Hong Kong Comprehensive: Opening Night Tour with Candles

Is it better to change the protagonist and the title of the book in the later chapters?

The subject matter was originally very good. It was originally a time traveler with a golden finger, but it was forced to portray itself as a lawless character who kills without blinking an eye. The first commandment is because the police don't know whether you are possessed and will shoot you. If you kill you directly, it is still an excuse, 2002 It directly forcibly creates conflicts. The human world is already very miserable. The supernatural department in the police station can still maintain order. Even Yang Jian in Weird Resurrection is not someone who will be killed immediately if there is a little conflict. Well, actually, I just don't like the character of Pig's Feet.

It feels like the ghosts here are not normal. It seems to be pollution from a high level. The body is a shelter, and the soul is polluted as soon as it changes.

There is something, but the current problem is that the protagonist thinks too little: Ordinary people who have experienced so many horrors will definitely think about the logic of what they know and summarize the rules. After all, this broken world is full of scary ghosts and monsters. If you are not careful, you will be killed. Normal people will definitely think hard. Then I was somewhat interested in the general framework of the plot, and made a simple guess: The book clearly states that the immortals and gods have fallen and gone into hiding, and then the evil spirits and evil spirits who are now wandering outside, including the (suspected) impermanent gods of the underworld, are dedicated to messing up the world of the underworld. Therefore, I guess the Yang world was very prosperous when the ancient immortals and gods were still there, and they were all mixed in the Yang side. The evil spirits could only tremble in the corner, and the underworld was also managed or suppressed by the immortals. There was a huge gap. Later, something happened to the immortals and gods, and they were all gone, but the Yang world still had strong inertia (rules, laws, etc.), So the Yin world/yin side was committed to messing up the Yang world, expanding the influence of the Yin world, and weakening the Yang world. In the process, individual ghosts and monsters also benefited. After years of trouble caused by ghosts and monsters, the world of the underworld has declined a lot (shown as demons dancing wildly and ghosts appearing frequently), but it has not declined to the end, and ghosts are not yet completely unscrupulous. Then the gods take action, or the back-up they have reserved before, the protagonist travels through time and obtains the system (understood as a magic weapon that changes form according to the owner's wishes. If the ancients obtained it, it may be a wordless heavenly book or something. As a modern person, the protagonist is a modern time traveler, and the magic weapon becomes a system), in order to cut down mountains and destroy temples, reproduce the great deeds of Zhang Daoling (legendary version), eliminate monsters and monsters, and recreate a peaceful world in the world. Have fun with your imagination.

Now I have read Chapter 29 and tell me my feelings The protagonist that the author wants to create A calm personality → In fact, he is panicked and often frightened Wits → In fact, he acts like a fool He is full of energy and different → In fact, he is the best of both worlds A picture and a fact speak for themselves

Good guy, the water in this world is very deep. The original father said that there are no ghosts in this world. I am afraid it is not the kind of world where the more you know, the deeper you dive.

The more I write, the more my hips stretch. The male protagonist is just a bastard. Doesn't Goldfinger have any Taoist skills? Forcibly suppressed, why would the six-armed demon rank be so high at the beginning? After the plot, I worked so hard to give some crappy stuff, and the effort was completely out of proportion. I was really speechless watching it. Now the devil is going to find a younger brother to sacrifice his soul to him. It's really out of character, and the shaping is such a failure.

The Hong Kong variety show "Ghosts" only writes about ghosts, and insists on portraying weird ancient gods. Nondescript slipped away

Finally I can't stand it any longer. Damn it, all the ghosts and monsters in the Hong Kong variety show can be dealt with. You have to add some weird rules. Okay, I held my nose and forced myself to continue reading. The result is that there is a system, and the pig's feet are not given the ability to save lives. It's already 2022. Who still reads this kind of frustrating online articles? It's weird that you can afford to put this book on the shelves.

This protagonist... I don't know how to describe it. His IQ is at the level of ordinary people, but his mentality is not good, and he is very easy to drift.

From the time the book appeared, it collapsed all the way.

What is the author doing recently? Is the protagonist so jealous? Do you fuck the protagonist of a movie after just a disagreement, or do you get a skill and become a demon? Can't stand it anymore

The protagonist's intelligence is so touching, and the supporting character's intelligence is even more touching. Without knowing the dangers around him, the only lottery that might work on ghosts is not drawn, and he waits to go home to draw. He becomes the Riddler without saying anything, and then feels exhausted after working hard to help the other party stay alive. The other party also asks the protagonist why he is too tired. , I only have glasses that can see ghosts, I have no ability to talk to ghosts, and I almost overturned. When the protagonist touched the corpse, the police didn't stop him. After touching the corpse, the police said that the protagonist was pretending to be a ghost, and what kind of sneer could the protagonist do?

I'll go, brother, if you want to have an affair with the heroine, please tell me as soon as possible, so that I can run away as soon as possible.

This book. . The front is really well written. The setting of the plot and the level of horror are very good, but I was embarrassed from the 9th level to the 1st level. . .

Planning to withdraw. The male protagonist is the only sober one in the whole world, which makes the male protagonist nervous all the time, which is very boring.

In fact, ghosts and weirdness are not bad. Author, your writing style is also good. Overall, it looks OK, but you have to carefully shape the protagonist. He makes people look like a fool. He is either a simple and honest kind of fool, or a kind of fool with an IQ problem. This is very fatal.

The author himself admitted that his girlfriend broke up immediately after reading this novel.

I feel like this book is getting darker and darker as I write it.

Crazy bar always intersperses some adjectives such as sharp eyebrows, eight-pack abs, sharp edges, and calm temperament. What do you want to express? Are the plot characters available to you? If you are really capable, you will be different like Jack Ma! Now I feel narcissistic!

The protagonist's IQ is not online, and the world written by the author is so sad. If there are so many ghosts, how can people in that world live?

Name: Zhang Qiaoqiao Gender: Female Race: Ghost Talent: Summon: Imp Skills: Illusion, Life, Claws, Hair, Ghost Bone Eater Skills: Dunjia Heavenly Book Inner Alchemy: Ice Spirit Pearl can master the ice and snow water in the world to protect the body, and is not afraid of the sun and any magic weapon with yang attribute to damage Ghost Weapon: Flowing Cloud Gauze The treasures in the ghost world contain secret spells that can seduce souls and kill ghosts like swords Image: A beautiful female ghost with long black hair, a phoenix robe and a floating ribbon Introduction: The ghost bride, longing to be loved, falls in love with the male protagonist in the ghost world and follows him {"NickName":"Book Friends 202009151 22818503","UserId":354775317}

Just updating these days is nonsense. There are so many messy updates. It's time to update normally.

Are you starting to be a stitch monster now? Be a human being! Stop watching

It looks okay at the front, but it looks boring at the back. It would be weird not to cut it.

In fact, some of the settings in this book are quite good, but it's a pity!

It feels more and more fantasy-like later on, and monsters are leveled up a bit quickly. It feels like you can level up in just two or three chapters like on a plane. Isn't it a little too fast? I didn't say anything except defeating monsters. I wrote it but not completely.

Giao, I just read this book today. I read it for a few hours and thought it was good. Then when I exited, I found the latest chapter - QAQ has been cut.

The following chapters are written incorrectly. Has the protagonist's cultivation level changed? Chapters will not be connected to the previous chapter and the next chapter will be skipped.

What the hell is going on lately? Blocked and won't watch again.