What Evil Intentions Could an NPC Like Me Have?

In fact, the writing was quite good at the beginning, but later I didn't know how to figure it out. If a reborn author doesn't write well, it will be very easy to collapse. I can only keep it for now.

Don't you think it's very confusing? Didn't the protagonist travel through time? In the end, he's just like a country bumpkin and doesn't understand anything. And you're making a reborn person, which makes it even more confusing. (The words written in the front and the words written in the back are as if they were written by different people)

The problem with combat power is huge. From the description, it doesn't look like a skill like Astral Arrival can be used by novices. The protagonist does things a bit inexplicably. If I remember correctly, he can only gain experience from those who have inherited their professions here. So why should it be set up as a lottery or something? Wouldn't it be great to just announce the hidden professions and let players collect materials to find themselves and change professions? During the monster siege, one of the two brats attacked the friendly side during the war, and the other evacuated the defense line privately, causing the defense line to collapse. They could have been shot wherever they were, and the villagers actually felt disgusted and rejected because the protagonist knocked them unconscious. It was too xenophobic The protagonist only needs 30% of the monster loot, and 60% should be handed over to the village. It is not clear whether it is the protagonist who killed it himself or 30% of all monsters. If it is the latter, I think it is okay, the former is too bad and a good person

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It looked fine before, but I saw other reborn people frowning, and then I saw a reincarnated one. I didn't know what to write. I withdrew

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I think the writing is very messy, like a piece of work that comes out of an assembly line.

It was confusing to read, and the target group was unclear. I wrote about leeks and then about individuals. Personally, I don't see anything else except the word count of water. You write about a sandbox player. It's okay to write about leeks, but the word count hasn't even started yet.

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