Starting with the Celebrity Wilderness Survival Show

Disgusting batch! Drive high and go low, all kinds of poisonous points! Let's analyze the author's emotional description! Poisonous point 1. In the early stage, the names of the guests were replaced by various nicknames, such as Yahuazi and Milk Tea Lun! Can't we use homophony or originality? Poisonous point 2. During the writing of the 300 chapters of the desert island chapter, I had various ambiguities with the female guests! Not up, not down! Use various vulgar writing styles to build a memorial for the protagonist's scumbag! I thought my writing was good! Poison Point 3. After the entertainment chapter opens, the protagonist directly transforms into a stallion! After confronting Yahuazi, confront Tietie! After quarreling with Tietie, go abroad to quarrel! I still have to be criticized for understanding him I read 500 chapters of the book and couldn't stand it anymore. A very good book was ruined by the author!

Another Wilderness Survival Gold Finger gives food directly and poisons it to death. The biggest drawback of this book is to survive in the wilderness and rely on the entertainment section. It would be better to change to singing skills or even story-telling skills. If you look at the book next door, the competition is about survival ability, and you can't even copy it well. A common problem among studio writers: writing independently, relying on what you want to write.

Don't she look good with her teeth?

Yahuazi

I feel like it started to collapse after charging. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It's so embarrassing. The interaction is very much like a brain-twisting youth drama. Secondly, the two groups of three female celebrities like the protagonist. Why? Handsome than Hu Ge? Are you more talented than milk tea? Still in better shape than Wu Jing.

It's uncomfortable. I suddenly couldn't stand it anymore halfway through watching it. Why did it suddenly lead to a harem? Don't understand😰😰

Sissi

The protagonist participates in the second season of the survival show, and the author keeps suppressing the protagonist's abilities. It's really awkward to watch! Grandmaster-level martial arts, strength and physical strength beyond the limits of the human body! His performance is inferior to that of a rural man! It's so oppressive!

This protagonist's strength exceeds the limit of the human body. It's so rubbish! How hard is it to pick something weighing 300 kilograms? Unfortunately, the author also said that the protagonist is extremely powerful, is that all? We know that when rice is harvested in rural areas, any strong man can pick up 3-400 kilograms of rice and walk several miles of mountain roads home, and not just in one trip! The protagonist's power beyond the limits of the human body shows that even rural men cannot compare! It's too poisonous!

Small thoughts: First, can the names of celebrities be more normal? Yahuazi, Tietie, etc. Made me confused, so I went to Baidu. And these names are so ridiculous. Can you make them up randomly, or make them homophonic? Now I still can't figure out who they are and can't watch them anymore. The second question is whether your wilderness survival progress is a bit too slow. There is an ancient book called "Return to the Valley to Farm". People can survive on an island without any plug-ins. They start with a knife. After a month, they have a house and live a self-sufficient life.