
The Gods Started to Stir Things up in the Siheyuan
诸天从四合院开始搞事情
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- Completed
- Length
- 203k Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Infinite Flow
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The writing is okay, but the plot is a bit dragging. Some of the plots that are not too important actually do not need to be described in detail. To be honest, there are two types of people who read Siheyuan. One is that the life in that era was very simple. If a person's modern consciousness can go back to that era and have a golden finger, he will not be worse than in modern times. The sense of substitution is strong, and it is easy to make comparisons and gain satisfaction. Then, for those who are familiar with the drama Siheyuan, and have at least read the same story, watching Siheyuan just wants to see the people who make trouble, which is the emotion of the angry youth as the saying goes. They use modern consciousness and ways of doing things and God's perspective to make trouble and punish what they think are wrong to gain a sense of satisfaction. Both aspects need to be considered, but considering the author's writing power and energy, it is recommended to focus on one side. If both parties want it, it will easily lead to neither aspect being prominent. If it is not prominent, it will be easy for the plot to be dragged out, and the sense of satisfaction will be dull and lead to a fallout. Depending on the setting of your book, I personally suggest that you combine the conflict process and God's perspective with the modern moral bottom line to strengthen it, so that you can at least get some support in the early stage, so as not to get out of the pit at will. Furthermore, if you describe the conflict process in detail and control the psychological description, you can write a lot. Even if you have written one conflict point, it is easy to write one or two chapters or even 4-5 chapters of a major conflict point. Why bother to sacrifice the beginning and the end.
It was not an age of reason. Sometimes you really had to rely on your fists to speak, and just cut it off without any evidence? There's no camera either, just don't worry about being beaten.
If you don't talk about the messy things in the courtyard, your grades will be better. Reading is for people's leisure time, not disgusting.
This is a trivial matter, and I keep grinding and grinding, fearing this and that.
I hope the plot of Siheyuan won't end too hastily. Xu Damao, an old loser, should not harm Lou Xiao'e.
Can the author control a paragraph to 15 to 35 words? I have been reading the novel for a long time, and my eyes are almost blind when I see a 70-word paragraph. If you watch it on a computer, the screen is big, so it doesn't matter much. On a mobile phone screen, 70 characters is a bit too long.
What is there to write about in the courtyard? Go and disappear into the dust and smoke to rewrite their destiny. They are suffering too much.
Collect the rainwater goose and collect all the three palaces and six courtyards
Opinion Building (siheyuan part)
Some of the characters in the Siheyuan have already appeared and are about to start making things happen. Let's see if there are any famous scenes that you readers would like to arrange. If so, please leave a comment and I will try my best to satisfy you. If you have any other suggestions, you can leave a comment below. I don't want to play alone.
He Yuyu, the little cook who came to your doorstep by herself due to an accident. Will you accept suggestions from book friends?
Book friends have decided whether to accept the little cook that comes to my door or not. I will build a building outside. I hope you can give me your opinion.
Across the World Collection Posts
The second worlds that the author thinks of are Wolf Warriors, Tongque Terrace, Three Kingdoms, General Nights Qing Yu Nian, Acquaintance with Jun Chu, Son-in-law You can also mention your favorite worlds as much as possible Friendly reminder: The worlds I prepared are randomly selected from time to time. They are connected. If you are the first one in this building to discover the connection, you can leave a message to the author and set up a character in the book.
Who will you take to the next world with the popularity vote?
Which one of these people has a louder voice?
The author completed Siheyuan in about 100 chapters of Siheyuan. After all, this is Zhutianwen, not a Siheyuan disguised as Zhutianwen.
Didn't Mu Chunhua marry Yan Zhensheng? ? And she also gave birth to a child for Wu Youren? ? And Mu Chunhua must be thirty by this time, right? ? ?
It's better to collect water from Shu'e and not be too arrogant.
There are only two virgins in the courtyard, "Yi and Jia Zhang". If you get rid of them, the whole place will be clean and harmonious, and everyone will live and work in peace and contentment. Those two virgins are deliberately kept, purely for the sake of nausea or to increase the length of the continuous ups and downs.
I can feel that the author wants to write well, and the writing is not bad, but you have a little bit of ink, and it is not smooth.
Mu Chunhua
He Yuyu
You Fengxia
Qin Huairu
Yu Li
It sucks? Should I continue writing about the next world?
Siheyuan Qinhuairu and Lou Xiao'e are unavoidable topics. Then fight one by one to get something interesting 🤭
Young version of Liu Lan
You can consider that instead of connecting to the extraordinary side, you can refer to the roaming film and television world. Extraordinary people are prone to overturning (combat power collapse 😏)
Collect character names
Steel Rolling Mill Map Collection of Character Names for the Inspectorate