Journey into the World of Witchcraft

I was wrong. The author gives wisdom to the protagonist every day. He obviously offends so many people but still says that he has not offended him. And how many people have he offended just by comparing it? It really needs a golden finger, because the author is too cruel and keeps abusing the poor brain of the protagonist. He is obviously a strong man who can fight on an isolated island, but in the end he behaves like a college student who has just graduated.

I don't understand why the protagonist hides so much hostility towards men. He invites parties and says he has ulterior motives, and he also says he has ulterior motives when forming a team. The problem is that he doesn't say what the purpose is. He is afraid of being used as a gun user, which is even more ridiculous. It's okay to let a female classmate act as a gun user and go to an official wizard to change drinks. Male classmates just say hello and take precautions.

The poor rely on mutation, the rich rely on technology. So far, the protagonist should achieve controllable benign mutation through scientific means, just like Tony Stark using a mortal body to rival gods. Isn't this much better than some system, novices like Long Aotian? So come on, author, write well, someone will read it.

After looking at it overall, it's not bad, but I suggest the author assign a gold finger to the protagonist, even a symbolic gold finger. Otherwise, based on the few pictures I've seen so far, I feel that the protagonist has no characteristics and is just like an ordinary indigenous protagonist.

I just gave up after reading Chapter 52. It's not that the author is not good enough, the plot, characters, backgrounds, magic, etc. Are all right, but the character of the protagonist is wrong. A time-traveler who lived thirty years in the previous life should have his own experience, and then after time-travel, he is still a noble, feudal landlord class, and should have enjoyed everything he should enjoy. Then he went through a human battle royale on an isolated island and became a wizard. In the first chapter, he was introduced like this. To put it bluntly, this is a stack of buffs for a time-traveler. If you are born in a noble family and are cruel and ruthless, you will be eliminated by the poor. If you say that you are lonely and someone asks you to sign up for a tour, but you don't want to go, you can just deal with it. Isn't hypocrisy the basic skill of aristocrats? Think about the yin and yang of British gentlemen and others will know it. Secretly saying that they have bad intentions, Andre has family resources and connections, and is obviously trying to win over people. The wizard is just an exchange. As long as he gives more, there is nothing wrong with it. You will naturally be qualified to negotiate as you become stronger. It's okay for people like this who don't know how to make friends, but why do they always offend people? Of course, I know that the plot needs development and conflict, but can you not forcefully develop a conflict between two people who have no conflict of interest? Like in the novel about cultivating immortals, the family members want the protagonist's foundation-building pill or something, but the protagonist has nothing. You let the experimental assistant under his mentor compete with each other. I won't say that much, after all, it is a fight between brothers.

In my opinion, without a golden finger, the protagonist needs to maximize his personal charm: IQ, EQ, personality, etc. In fact, this is a test of the author's design ability. The plot design of this novel lacks excitement and personal charm, and there is no golden finger to add drama. So it creates a bad impression. I don't know what you think.

The protagonist is nothing like a time traveler who has killed many people. Gives the impression that he is a socially anxious otaku

It's not exciting at all, and the protagonist doesn't behave like a financial expert, just like a time traveler.

I feel that the background setting of the protagonist of this novel is very poor, he is a time traveler. And it is obtained through a survival competition, and no skills are the same as a blank slate. How to survive before. The most important thing is that after the survival battle, there is no difference between the character and before time travel.

Is it okay for the protagonist to be so mentally retarded, not to look like a wizard, but to look like a normal person? He also killed more than a dozen people before entering the academy? ? What you write can make people vomit blood. Can you be a little temperamental when others plot against you? ? ?

The protagonist is so ordinary and ordinary and has won several times by luck. What will happen next? Relying on the so-called water healing technique to kidnap others to help you? Want to write about a family that loves each other?

Leave a message to support me. It's been a long time since I read a wizarding novel in one sitting. In the entire new fantasy book list, this is the only book I like to read. (Personal taste, don't spray if you don't like it)

Luo Liba is talking a lot of nonsense.

To be honest, I read the passage about Anderson several times, and I didn't understand why the protagonist had a conflict with him, nor why Anderson would deliberately kill the protagonist. That's it, I'll keep reading and see what happens next.

They are all written by wizards. They don't give gold fingers, and they can't see the protagonist's extraordinary qualities.

Say goodbye to Goldfinger. The traveler's knowledge and understanding of the multiverse are already dead. It's hard to find such a book, but it's still a disaster. Say goodbye. There are too many Goldfinger books now.

The two different things about the previous one and the next one make me wonder if they were written by the same person? One moment he talks about fighting, and the next moment he doesn't want to hurt her. The first one is too cautious and the latter one is too careless. Anyway, I keep watching. In short, it's a contradiction.

Pig's Knuckle is too weak and doesn't feel like a wizard that can stand out at all.

Just like a primary school student's composition, the settings are all completed in the form of dialogue, which is too stiff.

So far the writing looks good! Very wizard-like

What the hell are you writing? The protagonist has absolutely no character that a time traveler should have. He knows his teammates have bad intentions but still tries his best to help them. After he is unable to do anything, he still expects his teammates to help. The author also keeps downgrading the protagonist's intelligence level.

Recommend a novel, hoping to inspire the author Lord of the Night Crows, this book is an infinite flow, and I felt that it collapsed later on. However, I think the description and setting of the wizard in it are very good. I recommend the author to read the first 250 chapters, hoping to get some inspiration.

I think there are some things that can be improved in the portrayal of the protagonist. The protagonist is on a steady path of development, but lacks distinctive characteristics. As a non-genius civilian with no background, to climb to the top of the wizard's road requires enlightenment, such as the belief in risking death and resurrecting/knowledge such as Hungry pursuit and even madness / wily and calculating strategies / ruthless and ruthless in order to achieve the goal / harmless on the surface and cold-blooded and ruthless on the inside, etc. The current protagonists are a bit passer-by, and their personalities are not distinctive enough. It feels like there has been no change and growth all the way up to now. In addition, I feel that the protagonist is not strong enough to reach the peak, but forcibly strengthening the protagonist feels a bit unmatched (returning to the original problem, the protagonist lacks characteristics and feels like a noob). I hope the author can consider it and make corrections later. The more he writes, the better

Too Chinese Teacher: You are all talented people Apprentice: Thank you for your love A group of ancient people pretending to be wizards and apprentices

Do you have any wizard novels? Don't make the plug-ins too big and don't pretend to slap all kinds of Long Aotian in the face. Or low magic western fantasy novels

The protagonist is too useless, there is no golden finger and no adventure

Although the protagonist is a bit intellectual, the sense of reality is quite good

To be honest, this method of cultivating dark wizards not only fails to improve the strength of the wizard academy, but will actually decrease it. Has there been so much wizarding literature and no one has improved it?

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