Konoha: Uchiha's Gorgeous Rebellion

I just watched the first part and couldn't stand it anymore. There are many poisonous points. The author wrote a lot of things in the name of fan fiction that are not in line with the original work and logic. The protagonist has a golden finger at the beginning that can practice immortal arts, but he can't even refine chakra. Later, the golden finger has almost no sense of existence, and he doesn't know what the protagonist is practicing; The protagonist recruits some Uchiha affiliates in order to cultivate his own power, but as a result, he can't defeat even one of the dozen; The author is inexplicable Miraculously, many ninja supporting characters have been added, the Hatake clan has withered, the protagonist is given secret techniques before he can win over, the Senju clan has become common people, Tsunade Nawaki no longer has a surname during this period, the protagonist is inexplicably added as Senju Gen, various supporting characters from various families have a little quarrel with the protagonist, The author finally remembered the protagonist and the main character. After the interaction, the soul of Hatake Sakumo came out. This is the most disgusting. Even if the ghost lingers and the soul does not return to the Pure Land, I don't believe that the Six Paths Sage of the Pure Land does not know that so many people have not sensed the power of the soul in Konoha for so long, but the protagonist has seen it, and can also use ninjutsu to affect the surrounding environment, 😓 The main character's personality is inconsistent, and it is said that he is deliberately hiding it, pretending to be a arrogant Uchiha image. When he met Shisui, he was ignored after being fooled, when he met Kakashi, he had a forceful relationship, when he met the root, he was hunted down and was nothing, and when he met Itachi, it was because Izumi didn't care about anything and let him do it. I really don't know what the protagonist is doing😓😓😓😓

If you can accept the third level of fighting power in Naruto, just pretend I didn't say it

Special ink marks, talking about some useless things, grinding and chirping

Sharingan has too great a reaction to the spirit, either extreme love or extreme hatred, blood stain disease

A 10-year-old boy who made a name for himself in the war and who can fight Raikage said, "I don't want to expose my strength too early."

I think the author is really speechless. The protagonist can be compared with Raikage, so why is Naruto still here? Isn't the world everything the strong say it is? His strength is in Konoha, and he is in the top three anyway. I don't see what he needs to endure. He actually let the roots capture him.

Brothers have tried poison, and Shennong was poisoned to death when he came. It is recommended not to watch it with your brain. You will find that if you watch it with your brain, you will be poisoned to death. You have to be poisoned to death at Uchiha Spring. Just chop that Uchiha Itachi with a knife and he will die. Damn it, Larry Bo said, it's boring to watch so much! !

The author does not respect the original work. He made up many places that were clearly mentioned in the original work. For example, the Senju who clearly disappeared have returned, and the teleportation technique has become a skill that everyone who has not graduated from the ninja students can do. Hinata can even do air palm. According to the author, a rookie like Neji is rare to see in a hundred years Also, after the third war, Konoha actually had a war with Shayun, and the third generation who had clearly become an ostrich actually got hard. The author also doesn't respect himself. He just wrote that the protagonist has to keep a low profile and avoid the attention of Konoha's corrupt high-level officials. As a result, when he went to the battlefield at the age of 10, he kicked Kirabi and punched Yondaime Lei, which was extremely arrogant. By the way, after playing a few games, the protagonist's age has reversed to 9 years old. It was written casually

The more I watch, the more speechless I become. I can't stand it. It's not too poisonous, but I just don't want to watch it. It's amazing.

God, it's so poorly written, boring and dry. It can be seen that the protagonist wants to show off and be cool at the same time, so he pretends to be cool but only half-assed. He thinks he is noble but is also filthy.

Uchiha has Fugaku and Uchiha Itachi, so why worry about being destroyed unless the protagonist is confident that he can hold up two pairs of kaleidoscopes?

I took a look at the table of contents. It's almost 400 chapters and I still haven't solved f4. I'll write a hammer.

The writing is really disgusting, you have to be stubborn and stubborn to the end, you clearly know the plot, but you don't do anything. The whole story has nothing to do with the original work~ I hate this kind of insisting on writing a slap in the face, but the writing is completely different. Even a child can see that you have retained your strength. No matter how much Danzo you retain, they will think there is something wrong with you, okay? The writing makes people laugh.

Kneel down and lick your sister "Izumi Uchiha"

It's so funny that the author also said that the Book of Three Bodies is a substitute for a clone. A civilian ninja elementary school student can use the teleportation technique. No wonder no one has read this book.

You started working as a Raikage at the age of 10. In the early stage, you pretended to be a low-key influencer, but you did a breathing technique, and then you cheated all the kids under you? 😰

The author has some secondary issues, especially White Fang's soul, which has been dead for so many years and is still floating around in the old house. Does Naruto have a ghost setting?

The rhythm is so weird and incomprehensible. I want to write about political struggles, and I am also writing compositions for primary school students. Once you have the strength to kill all the heads on your own, you will not know what to do with your schemes and calculations. It feels like it was written by an AI fed by a bunch of light novels, with a hammer here and there.

This type of novel will not be popular, the author thinks too much. Those who pretend to be cool and don't make sense, who are not happy and logical, are all old readers. I would like to give some advice to the author, either pretend to be cool or be honest. Pretentious style, the protagonist is a genius type, leaving one or two back-ups, which makes you feel immersed in the story. Gou Daoliu, secretly infiltrating the outside forces of the village or living alone in the village, was sentenced to escape before the clan was exterminated. Why does Gou Dao pretend to be a power flow? The first Gou means that no one pays attention to the ordinary people. Without resources, power cannot be developed at all. Maybe Jun Liang Pill Gou Dao can't even afford detonating talismans. Gou Dao has no promotion promotion. Command and management positions are all geniuses and cannot be given to ordinary people. Simply put, war means that you can't get into management positions. Even if you finally burst out your strength, it will be of little use. Gou Dao is destined not to make much contribution because the credit belongs to the commander, so not many people will recognize the protagonist. Furthermore, Gou Dao can't pick geniuses to beat because it is illogical to pick geniuses to beat. Picking losers to beat gives people the impression of forcefully pretending to be cool.

Itachi is not a good man. He wants to be good for his sister, so he should stop the relationship forcefully. Is he still planning to rely on his sister to push the main plot? Children's friendships can't be broken off at the drop of a hat. What's the big deal? I always like to be the Riddler.

Why are you still being treated like a dog to Konoha? You are so insignificant, leading your tribe to defect to Konoha, and then constantly digging into Konoha's walls to force Konoha F4 to the point of desperation, watching Konoha's demise. This should actually be more enjoyable, right?

In short, except for borrowing the names of Naruto's characters, this book basically has nothing to do with Naruto. The plot is purely different with only the names of each chapter being the same.

The author has written well before, I hope the author will work harder

Senju Xuan? ? ? Is the author named Senju just here to be funny?

You have been fighting F4 and Weasel for 26 years now. I have served you for 26 years. You can directly expose Weasel to the whole world as a traitor, and let the whole world know the underlying shady story. What is important in Konoha's internal political struggle is to occupy the moral high ground. In addition to the use of force, the most important thing in internal political struggle is to gain the reputation of justice. , The position of Hokage is the commanding heights of righteousness and is difficult to deal with. Just smear it from public opinion and there is no need to smear it. It is inherently black. Weasel has assassinated the protagonist before, so the entire Uchiha should know that he is a traitor instead of hiding it. He will completely lose trust among the tribe and make the conspiracy of the Hokage faction go bankrupt. By the way, Weasel is the dog of F4.

The pace is too slow and the layout is a bit confusing. If you like daily life, you can watch it.