Starting from the Dragon Clan, Turning the World Upside Down

The problem with most Dragon Clan fandom nowadays is that they are not strong enough, not aggressive enough, they are procrastinating, and those who follow the academic style will feel uncomfortable when encountering Japanese copies. Let me tell you, with a JOJO-style writing style, two watermelon knives cut from Takamagahara to Akai, even if Kiku Masamune is as evil as a ghost, he has to hold it in. Ghoul, Ashirare.

Don't think too hard of Cassel's group. If it weren't for the little devil's plan in the original work, none of the first-generation species would have died. Moreover, none of the first-generation species that appeared in the original work were complete, let alone the complete Dragon King.

The heroine, Mai Sukoku, or the little monster, if it doesn't work, just an "ordinary person" little goddess outside the dragon clan. I personally think that in the Dragon World, these three female characters are the most suitable and least controversial to be the heroines. Mai doesn't have much CP and her character design is pretty good, not to mention the little monster, not to mention the pain in countless people's hearts, the little goddess who dares to love and hate without being pretentious. Other than her Nono, none of these are suitable. Nono is too controversial, why should she lie in the muddy water? Xia Mi, I personally find it difficult to write honestly. Her fascination is that she is a dragon king, but she "falls in love" with the dragon slayer, falling in love and killing him. Until the end, you don't know which side of her is real and which side is false, leaving only a room of "relics" to tell everything. In fact, many authors who wrote about the heroine Xia Mi did not write Xia Mi as a "living" character at all, just like collecting stamps and wrote her as a heroine.

They all say that Nono is suitable for a heroine, Why do I feel that everyone has forgotten that Nono has so many spare tires even though she has a fiancé😓

When I first saw the introduction, I thought it was Marvel's Deadpool breaking through the wall and running out 😒

I hope the heroine has Nono Xia Eriyi

After reading more than ten chapters, I found it very interesting, but it was useless, and the pretense was not smooth. After only ten chapters, the protagonist was already invincible, ① only one chapter. "The protagonist frowns with nice eyebrows." Come on, the protagonist is a man. This "good-looking" thing makes me sick. Did you write it smoothly? ②The moment the protagonist awakens, he is already invincible. After killing the first Deadpool, he raises his hands when faced with Cassel's useless dog. I don't understand why he raises his hands here and surrenders? ③The protagonist is talking to that professor on the train. That's very lofty talk. What kind of guardianship, protection, etc., Is very empty. Is this showing off? To be honest, I don't like it very much. In other words, the author needs to change his writing method. ④Other comrades also said that the author was imitating the writing style of Dragon Clan, and the result was a nondescript feeling. First of all, I didn't imitate it well. When I looked at the train scene, the protagonist was different from Lu Mingfei, so I still copied it according to Lu Mingfei's writing, which didn't work well. Secondly, today's readers don't like the writing style of Dragon Clan. The comparison of writing style of Dragon Clan is now outdated. The current Dragon Clan readers like to read are those who have read Dragon Clan 123, which are youthful memories, and most of the new readers are those who can only read the novel when they first come into contact with it. Nowadays, they are all written in the fast food style, which is different from the Dragon Clan. Therefore, there is no need to imitate the writing style of Dragon Clan. The author has to write in his own style. Overall, it's okay. It's just that the author may be a novice and the details are not in place. Come on, author, keep up the good work!

Although when we read novels, we are more or less indifferent, but since there is a spirit like Sword Domain, why don't we practice swords🗡️, why not engage in Japanese swords? Is it because our Chinese martial arts are poor or something? Don't say that Japanese swordsmanship is great and our swordsmanship is just a performance. That's pure nonsense.

Various historical introductions, and then some emotions about the sudden illness of literary youth, as well as my own thoughts and considerations. Brother, you wrote a narrative, how did it change into prose? Or is the prose mixed with narrative? There is no story at all, it's very entertaining, and there's not so much written about it. This is an original fan, so you can still say something about it and complete the world view, and it's not enough. Now this is just pure bullshit, always in the water, always talking about things that are not there, and talking about a memory in the middle of the conversation. Do you think it is a TV series, movie or a script? This is a novel. Another unreasonable one, written in such a strong way, are you afraid of a Herzord?

Why does it feel like it's worse than the original work? There's always a lot of descriptions of the environment and the heart. I feel tired listening to the book.

How can I put it, the transition is too abrupt, it's obvious that I want to imitate Jiangnan's writing style, but it's a pity that I'm not good at it, it's like painting a tiger instead of a dog.

I haven't seen Dragon Clan, so I'm just asking: When they almost demolished the Three Gorges, weren't they afraid that a missile would kill them?

Just write whatever comes to mind.

The combination of Yuewang Sword and Katori Shinto style is really unbearable. Martial arts techniques are adapted to the shape of weapons. The center of gravity and feel are different. You have good technique and can exert force. The effect of fighting is also much worse. Especially if you open a game with relevant abilities

Author, have you watched Dragon Clan carefully? Live CS was a free one-day activity when Lu Mingfei entered school. The last time was Biao Motorcycle.

I'm speechless. I just hope that this one is the heroine and that one is the heroine. The way you do it, the best way is to have a harem, but some people say that it can only be a single heroine. What are the modern concepts? Don't you know that the capitalists are just playing tricks? In my opinion, a strong protagonist is the most basic factor for starting a harem. If you don't have the strength, the dog will not get along with you. Of course, the author's writing style is not optimistic. It is recommended to have a single female protagonist or two female protagonists. Otherwise, if the female protagonist fails, it will be very troublesome.

Lu Mingfei is not worthy of Hui Liyi, Chen Motong is not worthy of Caesar, and senior brother and Cai Long are always in trouble.

It is recommended not to have double standards when choosing CP. For example, a certain group of people only focuses on the sassy aura of a certain senior, but selectively ignores the fact that she has had a boyfriend for several years and has agreed to be a fiancée. She also keeps a fish and licks the dog...

In short, the reason most people are angry about Nono Green Tea's remarks is not that Chen Motong is bad, but that Eli Yi is too good.

If I were to write a book about the eight demons in "The Adventures of Jackie Chan" and the Dragon King in "Dragons", would there be any results?