People Are Being Devoured, but I Can Penetrate the Heavens

What is the use of the thirty-six postures that the protagonist brings back to practice? Practicing the thirty-six postures can achieve the goal of all warriors. In this way, even if someone is bullied by warriors, at least there is hope and possibility of resistance. If it is not announced, it will still be a privileged practice that only warriors can practice. Ordinary people still have no systematic exercises when they become warriors. It will be useful to bring them back. At most, it will strengthen the combat power and qualifications of the middle-level warriors on the earth. In the future, the earth will enter the universe, and it will still rely on Luo Feng to be the pillar. Which soy sauce warriors will still dominate the earth, but it is useless.

I haven't read the book, but I can see the problem just from the introduction. The system of Swallowing Starry Sky alone is enough for you to write about, and the systems of Swallowing Starry Sky and Desolate Age are fucking different. You said it's normal for you to travel to other worlds to understand the laws to speed up the shortcomings of the main world. It is necessary to confirm the protagonist's main system, and quickly develop the system of the main world from other worlds to supplement the shortcomings of the main system, instead of dividing the system by writing a hoe here and there. For example, martial arts training is moving step by step toward becoming a martial artist or cultivating immortality. In the introduction, you need to take the elixir to cover the sky and swallow the stars. Do you need this little time? Or do you want to strengthen your body? What's the use of Doupo taking the strange fire? If you don't practice Burning Technique, will you pair it with the mainstream of Swallowing Starry Sky? Also, will Wudong Qiankun and Manghuangji pair with Swallowing Starry Sky? This is not just a matter of including all the famous books. For example, Zong Man has a book in the same world. Do you think it is appropriate for One Punch Man and Naruto to be in the same world? If the main world is awesome, use the main world. If the world level is low, use it to ascend. This kind of integration is too messy and the system was written not long ago. I hope the author's next book will be better.

The most speechless thing among Zhetian colleagues is that the magic medicine of the ancient forbidden land is completely allowed by the Dacheng Holy Body to allow Ye Fan to pick it. Otherwise, it would be impossible for the Quasi-Emperor Ninth Level to get it. What kind of thing can a group of fan book protagonists who are basically at the ant level be able to pick up first? Beidou Star Territory, Ye Fan is back again, roaring loudly! The universe is in turmoil, the world is bleeding, and one clan after another is suffering. Especially the roar of the Dacheng Holy Body when it died in battle actually reached his heart. It was a message that spanned the galaxy. In an instant, he knew a lot of things. He went into the Ancient Restricted Area to collect medicine with the tacit approval of the Dacheng Holy Body. Otherwise, he could leave, but he would never take the medicine with him. Silently paying attention, watching the footsteps of his growth, but not interfering, hoping that he can find his own path instead of following the path of all the Holy Eucharists.

The power structure in Swallowing Starry Sky is doomed, and the heavens cannot be conquered before reaching a certain strength. Because if you bring something different from the style of this world, you will be yelled at and beaten to death. Then take your legacy with you to study.

Personally, I feel like my writing is okay now.

In fact, I think you can get the Burning Jue when you travel to Doupo. After all, you can also travel to Zhetian. There is a fire domain in Zhetian. There seem to be ten special flames in it. You can devour them step by step and save the effort of finding them. Moreover, some special physiques should also be able to cultivate some special flames, which can be exchanged with them.

How can I put it? I'm not very interested after seeing Dou Po.

The protagonist's IQ is too low, so why don't we just let him have a long memory?

Does the Dawn World in the introduction refer to the Dawn Era?

The protagonist really wants to 22 become a semi-four-dimensional creature

Did Shen Nong test poison? ? ?

The death penalty is deliberately disgusting and does not give others a way to survive. Believe it or not, more than half of the world's people will die the next day. Who can become the god of war without any power? Is it difficult to develop some area-of-effect weapons of destruction?

I can't stand it anymore. Some of them are not very well written and I won't write bad reviews. At most, I won't read them. After all, I can't write them myself. But your book is really poisonous, so I opened a chapter at random. I quit that one before I finished it. It's really too poisonous and I can't stand it anymore. (As for the chapter about Dou Po for the first time, if you have Shen Nong who is not afraid of poison, you can try it)

It feels like the author has changed when writing Wu Dong Qian Kun.

It feels like a running account. Everything is basically written in one stroke. The places that should not be written in detail are not written in detail, and the places that should be written in detail are not written in detail. Sometimes the protagonist's mood is very inexplicable, and then he smiles inexplicably and is inexplicably surprised. When I traveled to various worlds, I basically took over a large area in one go. I went there and improved my strength. When I came back, I was gone. Reading the latest chapter gave me a familiar feeling. If I guessed correctly, the protagonist has to become a liberated slave and fight against the injustice of the system. The twist is very inexplicable. I felt that the mood was not enough, and then I turned around, got infected, and wanted to do whatever I wanted. In summary, I will write another book.

The battle power of the Ancient Emperor is demonstrated by covering the sky and killing him However, the Immortal Lord is also terrifying, extremely terrifying. He can live from the age of mythology to the present. He is not just relying on one person's secrets, but also because of his merits and creation. He became enlightened as early as the age of mythology! Clang! A sword cuts through eternity, like a flying fairy from the sky. It is too gorgeous. The sword of immortality is so sharp and dazzling that the person who shines can't open his eyes. It is extremely terrifying. In the sky, the galaxies collapsed, and large areas of stars were extinguished, turning into ashes under the sword of longevity! This fist and sword collided together. It was a confrontation between the law and the avenue, a duel between personal life and will, and a confrontation of invincible beliefs. The supreme duel was terrifying to the extreme. It was not only the confrontation between the physical body and the spirit, but also all kinds of life experiences and insights, etc., All burst out at the first time, shaking the entire universe. "Dang!" There was a loud noise, and the most dazzling light burst out with the fist and the sword as the center, spreading in all directions, sweeping the sky, destroying many galaxies, and turning endless stars into fragments and powder!

A supreme leader raised his feet and stepped forward. This time he was no longer as restrained as he was on the road to becoming an immortal. The aura of supreme power was overwhelming, sweeping across the nine heavens and ten lands, and all the stars were trembling. And at this moment, the Beidou Star Territory collapsed, and the Emperor Burial Star fell apart at this moment! And this is just the beginning! With just one kick, a tall cyan figure stepped out, causing the Beidou Star Territory to fall apart. This shocked the human world! What is Supreme? This is a terrifying interpretation of their strength. Now the Burial Emperor Star is meaningless to them. One kick can destroy this star field. In the distance, I don't know how many stars exploded, like a gorgeous rain of fireworks. It was very beautiful, but also too terrifying, reaching the extreme. But the cost of such splendor was too high, and soon the star field dimmed.

Judging from this meaning, the author is a eunuch

Being a eunuch is a very wise choice, but the writing is really not good.

... I recommend all eunuch books as a starting point 😅

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~