Naruto: From the Start, Bound to the Homelander Template

The opening is clichéd; wouldn't it be better to be more direct? Get straight to the point; that's how you grab people's attention.

I don't know if it will work, but I'll try to accumulate more chapters!

I only realized it was updated five days ago after I bookmarked it... Is the author still writing? I hope my monthly pass wasn't wasted.

Is Steamed Cheese your alternate account? His writing style seems similar to yours.

Why do we have to keep using the prefix "Uchiha Obito"? Why not just call him Obito? Kakashi does the same thing...

The chapter title has absolutely no connection to the content.

There are too many typos; you didn't even check it before uploading!