Daming: I Asked You to Supervise the Country, but You Go to Practice Immortality?

To be honest, it would be great if this book directly writes about alternate history. The messy historical figures and old-fashioned plots make it uncomfortable to read.

I have read Chapter 145 so far. Let me tell you what you think of this book. 1. This book is about cultivating immortals. It has history and systems. It is estimated that there will be Heavens or StarCraft later. It's also to your liking. 2. Cultivation system. Based on my current progress, uranium ore is the source of spiritual energy, but radiation is also a kind of ionizing radiation. If it is really possible to cultivate immortality through uranium ore, even if it is mixed with spiritual root restrictions, it seems very unreasonable. 3. The progress is too fast. The earth may not be unified yet, and the protagonist will become an immortal. The world should be promoted through the advancement of the protagonist's strength, rather than a one-stop upgrade. 4. Don't use color. Coloring can bring a certain degree of popularity, but if you don't have it in every chapter, it will be very annoying to read. 5. Take away the intelligence-reducing halo.

The pace can be slowed down, otherwise the title of the book will become: Daming, I will become invincible after cultivating immortality.

Who is talking about is not doing a task every day? Going to work is a task. Isn't eating, drinking and urinating a task? If you don't go to work and don't eat, drink and urinate, you are still dead. The life in this novel is far more colorful than that of ordinary people.

I can't believe it's written like this and the comment section is so harmonious.

The author's writing style is both solemn and humorous. It seems simple, but without profound knowledge, it is really difficult to grasp. This is probably because it is easy to take things easy.

Everyone is criticizing this book. Let me be fair. The writing is okay. You can tell. The author's accumulated knowledge is also acceptable. But the biggest failure of this book is. The author loves to pretend too much. On the contrary, the protagonist is nothing like an idiot. It's completely the other way around. Please stop showing off your Taoist knowledge. You are not here to see the cultivators. It's about watching the protagonist use the system's cheats to crush others. I'm not interested in your teachings at all. The protagonist can obviously show off his holiness in front of people, but he hides behind him like a cowardly dog. This is not how the behind-the-scenes story is written. Never mind. The comment may be deleted anyway. I won't type so many words.

You, Lao Zhu, are not innocent. . . . Zhu Xiongying. . . Metal, wood, water, fire and earth. . . It doesn't occupy anything.

I have to say that as far as Shuangwen is concerned, the absolute best Shuangwen can be the ceiling. The writing style is strong and the story flow is quite smooth. But some of the lens-changing writing methods are really uncomfortable. It's okay to change one or two occasionally, but I have to load all the scenes of all the villains. It's a bit boring to watch too much. But after thinking about it carefully, the most valuable thing is water. If the author doesn't write like this, there's no way he can write it down. There seems to be no better way to deal with it at the moment. I can only say that the author suggests that this kind of writing should be used less often, or the writing method should be changed. The sense of anticipation in the novel is quite good, personal advice! After the author has dealt with the feudal king incident, he needs to think carefully about the next step. After all, the immortal cultivator has been sorted out, and the protagonist must change the map. The vassal king's plan was for Zheng He to sail to the West and conquer the world. Then it's time to change venues. Personally, I feel that some foreshadowing should be dealt with carefully and written in advance to make the story progress more naturally. This book is highly recommended, you can read it.

With all due respect, these 160 to 170 chapters, this kind of retreat breaks through all kinds of hooks. The reason is to not let the protagonist appear, and then put the protagonist's wife, friends, family, relatives, and industry into crisis. Take off so many photos, and only let the protagonist come out to pretend to be slapped in the face unless the situation is critical. I haven't seen this kind of routine that has been played to death for a long time. It's so fresh. Why is your book getting better and better? I went back, and those who were supposed to die were not dead. I was still wondering about the development. We gathered together and treated the protagonist as a wild monster one after another, and then pulled out a large team from the corner, and also added a number of original elements to write. I am afraid that you failed to write the original outline and directly killed the generals under the protagonist. There is no need. I think many people read your book as a cool article.

Doesn't the author know about the imperial power and heavenly right that was emphasized in ancient times? A person who is no different from a god in the eyes of the world, although he is often rebelled against, you are also incredible. If it is a fantasy novel, forget it, but yours is an alternate history? Speechless...

I understand, what the protagonist means is that although I have 10,000 ways to deal with the enemy, I just don't use them.

Two chapters of "Not Leaving the Emperor", how hungry is the author?

Using lifespan to promote the protagonist is really a failure, and after traveling for so long, the protagonist has not done anything. The protagonist is too useless.

One glance identified it as pure Shuangwen

The writing is very good, but a little uncomfortable. Xu Miaojin is the protagonist's aunt in terms of seniority! Do you know that marrying your aunt is a mess?

There is a big problem as soon as Chapter 16 is written. You can summon thunder out of thin air. You don't want to hide the matter of cultivating immortals from everyone. Not to mention using thunder magic to those who doubt the protagonist, but also to show thunder magic to those close to you. Especially in the scene where hundreds of officials come to kneel down. Direct demonstration of thunder magic on the spot is not more effective than any other means? ? ?

The legitimacy and legitimacy of the Ming Dynasty's government lay in expelling the Mongolian Yuan and regaining Kyushu. How could it be possible that just a few years after the founding of the country, and still the first government team, a group of Sai kings colluded with the Mongols? Forget it, Gou Lian just let his son go.

The Ming Dynasty's reduction of feudal vassals was a lunatic. Look at the history books. The Ming Dynasty spent its entire life either attacking Mongolia or the Northeast. The three Yongle generations fought until they died. It would be better to usurp the throne to attract attention and let future generations only have internal worries and no external troubles. Why didn't Yongle cut off his vassal status? No need, drag them together to go to the Northern Expedition, you see who dies faster and who dies more, cut down the vassals, cut down the vassals, the nobles killed by Hongwu and Yongle together are not enough to call the emperor. In the Ming Dynasty, similar to the Fruit Party, it was a militaristic system that was hollowed out by the four major families. Baldheads suppressed the Yunnan, Guizhou and Sichuan warlords to cut down the vassal, which was useless.

I have saved up my monthly votes for so long and have already voted. The author's updates have been fairly stable during this period, and the votes will be available tomorrow. I strive to maintain this speed until the end. I don't ask too much, just eight million. Author, you have to work harder! ! !

Marry your aunt's biological sister? What magical operation? What the hell is the difference between this and incest?

Zhu Di was shot from the air so many times, and every time he said forget it, not to investigate anymore, if someone else wants your life, no matter how you react, it can't be forget it! For a person with a lot of staff, no matter how idiotic he is, he can't just forget it. A gentleman's anger will cause blood to fly a hundred steps, and a king's anger will lay down millions of corpses!                   ，，，，？ It's so unreasonable, historical heroes and famous ministers have all become fools! Even if he is a notorious traitor who governs the country, he is still outstanding in strategy!            ，，，，            ，，，，，，！

It's inexplicable, why not just cut off all the destiny, it keeps going around

The writing is okay, the plot is average, a bit stiff, just think about it

Prince Lao Zhu is not even dead yet, and the kings are starting to rebel?

I'm quite speechless. Everything else is easy to say and there's no big problem. Just a lifespan? ! ? You have already cultivated immortality and you still only have a few days or even hours? Is this setting superfluous or unnecessary?

It has a unique flavor, it looks good, but it's a little uncomfortable. I finished it after watching it. If I don't want to keep it, I'll watch it for updates.

The Ming Dynasty clan would not have named it this way, which reflects that their historical skills are somewhat poor.

It's been a week since I stopped updating. Is this a eunuch?

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