations. How embarrassing would it be if you became addicted to this?

Recently, I saw some friends questioning it, saying that half of the protagonist's hard-earned money should be given to his younger brother. Let me explain here. First of all, the protagonist does not share half of the money he earns with his younger brother. The money he makes from fishing in the sea is his own. His parents gave him half of the money he earned from the family fishing boat, and the remaining half was kept by his parents for old age, and the other half was saved to buy a house for his younger brother. This is equivalent to my brother sharing a quarter of the family's fishing boat income! After all, they are two brothers. The younger son has not gotten married and bought a house. His parents completely ignore him. This is not true! You can rest assured that the protagonist is definitely not the Virgin! In addition, regarding the house, let me make it clear to everyone in advance that all the money was paid by the protagonist himself, his parents did not pay a penny, and there were no disputes! As for the protagonist buying a boat, he will not let his brother get involved, but if he comes back, he will arrange a reasonable place to go!

During the storm, my family members were almost dying, but they risked their lives to save others and abandoned them. There are some minor poisonous points ahead, but I have tolerated them. Riding one's life to save others is unbearable. You have to be sensible when it comes to sensationalism. I've never seen someone risk the whole family's life to save someone like this. Too deliberate, too poisonous

Ask for the essence! ! !

Unknowingly, I arrived at the helm, asking for refinement! ! !

This book has not been updated for so long. Is it a eunuch? ? ?

Is there still fish in the sea after Japan releases nuclear waste water?

After seeing Chapter 56, the author should not often write about things that he does not know very well. Many previous chapters have more or less these views. If the author doesn't understand it, he should write less about policy matters. All the best. Withdraw first

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