All Heavens: the Witch Begins to Wreak Havoc on the Peninsula

The writing is blunt, the characters are facially made, and the plot is ridiculous! There is a problem with the settings! If you are not very mature, please spray lightly! Witch World is the main world. Watch the settings of the two movies. The world view is very large. You can try to extend it and add some other movies and TV dramas. You can refer to it: I only have 60 days to live, and I become a citizen of the motherland! Others are copies, do not manifest them in the real world, otherwise they will be very fragmented! Participation in the dungeon is very low. It doesn't matter whether you are in the first dungeon or not. Follow the plot. Is it just for a pregnant woman? I love taking orders so much! Then Li Fuzhen would just write about the divorce! I happen to have a daughter! I can't understand this actor who likes pregnant women! Send us your outline for a look! There are very few people writing about Han Zong, but I can still write about it if I organize it carefully! If this is still the case, listen to me and cut it off! Otherwise, you will have to stand alone later! Finally good luck!

After reading the reviews, I found that this book has all sorts of faults, but no one mentioned Jarvis, the artificial intelligence. When the protagonist received this reward, he boasted so much that he could even hack into the core data of large groups and governments. What was the result? It was just used to prevent Li Jianxi from finding out about his affair with other women by surrounding surveillance cameras. Later, it was just used to check the surveillance. When I got it, Goo Ja-yoon wanted to destroy some gene company branch to find some information. It could be used to check the government or gene company information to find out his own life experience. Even if the artificial intelligence was used to speculate in stocks with the 100 billion won awarded together, I would have nothing to say. Jarvis assists Iron Man in research. When the protagonist arrives, he monitors him. Writing this mission reward to give the protagonist is useless.

What is the significance of writing the Facebook page of "Train to Busan"? It's just that there are two more people in the plot who don't belong to this plot. After following the plot again, oh, yes, the biggest change is that at the end of FB, the male protagonist was prevented from opening the door and the male protagonist was saved?

I will create a special post to talk about what I have to say as a bookworm for more than ten years. Don't save those who deserve to be saved, and don't kill those who deserve to be killed. Forcing the heroine into the dungeon increases the difficulty. Even though he knew that the character played by Ma Dong-seok would die in that place, he was indifferent. The man in the suit didn't clean up when he should have. I knew there was only one mutant when I got on the bus, so I didn't want to clean it up and just followed the plot. You can obviously not get off the train at Daejeon Station, but you have to get off. Forcibly separating from your girlfriend increases the difficulty and continues to follow the plot. The more than ten chapters that were shortened made me want to vomit, so I rewarded 2 coins for posting. After reading this point of the book, I can only give 0.5 Points out of 100.

I am a reader who came here from the author's previous book, so I am considered an old reader. I would like to say that this book is quite good overall, but I feel that the author is still more suitable for writing daily prose. There are many problems mentioned by book friends in the copy of Train to Busan. In fact, the author has already given the reasons in the book. But the biggest problem with the Train to Busan copy is that it follows the plot too much and it becomes completely meaningless. The author should have briefly touched on the original plot of Train to Busan instead of writing so many chapters in one go. In the copy, you should describe in detail what the protagonist did, rather than repeating the original plot first and saying what the protagonist did. Because most of the readers who come to watch Korean entertainment fanfiction should have watched the movie Train to Busan, they will only feel bored if you repeat it multiple times, and readers who have not watched the movie Train to Busan will only be confused when they read such a simple plot. So there is no need to describe what the original plot is. The last important question is again: You can follow the original plot, but what you need to describe in detail is what the protagonist did during this period. There is no need to write about what the people in the original plot did! ! ! Because it's really boring to watch like this.

This is a book about an urban scumbag. The witch's superpowers and other things are just a formality and don't appear very often. When there are copies, they mostly follow the plot, and there are not many new things. If you like reading Aquaman, you can still read it, but if you want to read the Witch, forget it. Anyway, I am the latter, so I only read the free chapter and skipped reading.

The story is about selling dog meat over sheep's heads, and the title is written to the heavens, but the result is that a slut with invincible superpowers is sleeping with girls. The strategy is basically based on assassination, and sleeping with girls is basically using money. The article is not on topic, and the daily superpowers are written in a fake and empty way, without a sense of substitution.

I don't even recognize it. If it's written like this, it's more exciting than watching a TV series. I read two chapters every day and watched it lonely 😥😥😥

I don't even understand what the first dungeon is. The dungeon mission is in the main world of fusion. After this operation is completed, it will have no impact. The protagonist is probably not the brain in the vat playing solo in the virtual space.

The world of film and television materializes. . . How many people are there in Korea? How many people died in a Busan train? No panic at all? My balls are almost gone

There is neither motherland nor lawlessness, and there is no one who can do whatever they want. It belongs to the headline party.

Go through time. Don't add all those plots and the like into one world, it will look messy. Isn't it good to time travel? You can let go of your hands and feet, and others won't say that you are suppressing your strength. It seems a bit stressful now, you know? Isn't it okay to treat the main world as your own back garden? I can't stand it now. The key point is that you wrote it without knowing the plot. Don't you think it would be embarrassing for the heavens you named yourself to end up in one world? Your writing is not bad either. It would be easier to write about the heavens, just crush them directly across the world.

The first time I saw the beginning of "The Witch", I started reading it out of curiosity. However, the author has really watched too many Korean dramas, so he wrote it in such a way that he included the ancient virus in the Internet article at the beginning. Dark blue...? The fighting scenes in "Go away" are very exciting. Although the plot is weak, it doesn't have the plot of an old man.

A quarter of all Koreans died. Within a few days, everyone forgot to look at how many people died in the Middle East. This chaos has been going on for so many years. It's funny. The world doesn't need to be logical.

Why don't you kill the executive in advance? Wouldn't it be less troublesome? If you know the plot, why don't you eliminate the hidden dangers in advance and wait for death?

So holy! Save all the sticks? ?

Nice update! I always want to become a big fat man in one bite. I think the writing is still good. It is always intermittent to make readers have confidence in you. If the next book is like this and you still chase after it, it will only disappoint the people who like it.

A book that's more about romance, a pretty guy with a harem? Anyway, it looks weird.

You should learn from the Personal Customization Demon King. He also promised that he would keep updating. Even if the update is interrupted, he will continue to write. He has done it. He started to stop updating three years ago, either for a month or half a month, or occasionally once a day. He persisted for about 300 chapters and is still jumping.

Looking at this update status, I really can't stand it 🤫

Can you update it properly? . . . . .

There hasn't been an update for so long, so it's not really a eunuch anymore!

The praise is due to the appearance of my uncle.

One of Yangshu's books has died. What's going on with yours? Can you update this book properly?😅

Is this the rhythm of preparing for an update every five days?